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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Wao Manisha.. It's really awsm... Love this update a lot... So Trisha have Cancer... So she tried to went far from Raghav... She s not married and loves him still... Hope Trisha will be alright... Getting very tenssed for her... Love the reunion part most... Tears was flowing from my eyes during reading it... Love the story from depth of my heart... Tnx fr such a emotional story... Love you a lot dear...


Thanks a lot Shaina for your words full of appreciation...i'm glad you liked it...πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome update Manisha. Really loved It a lot. So finally Ratri have confessed their love for each other. Loved how raghav told Trisha that now No one can separate them and even God Will have to bow in front of their love. Loved how Trisha called raghavs name in sleep and raghav witnessed that. This scene was soo awesome .loved how raghav and Trisha talked with the team .wish now everything with trisha gets fine and she recovers quickly. Loved ti see Raghavs scolding trisha for not telling him everything and bearing everything alone. The conversation of Dr samrat and raghav was soo awesome Dr samrat telling Raghav how much Trisha loves him and raghav blaming himself and Dr samrat telling him not to blame himself. Thanks soo much for The awesome update dear. Really loved a lot



Thanks a lot dear for liking the update...really it means a lot to me...i hope i can meet upto your expectations in my next part also...i'll try to update soon dear..i haven't started writing it till now...keeping busy bcoz of festivals ..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice caps Bro..really awesome⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Bro, What pics to the update πŸ‘πŸ‘ Wow !!!

⭐️⭐️


I totally agree to you sweetieπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Manisha di πŸ€—

I love you, ye toh you know. But i love you more for this super duper update πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘
I know sweetheart...πŸ€—...really you liked it...i'm floored dearieπŸ˜›


Loved it how Raghav took the charge of everything and changed the scenario from what Trisha planned ⭐️⭐️
Awesome, too good !!!
Thanks dear...πŸ€—

Raghav sending her parents for rest, taking her care, witnessing the sleep of his love and listening her whispering his name RAGHAV in her sleep, this was so so magical di
Loved how he daanto her. You have pen down exactly the way i wanted it to be. πŸ‘
Loved him daanto less and advising more. Loved her listening to his daant and taking as his love for her. What a loving Love Confession ❀️❀️
So beautifully picturized !!!

Thanks a lot sweetie for liking it...i'm glad you liked it as i had changed my storyline to fulfil your wishπŸ€—
I'm so happy todayπŸ˜ƒ

Loved his words of letting God bowing in front of their pure love !!!
The team talked her and all sorted out, though they are sad, but happy that raghav is there for her. Well presented πŸ‘πŸ‘
Loved to see raghav claiming and getting relieved to reach there on time and settled everything. Loved him saying that " otherwise he wouldn't be able to forgive himself ever for this."

Just loved the way all that has happened di πŸ‘ In love with your write ups, as always. Now waiting for the efforts Raghav will put in Trisha to get well soon, if she is able to.
Thanks di with lots of huggies, only for U πŸ€—

Thanks a lot many many times...can't thank you enough...everπŸ€—

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Wo sach hi kya jo in sahab se chup jaye and what a tremendous way Manisha di to portray his image, making everything settled and got his love in the form of Trisha πŸ‘πŸ‘

Raghav Rocks !!!



Really Raghav and more so our RaTri rocksπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

awesome update Manisha di. so finally raghav Trisha met and confessed their love for each other. thanks you soo much for the awesome update .


Thanks a lot Tara😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
LAST PART

After some time her parents came back and felt very relieved to see their daughter with Raghav...they had waited for this day since such a long time. They always wanted Trisha to get married to him but because of her illness, they felt as if this dream of theirs would never materialize ever for her. Raghav was taking care of Trisha every minute from now onwards. He used to be with her like her own shadow and kept her busy with himself...never did he let her think about her illness...he was her strength and she felt complete in his company. He never left her alone except when she used to sleep, her parents used to send him to have some rest. After few days that day arrived when she was supposed to be operated. After her routine investigations and preanaesthetic check up, she was supposed to be given mild sedation and anti anxiety medications which the anaesthetist explained to her. But she denied any kind of sedation for herself as she wanted to be with Raghav till the very end moment before going to the OT. The doctors agreed to this when Dr Samrat explained it to him about both of them.

The hospital staff came to take her for surgery. Trisha looked at Raghav helplessly as if he was the only ray of hope for her in this deep ocean of sorrows. He understood her state and gave her a tight hug. Trisha had few tears drop down from her eyes which he wiped off.

Trisha : mujhe mat bhejo Raghav, agar main wapas nahi aayi to?

Raghav: tum aisa kyun soch rahi ho? Maine kaha na tumhe kuch nahi hoga...Bhagwaan ko bhi humare pyar ke aage jhukna hoga...tum bas himmat rakho...samjhi...tum jaao main tumhara bahar intezaar kar raha hu...fir hum dono ghar wapas chalenge...ok...tum jaldi se theek hokar mere paas aa jaaogi...mujhe pata hai...and he gave her a smile.

Trisha was being taken to the OT on the stretcher and she was holding Raghav's hand and he was consoling her that everything would be ok and that she need not worry...he is with her whatever may be the situation. As she was about to enter the OT, her hand slipped from his hand and she was taken inside...Raghav kept on standing there still with his hand still stretched out as if waiting for her to come back and hold his hand once again. Trisha's father came upto him and kept his hand on his shoulder to bring him out of his stupor. Raghav had tears in his eyes too and all of them waited outside for the surgery to be completed.

The surgery lasted for around 5 hours and after that Dr Samrat came out and told them that the surgery had been successful...but she won't be able to conceive in future...everyone was shocked to hear this but somehow composed themselves. Samrat also told them Trisha was fine but because this was a major surgery, she was being kept in ICU for observation for 2 days...all of them were relieved to know that atleast she was out of danger now.

They were allowed to see her one by one in the ICU but as she was still under the effect of sedation, they were not allowed to talk to her. After 2 days she was shifted to the room and then they were allowed to be with her. Raghav knew that its going to be a hard time for her when she would know that she won't be able to conceive in future. But all of them decided that Raghav was the one who would tell her and that too later...not now. When she saw her family with her, she was very relieved and had a slight smile on her face.

Trisha's father: ab kaisa lag raha hai my princess?

Trisha by her signalling told him that she was alright. They all knew that she was very weak right now and she needs rest. Her parents left her with Raghav after being with her for sometime.

Raghav: maine kaha tha na tumhe kuch nahi hoga...dekha main theek tha na...

Trisha(softly) : tum galat hote hi kab ho? And had a slight smile with a few tears in her eyes...tumhe pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi?

Raghav : aur main bhi...ab tum zyada baat mat karo, tumhe aaram karna chahiye...tum so jaao main tumhare paas hi hu.

He made sure that she had good rest so that she recovers fast. Dr Samrat along with her usual medications also completed her due chemotherapy cycles and in a few weeks time, she was about to be discharged. Dr Samrat told him that she was supposed to be on follow up regularly and they can't be lenient with her health now. But she can resume her work in some days and that is not going to be a problem for her.

It was her last night in the hospital and the next day, she was supposed to be discharged. Trisha again asked him about her future conception...the answer to this question all of them had been avoiding since these many days. Raghav understood that now it's the time that he should tell her the truth and he revealed whatever Samrat had told him.

Trisha although had some idea about this seeing the way everyone was avoiding this question...but still she being a girl...couldn't control her tears and she burst out crying. Raghav took her in his arms and tried to pacify her.

Trisha: tum India jaakar kisi aur ladki se shaadi kar lena...tum kyun mere saath apni zindagi...

Raghav (interrupting her): kya kaha tumne? Kisi aur ladki se...tumne yeh soch bhi kaise liya Trisha? Tumhe pata hai na tum mere liye kya ho...fir bhi tumne...sirf isliye ki tum kabhi...tum chahti ho ki main tumhare liye apne pyaar ko bhula du...no Trisha...is janam mein to yeh possible nahi hai...agar tum chahti ho ki main tumhari ichha poori karoon to mujhe doosra janam lena padega...aur uske liye mujhe apni life abhi...

Trisha placed her palm on his mouth and prevented him from completing what he intended to say. Both of them knew what they meant to each other and that they were made for each other. Raghav managed to convince her that they would get married once she recovers fully after reaching India. The next day she was discharged and they all flew to India. The entire team was waiting at the airport for their welcome, they took them to her home. After such a long time Trisha was back to her home with her family and Raghav. The entire team was with them today and they had all forgotten their grievances which had been cleared earlier itself.

Rajbir and Bikram made them laugh with their usual pranks and Swati helped Trisha's mother in preparing dinner for all of them. They all had dinner together and after that left from there. Trisha's health was showing steady improvement and in around 2 weeks, she was fit to resume her duties. Raghav had been in constant touch with the higher authorities and had been regularly updating them about her health status. She was supposed to join back her duty from today. After breakfast, Raghav came to pick her up and took her to office. When they both entered the office, the rest of the team members were waiting in the office for their welcome.

They had arranged a small party for them in view of all of them coming back to the office together after such a long time. Raghav made her sit on the chief's chair with the orders from the higher authorities regarding Trisha being appointed as the new director in his absence. Trisha was very happy today and felt as if she had got everything in her life...her life, her job and RAGHAV...who was more than anything else for her...

As they didn't have much work today, all of them left early from the office today. When Trisha and Raghav reached home, they saw her parents in conversation with a purohit who had been their family purohit since a long time. He after going through their kundalis, told them that one month later a date was very auspicious for their marriage. Her parents happily agreed and congratulated Raghav and Trisha for their future wedding. Finally after facing so many hurdles, the two who were made for each other had come together and were about to be united in the bond of marriage after few days. They were very happy today.


THE END...

Hope you all like it...please forgive me for any mistakes ...which i know are there...loves to everyone..πŸ€—

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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for the update Manisha di off to read it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hope you all like it...please forgive me for any mistakes ...which i know are there...loves to everyone..πŸ€—

Like ?? I just loved and adored it Manisha di πŸ‘πŸ‘ Such a loving update with a superb finish to a sweet story !!!! ⭐️⭐️
Loved the moment when Raghav was still standing outside the OT and felt for Trsiha to come back to him and hold him !
Loved the moment when her father asked how his princess is !!! Loved the moment when upon learning the truth, Trisha asked him to move on and he said for that he has to take another janam and for that he has to... and she put her palm on his face, not to speak up the devastating sentence !
Loved the moments of reaching home, Trisha getting to sit on her Chair, and finally they saw purohit announcing the date of their marriage !!!
Like them, me too very happy today Di ! RaTri who are meant for each other, have got each other and their love is eternal, unconditional and full of love ! I liked the way the story got ended, but feelign bad that it ended.
Loves to U di, for the lovely story, so unique and so thoughtful and full of love expressed, with no hurdles anymore πŸ€—
Beautiful update and getting a Diwali gift from you, love you and thank you di, huggies ❀️
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