Tum bin! Ratri TS last part on pg 11 - Page 10

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

First sorry again for being late...

No problem take your time

It was nice to see a bonding between the team members, the way Raghav and Trisha were made to sit together intentionally by the other two team members... just shows how much they all love and care for each other... cute scene...

The team is like a family they can understand each other so well

Raghav again trying to irritate her but this time she is determined to not give in easily... ab thodi mehnat to karni padegi aur narazgi ko sehna padega... he knows she'll forgive him soon... she deserves this effort from him... after what he did to her...

She is a women with loads of self respect so he need to work hard

Lovely scene when he introduces her as Mrs Trisha Raghav Sinha... he knew she won't say anything now as they are undercover for a case..

Yes Raghav took advantage of the entire scenario

The room scene was well written by you... the way he kept on trying to irritate her and she making it very clear that they are a couple only outside the room... so sweet...

Raghav is trying his level best to pacify Trisha and she is trying her level best not to melt so soon this time

The candle light dinner... so romantic... he ordering her favourite meals... he obviously remembers each and every like and dislike of Trisha... after all he also was not happy to be away from her all these years. He was trying to apologise for leaving her like that and never expressed that it wasn't easy for him as well... she was his only soulmate in this world.. this is the beauty of their relationship... they feel for each other more than they feel for themselves...👏

It was not easy for him too. Fact is he can never forget her. She is a women who had touched his heart and soul

The way he narrated a story to her and she slept while listening to it... sooo cute... he must have been so relieved to see her sleep without those pills...❤️

Raghav wants her to come back to her normal life

Next morning Trisha thanking him for making her sleep without medication... she had waited for this day since 3 years... she must have been so relieved..

Indeed she was

The way they tried to interrogate each and every suspect and possibility was nice...i liked it a lot..

The room scene was lovely... both of them must have been shocked because of this unprecedented situation... but they handled it nicely...

Sometimes this do happen. I was very nervous writing this part.

The best part of your story was the way he took care of her when she was under alcohol effect... she brought out all that she had in her heart for so many years in her semiconscious state... all that she had been through... that could happen only like this... she would never open up easily when she is in her senses... such an introvert she is... he just listening to her and blaming himself for everything was so beautiful...👏🤗

As you said she would have never opened up herself. She need to have that heart to heart conversation with him

I liked the way he controlled his feelings and didn't take advantage of her situation... he would never do this with her... he however kissed her when he realised that she was feeling rejected just to pacify her and express his love for her... so romantic and very very mature...

He loves her and respect her truly he can never take advantage of her drunken state.

Trisha becoming anxious in the morning... expected considering the type of person she is...

Any girl in her position would be

The way the case was solved was great... there are such psycho people existing in this world... who would do anything to satisfy their ill psyche...

Unfortunately yes such people do exist

The terrace scene was lovely... he would never leave her now in any situation... come what may... she just wanted to test him and he made her very clear how much he loved her... the final confession had to come after all this...they both had been waiting for this since so many years...

He can never do that mistake leaving her alone. The late confession finally

Ps - i am very nervous while writing this story through out. I tried my level best to make it interesting. If you guys feel not dignified in some parts of the story i apologise in advance.

Please Uma don't be nervous... The way you presented each and every scene was so cute, romantic, full of emotions and absolutely dignified considering the beauty of their relationship and the turmoil they both went through all these years... YOU DON'T NEED TO APOLOGISE FOR ANYTHING... each and very part written by you is close to our heart... loved every bit of it...

Thanks a wonderful story once again

Thank you so much that really means a lot it motivates me

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Originally posted by: Tisa1

Awesome 👏👏

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Originally posted by: DEKER

hi ,i love ypur story it was amazing and the case was also very interesting 👏

i love the seen where raghav use to put trisha in his arms and the conversation after that,

trisha reveal all the emotions of her in front of him, raghav also had tears in his eyes...i love it

raghav love as well as he respect it was too good

👏👏👏 i just love your all story's whichever you written till now

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