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Wonderful update manisha di . really loved it soo much,it was so emotional really it bought tears in my eyes. Really waiting for see why trisha is doing this, Pls do update soon
Originally posted by: Tasha1994
Awesome update Manisha. Really loved It a lot .you are truly amazing dear .really loved how you have showed Raghavs and Trishas feeling. Really loved the flash back scene soo much .now everything is clear .The Cbi team is going to be dissolved because chief is missing for long time.Raghav making courage and confessing his love for Trisha . But trisha said she considers him only as a friend and doesn't love him .I think there's some reason for her such behavior and marrying someone else. Hope all gets well soon .really you have written the scene between raghav and Dr kamat soo well .well said my Dr kamat that Drinking is not the solution to any problem . Loved how u have written Raghavs state .currently he has lost everything. Really I could feel his sadness.thanks for this awesome update. Waiting for the next to see what made trisha leave raghav though she loves him .thanks for this update. Really loved It soo much
Originally posted by: babita..
Too sad to know the past and now the present is quite suspicious !
Loved the update Di 👏👏Could see the gloom in every eye once the news of all of them getting separated came ! They had no choice only to move on and this is what Trisha did as her first move. Raghav's confession was cool but Trisha's behavior was the worst and full of doubts. I believe that she was faking and there was so much behind her marriage.Felt too bad over Raghav's plight and his days gone in bottles. But thanks to Dr. Kamath who took him out of his shell and made him realize what he has to do for his father's death. The revenge.Trisha coming and meeting and hugging Raghav -- this all left Raghav in a thought of what made her marrying and going to US. Is there any relation with Vidushak ??I can't see Raghav in tears, but nothing else was there to look for. Felt bad but at the same time looking forward to what Raghav will come out with. He is a man who comes to know from the face of a person, then what lies are there that are still hidden from him in Trisha's case ?? 😳Awesome narrative di, loved it and cried with it 😳 For us, Raghav and Trisha are ONE and Trisha got married to someone else means Raghav has no right to tease, laugh with and love her anymore.Will wait for more to be revealed. Thanks a lot for this twist, this was unique in its' own aura and i loved your style to shook us this much !😉Huggies di. and loves 🤗
Awesome update manisha, really very curious to know what will happen next, do update soon
Originally posted by: bawaswift
Jo humne daastan apni sunayi... aap kyun roye...
Raghav has felt the rejection... so painful n so full of misery...He has seen his love smiling in the company of her beau n he cud do just nothing... !Sad once again... but loved the narration Manisha that made us watch the episode in front of us... ⭐️👏Raghav cud not find the reason... n so does Rajbir...Trisha got married to the man... n now for U. S... Is she sacrificing herself for raghav's happiness or something that can help him reach his enemy... ??/Felt very sad for raghav as well as for Trisha... She is so much in love with him... n knows how he will get shattered n has come to pacify him... but will this ever help... ?//A shattered Raghav... a not so happy but looking happy Trisha.. n a world unknown to her reason to say NO to her love n her passion n her light of life... !What Raghav has not get here is the sheer truth... i wish he gets some clue.. n ... 😳Waiting for more... give your take Manisha... loving the mysterious track ever... 👏Thanks n God bless dear... 😊
Originally posted by: Swatishubh
What Raghav told Rajbir, is so heart wrenching for your every reader Manisha!
Loved the update, though so sad for everyone 👏Raghav is upset with what happened with him and Rajbir has no clue of why Trisha rejected his proposal. He is suffering, he is sad, and he is not in his own. Going into the drink, he lost himself and gave up everything to make the life hell for himself.Thanks to Dr. Kamath who gripped him for what he is meant to and what he is doing to himself. Totally coming out of the oblivion and Trisha is right there with her hubby to see him. What a co incidence - he wants to forget everything and her, and she is there with love in her eyes to tell him to forget and forgive her. I loved the embrace, but it was not the same, though Raghav felt the love of her for him.He is judging out or not, but something is definitely there that's the reason of her marriage and going to U.S. His future is unknown to him and so is Trisha's. I wish his super mind comes to an answer to his questions and he takes the truth out.Lovely narration, good impact and a wonderful write Manisha, thanks dear!⭐️⭐️Luv ya ❤️🤗
Originally posted by: Desaitara1234
Wonderful update manisha di . really loved it soo much,it was so emotional really it bought tears in my eyes. Really waiting for see why trisha is doing this, Pls do update soon
He tried to concentrate on his work from now on...all of them were finalising their work as only few days were left for them in the cbi here. He was also attending his appointments with Dr Kamath regularly and he was trying to come back to his normal self but somewhere inside his heart, he knew it was not possible for him to forget his first and last love of his life...Trisha. Once in evening, he had some pending work so he had cancelled his appointment with the doctor; but he managed to finish his work before time so he decided to go and meet the doctor. When he was about to enter his room (today Dr. Kamath's personal assistant was on leave, so he straight away entered his room. He always had this liberty from Dr Kamath who cared for him and considered him like his own son), he heard him talking to someone on phone and he was surprised with what he heard.
Dr Kamath: haan jaisa tumne kaha tha, main bilkul waisa hi kar raha hu Trisha. Tum uski bilkul chinta mat karo, bas apna khayal rakho. I'm there with him, he will be alright...ok you just take care. I'll never let him know anything, I promise...
Raghav entered his room after he finished with the call. Dr Kamath was shocked to see Raghav suddenly, he thought he won't be coming today as he had already cancelled his appointment. He just wished Raghav did not hear his conversation with Trisha, but the expressions on his face clearly suggested that he had heard him talking.
Dr Kamath: arey Raghav, tum yahan? Tum to aaj nahi aane wale the...
Raghav: aaj pehli baar aapki aawaaz kaanp rahi hai doc...kya chhupa rahe hain mujhse?
Dr Kamath: main...nahi to...main kyun tumse kuch chhupaunga? Aisa kuch nahi hai...
Raghav: aap mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakte doc...aap Trisha se baat kar rahe the, suna maine...ab sach kya hai aap mujhe batayenge. Aap jante hai na Trisha ne mere saath wo sab kyun kiya...jante hai na? He was so stern in front of him for the first time...he had never seen him talking to him like this before. Dr Kamath understood that now there was no point in hiding now and he decided to reveal the entire truth now.
Flashback:
Around 1 month back, Dr Kamath's clinic...his PA calls him and tells that there is a lady named Trisha Dewan who has come to talk to him about Raghav and he tells her to send Trisha inside. He knew Trisha by name as he had heard Raghav talk about her many times during his appointments. Trisha entered his room, she looked quite upset.
Trisha: good evening doctor, I'm Trisha Dewan...Raghav's colleague...
Dr Kamath: yes I know you by name, Raghav bahut baat karta hai tumhare baare mein. Aaj yahan kaise aana hua, is everything alright?
Trisha: I need your help doctor, for Raghav's sake...
Dr Kamath: kyun, kya hua Raghav ko?
Trisha: use kuch nahi hua doctor but soon he is going to need your help, especially after what I'm going to do with him...
Dr Kamath (surprised): aisa kya karne wali ho tum Trisha?
Trisha: doctor (with a deep sigh), you and me both of us know what Raghav feels for me, but I can't accept his love in my life at any cost. I'm about to get married to someone else in few days.
Dr Kamath: to tum mujhe yeh bataane aayi ho ki Raghav jo tumse deewano ki tarah pyar karta hai, tum uska pyar thukra kar kisi aur se shaadi karne wali ho? (angrily)
Trisha: aap please meri poori baat suniye, main aapko sab samjhati hu, she sounded very upset.
Dr Kamath calmed down a bit and started listening to her without interrupting her.
Trisha continued..doctor meri shaadi sirf ek natak hogi jisse Raghav muhjse nafrat karne lage aur mujhe bhool sake. Main yeh natak sirf uske liye kar rahi hu, iske sivay aur koi raasta nahi hai, mere paas waqt nahi hai doctor; please try and understand I want to prevent him from the pain of losing me. He has always lost everyone he has ever loved. Ab agar usne mujhe kho diya to is baar wo toot jayega aur phir aap bhi use sambhaal nahi payenge. That's why I want him to hate me so that he can move ahead in his life. I can't see him breaking down for me...so this shock is needed for him so that he can forget me.
Dr Kamath: whats the matter Trisha, one thing is for sure that you too love him a lot; that's why you are here asking for my help. Then what is it that has made you take such a step? Why can't you accept his love so that both of you can live together happily.
Trisha had tears in her eyes and she said doctor I have ovarian cancer, I have to go to U.S for surgery. My uncle is there and my friend Dr Samrat is an oncosurgeon there. He is a part of my plan and he will be acting as my husband in front of Raghav.
Dr Kamath was shocked to hear this, he couldn't believe what he just now heard. He asked her to calm down and stop crying and gave her some water. He asked her when did she come to know about this. She told him about the symptoms she was having and then after proper evaluation and investigations, she was diagnosed with ovarian carcinoma and that she needed chemotherapy and surgery. Her and Dr Samrat's family are family friends so they talked to him and then decided to go to US for further treatment.
Dr Kamath: what about the other team members, you are the team leader Trisha?
Trisha: I had contacted the authorities for my resignation, they have told us that they would dissolve our team if I'm not a part of this team. They don't want to continue with our team if me and chief both are not there. I tried that they make Raghav as the team leader but they refused as according to them Raghav is too emotional and impulsive...they can't take this chance with him as the leader. So I've told everyone that our team is dispersing in some time.
Dr Kamath: but why are you thinking so negative Trisha? You might get cured of your cancer by surgery and chemotherapy...there are so many advanced treatments available nowadays, why don't you give yourself a chance?
Trisha: no doctor, main uski aankhon mein khud ko khone ka dar nahi dekh sakti...har pal is dar ke saath rehne se better hai ki wo mujhse nafrat kare aur main usi nafrat ke saath is duniya se chali jaau. Agar main theek ho gayi to bhi mujhe Samrat ne bataya hai ki he is not sure whether I would be able to conceive ever in future or not. You know how much he loves kids...so... Maine decide kiya hai ki main saari life uski yaadon ke saath reh lungi. I'll never have anyone except him in my life doctor, but I can't let him live with this pain of seeing me die in front of his eyes and bear this pain for his entire life all over again...he has already lost so much in his life...now no more. I'm ready to bear this pain myself for him throughout my life doctor, but can't give him any more pains... I need your help.
Dr Kamath: aur jo dard tum ab use dogi...uska kya? Tumne socha hai ki yeh jaankar ki tumhari shaadi kisi aur ke saath ho rahi hai uspar kya beetegi? Think about it Trisha...
Trisha: no doctor maine soch liya hai, I can't tell him the truth...
Dr Kamath: kya chahti ho mujhse?
Trisha: aap use sambhaal lena doctor, wo yeh dukh seh nahi payega...use aap hi isse bahar la sakte hain...wo aapko bahut manta hai. Aapko use mere liye hatred ke saath jeena sikhana hoga doctor, please for his sake...you have to do this.
Dr Kamath: I don't want to do this, but seeing your love for him...i'll do as you want me to...but please I would request you to give it a second thought. Its not going to be easy for you, will you be able to handle it yourself?
Trisha: I know doctor its not easy, but I have to do it for his sake. Thanks a lot doctor for your support. Aapne meri bahut badi tension door kar di. Ab main aaram se India aur is duniya se ja sakti hu agar mujhe jaana pada to...i'll take your leave now please and she left his clinic.
Flashback ended...
Raghav was stunned to hear all this. He couldn't believe that Trisha loved him so much that she didn't even inform him about her illness and was going through everything alone. He cursed himself for behaving so rudely with her and slapping her. He was not there with her when she needed him the most. He took the details of the hospital in which she was being treated and decided to go to US as soon as possible. He told the other team members also about all this and they too were shocked to know this. They were very disappointed to realise that she didn't consider them as their own and didn't reveal anything about her illness to anyone.
But they understood her love for Raghav behind all this and appreciated his decision to go and meet her immediately in the hospital. Raghav booked the ticket to US by earliest flight possible while the others decided to go and talk to the authorities about her malignancy and to get her medical leave sanctioned. They decided to give it a try so that the team's dissolution could be held for sometime as the final official orders were not yet out.
This is in this part...I was too nervous while writing this part...please this is just a piece of fiction that came to my mind and i decided to write on this theme...i haven't given too many medical terms and details and most of you won't be aware of those terms...so i tried to make it simple...please don't kill me for writing this...i hope you would accept this truth although i know its difficult to accept...first time i have included a medical theme in my story...
Please provide your valuable opinions...good or bad whatever you feel...hopefully I'll cover up in the next part...that should hopefully be the last part of this story...Loves to all of you...I'm really nervous while posting this one..
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