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Posted: 8 years ago

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part 1 on page 7
part 2 on pg 11

Raghav was so nervous. After all he is going to meet Trisha and his teammates after 3 years. Obviously they will be angry for leaving them with out even a word. He was astonished as there was no body in office except for security guy.

Raghav: Trisha aur baki Saab log kahan hai?

Security: Sabhi log to Trisha mam ki ghar gayi. Aaj Shaadi hai na woh attend Karne gayi

Raghav was stunned. Trisha is getting married to someone else. He felt like he will faint at any moment. He just couldn't stop blaming himself it's all his fault. He never opened up his feelings for her and left just like that. He neither asked her to wait for him nor he tried to contact her ever in all these 3 years.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Interesting teaser. Really love it but please finish your current story first. I'm sure there is a long way to go in this story. Please update soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nice teaser. So Trisha is going to married someone else. Raghav had really gone fainted at the moment but he composed himself. First update your previous story as It is so romantic and I am dieing to read that and after that this one. Eagerly waiting for you update

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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Interesting teaser. Really love it but please finish your current story first. I'm sure there is a long way to go in this story. Please update soon.

Ya will update this one only after the other story finishes. Anyways this is only a one shot

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Originally posted by: 1973deepak
Nice teaser. So Trisha is going to married someone else. Raghav had really gone fainted at the moment but he composed himself. First update your previous story as It is so romantic and I am dieing to read that and after that this one. Eagerly waiting for you update

Indeed Raghav got the shock of his life

He had taken her for granted and left like that without even meeting her.

I will write this one only after other story finishes. This is just a small one shot not a big story

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Az07

Ya will update this one only after the other story finishes. Anyways this is only a one shot

Thank god finally a one shot. These parts make it very difficult to Wait. Curiosity se to band baj jati hai. Really waiting for this one.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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awesome teaser loved it soo much .raghav must have got a big shock after knowing trisha marrying someone else .thanks for this new os

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Az07

Indeed Raghav got the shock of his life
He had taken her for granted and left like that without even meeting her.
I will write this one only after other story finishes. This is just a small one shot not a big story

oh that's good at least no need to wait . please update the previous story.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Thank god finally a one shot. These parts make it very difficult to Wait. Curiosity se to band baj jati hai. Really waiting for this one.

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Originally posted by: Tasha1994
awesome teaser loved it soo much .raghav must have got a big shock after knowing trisha marrying someone else .thanks for this new os

Thank you
Raghav had got the biggest shock in his life Trisha marrying someone else

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