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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Az07

Part 1.

A very emotional beginning
A broken Raghav who needs someone for emotional support
Trisha's marriage & vidhushak incident had created havoc in him such a way that he had addicted to alcoholism
Trisha is too shocked to see Raghav in this state
Raghav's proximity made her anxious which shows her state of mind. She is not happy with her marriage because she loves Raghav
That Slap shocked not only Trisha but the entire team too
Even Raghav himself was ashamed of his act
You have managed to create the curiosity in readers
Loved the teem bonding too



Thanks a lot Uma for your lovely review...I'm so glad that i could generate curiosity for the further parts...
I'm so glad dear that your grandma is fine now...
Thanks once again and take care dear
Loves to you❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Az07

Part 2

FB! So the special team is getting diapered because of cheif's absence
Everyone is hurt shows there bonding they are a family now don't want to separate themselves from each other.
Raghav is scared of losing his Trisha. Her decision to resign CBI shocked everyone as they knew her love & dedication for her job!
After a lot of emotional turmoil he admits that he loves Trisha & finally proposes her but shocking him Trisha rejects him.
Raghav is too broken by her decision to get married to Samrat
Rajbir doesn't know how to console Raghav
Trisha's goodbye to Raghav was emotional suspicious too as she hugged him as if her life depends on Raghav making Raghav suspicious
Dr. Kamath an important character in raghav's life forgotten in show; comes to save Raghav from his habit to addiction to alcohol


Thanks Uma for your lovely and emotional review...both of them love each other but cant confess and the situations are making Raghav confused as he has never been wrong in reading someone's body language...so how could this happen in case of Trisha whom he loves madly...
Ya Dr Kamath is a very important character in Raghav's life and the show doesnt give him much importance...😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Az07

I am sorry for the delay
Hope I didn't miss out anything in my comments


Its absolutely ok Uma...we all know what you were going through...we are totally with you...Loves to you dear...❤️🤗
No dear you didn't miss out on anything...loved your reviews sweetie😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Such a emotional update manisha di really loved it soo much,


Thanks a lot dear Tara😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

PART 4


While the entire team managed to get the orders withheld, Raghav left for US to meet his Trisha. He just could not believe himself that Trisha loved him so much that she took such a decision just for his sake and not for once did she think what would happen when he comes to know about this truth. He reached the hospital and went to the room where Trisha was admitted. He knocked the door and entered inside; he saw her parents in the room while Trisha was asleep. He was so disheartened to see the state in which she was at this time, she was looking so weak and the charm on her face which made him fall for her had vanished due to her illness. He had tears in his eyes seeing her like this and her parents asked him to come outside as they didn't want her sleep to be disturbed. He agreed to their request as he too had so many things to be clarified. After discussing with her parents about her recent health status, he expressed his wish to meet Dr Samrat as he was the one who was involved in her treatment along with being a part of Trisha's plans. He realised that it was not the right time to discuss about Trisha faking her marriage etc with her parents as they already were so very disturbed. He went to meet him in his room and Dr Samrat was surprised to see him here.

Dr Samrat: Hello Mr. Raghav...you here?

Raghav: ya ...me here...surprised to see me here...isn't it? After whatever plan you both had...or rather I should say she had with you...

Dr Samrat: so you know?

Raghav told him about how he came to know about the truth from Dr. Kamath and Dr Samrat understood that now there was no point in hiding anything and he will have to clarify his point of view as Raghav deserves to know.

Dr Samrat: Raghav I would like to tell you that I was never in favour of Trisha taking such a step but when I understood the depth of her love for you, I had to bow down in front of her. She was having her symptoms for quite some time but she was ignoring them because of her hectic schedule. Once when we were together in a family get together I realised that there is something that she is hiding. On my insistence, she told me and then I got her investigated and then we came to know that she is suffering from Ovarian cancer. This was just few days after that incident which shook your entire team. She was shattered when she came to know about this and wanted to tell you as she considered you as your soulmate in such a situation.

But when she went to your house, she found you in such an emotional turmoil that she couldn't gather the courage to tell you and she came to meet me with this plan. I tried a lot to convince her that she should give herself a chance but she was stern in her decision that she could not tell you in any situation. I was getting married to my fiance Priya in few weeks, so just for you and the rest of your team we planned all that. Trisha was supposed to meet you all in bridal get up and Priya would later come with her face totally covered. But you all left before all that so we had no such problem in our marriage that day. But Trisha, it was a real hard task for her parents to console her that day after you slapped her and left. Trisha did that just for you and she knew that this is what she wanted...that you hate her...but after all she is a girl who loves you with all her heart and was suffering from a serious illness and she needed your support.

But really Raghav your Trisha is a real brave girl...the way she is handling her illness and at the same time she takes care that her parents don't become weak seeing her ill. So she is always smiling for them and never has she talked to me about you since the time she has come here. But I know how badly she is missing you, many times I have seen tears in her eyes in isolation but she never says anything even if I ask her.

Raghav: she has been suffering so much just because of me...I won't be able to forgive myself for this.

Dr Samrat: Raghav...I think this is not the time to blame yourself...its the time when you both have to forget about the past and support each other through this difficult time; especially Trisha. We plan to operate her by this weekend after finishing her chemotherapy sessions...lets hope for the best, I'm keeping my fingers crossed...she is my very close friend and a person with a beautiful heart...I'll do whatever best is possible from my side...I assure you...till then I just request you to be with her and be her strength.

Raghav thanked him for whatever he had been doing for Trisha and left his room and went back to meet Trisha hoping that she would be awake by now. He had asked her parents not to tell her about his arrival and he wanted to let her know only when she herself sees him. He found her still in a light sleep and he sat close to her without disturbing her. He asked her parents to leave as he was there to take care of her. They resisted but he sent them as they too needed some rest. They both agreed as they understood that Raghav and Trisha needed some time in isolation so that they can talk to each other.

Trisha came out of her sleep and the first thing she said before opening her eyes was...do you need to guess?..." RAGHAV" he became so emotional to see that she called out his name in her sleep also. When she was fully awake, he supported her and made her sit up.

Raghav: bina kisi ke bataye tumhe pata chal hi gaya na ki main aaya hu...kaise boss? Kahin aisa to nahi ki aapko meri aadat ho gayi hai?

Trisha: tum yahan kyun aaye Raghav? tumhe yahan nahi aana chaiye tha...maine Dr Kamath ko mana kiya tha...lekin unhone meri baat nahi maani...unhone mujhse promise kiya tha aur...(she had understood seeing him that he knew everything and definitely Dr Kamath must have told him).

Raghav: shut up...just shut up Trisha...(Raghav interrupted her)...itna sab kuch ho gaya tumhare saath aur tumne mujhe kuch bhi batana zaroori nahi samjha? Kya laga tumhe ki agar mujhe yeh sab pata chal gaya to main bikhar jaaunga...yehi socha tha na? par kya tumne ek baar bhi yeh socha ki jab mujhe yeh pata chalega ki tumhare saath kya kya ho gaya aur tumne mujhse sab kuch chhupaya...to mujh par kya beetegi? Ek baar bhi nahi socha na tumne...agar tumhe kuch bhi ho jaata to main...pata nahi main kya karta...tumne mujhe bahut hurt kiya Trisha...I never expected this from you...I'm really hurt with whatever you did...

Trisha: Raghav...

Raghav: kya Raghav? bolo kya Raghav...kitne saalon se hum saath kaam kar rahe hain...pyaar na sahi dosti ka rishta to tha na humaare beech...maine tumhe humesha apna sabse achha dost samjha...tumhe sab kuch bataya apne baare me...wo tum hi thi jiski wajah se main us haadse ko bhula paaya...agar tum nahi hoti to pata nahi kya hota...aur jab tumhari baari aayi to sab kuch chhupa kar akele sab kuch sehti rahi...ek baar bhi tumne apne is dost pe trust nahi kiya...kya mujhe koi haq nahi tha ki jab mere dost ko meri zaroorat thi to mai uska saath de paata...bolo Trisha bolo...please tell me why did you do this to me?

Trisha: because I love you Raghav...main dar gayi thi...itni mushkil se tum us haadse ke baad sambhle the...ab agar tumhe mere baare me yeh sab pata chalta to kya hota...i really got scared Raghav...I'm sorry...and she started sobbing...

Raghav got up and sat close to her, wiped her tears and took her hands in his own...

Raghav: Trisha tumhe pata hai jabse tumhe dekha hai, bas tumse hi pyar kiya hai...apni zindagi ka har pal, achha ya bura tumhare saath bitaana chahta tha par jab us din tumne mujhe mana kar diya to main jaise toot gaya tha...samajh hi nahi paa raha tha ki kya karu...tumne jaise react kiya, I couldn't believe myself...i knew there was something which you were hiding...after all wo sach hi kya jo mujhse chhup jaaye...he said with a smile on his face and tears in his eyes.

Trisha too had a slight smile on her face and she said "I love you Raghav...you and only you...I'm so sorry...please mujhe maaf kar do"

Raghav: nahi Trisha...tumhe sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai...mujhe pata hai ki tumne jo kuch bhi kiya, uske peeche mere liye sirf tumhara pyaar hai...aur kuch nahi...bas mujhe dukh is baat ka hai ki jab tumhe meri sabse zyada zaroorat thi, main tumhare saath nahi tha...Trisha I just want to say that I love you the most in my life...aur tumhari life ka har pal tum mere saath bitaaogi...tumhe kuch nahi hoga...main tumhe khud se door jaane nahi dunga...dekhna...God ko humare pyar kea age jhukna hi hoga.

Both of them engaged in a hug after that and felt so complete for the first time in their life. He kissed her on her forehead and after that told her that they had withheld the orders from the authorities for some time till she recovers. He also told her how upset Rajbir, Bikram and Swati were when they came to know about all this. He arranged for a video call with his team and all of them had a long conversation...everyone expressed their despair as she didn't tell anything to anyone while they all shared such a close bond not as colleagues but as close friends. But after some time, everything got sorted out and they all wished her the best of health and that they are eagerly waiting for both of them to come back together and to work together as a team once again. Raghav was feeling so relieved as he was able to reach here in time...otherwise he wouldn't be able to forgive himself ever for this.


This much in this part...please provide your reviews...Babita i have tried to fulfil your wish in this part...i had not planned it to be as a daanto session but after reading your wish, i thought that let me do it like this...hope you would like it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
thanks for the manisha. off to read it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
just read the update Manisha .really loved it will review in detail till evening
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I got emotional with this Awesome update Manisha... 😃
Very sweet... very very delicate... n very loving... ⭐️👏
Raghav is with Trisha... taking care of her.,, her parents... n talking to her doc... So lovely of him...
The whole team talked.. n clear their matters with Trisha... beautifully presented... 👏
Sweetness in Trisha calling his name in sleep... n Raghav getting tears in his soul... ⭐️
Such an Awesome treatment of the story so far... i just loved it n got emotional when Raghav thanked his Luck that he reached their on time... or otherwise wud have never forgive himself.. !
Manisha... very cutely you have shown the love expressed... n the way Raghav held Trisha .. for all their life now... Too good... keep it up dear...
God bless you... !!!

I liked the little daanto part... it was necessary to show the closeness... n the love... ! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update Manisha. it is sooo awesome so finally Ratri are together and they confessed their love thanks u soo much for this awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
First of all thanks for the update in between Navratri
It was the best part of the story
Ratri meet was emotional. The best part was Trisha calling Raghav's name in her sleep.
I loved there confrontation. It was so touching. Also I liked Samrat's part too. He gave us more clear picture of trisha's situation. I hope the stress period ends soon & Ratri gets happiness back in there life.
Trisha was indeed brave even in such circumstances.
I liked the moment when they Skyped the team members. They too care for Trisha a lot like she does for them. Hope everything sorts out soon.
Update next part soon. Can't wait to c how story unfolds hereafter.
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