JalSena poem: My friend...my love...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Here I am with my new poem written on JalSena...as requested by you all...I wish this can slightly relieve all of us of the pain of losing our favorite show

In this poem I have tried to express how DS feels for Shivgam...her friend...who is gradually becoming her love😃
Hope I can do justice to her feelings

I know many of the members here had a problem with Hindi...so I have written my poem in English this time...hope you'll all like it😊

Please do read it and comment...I hope to see the activity continuing on the forum...

Here it goes😊





As the first ray of morning sun shines through the darkness of the night

The friendship we share makes me feel alive... your thoughts make my days bright

The bond I never happened to feel before... totally oblivious to this

It's the means of my existence now... the part of my every wish

Every step we took together... every goal that we achieved

I knew you were there this belief throughout made me relieved

Now that I look back into the days...the moments we spent together

Each moment has been precious...my heart is yet to gather

Whenever I think of you I find myself with my smiles

Your bravery your words your presence takes my heart somewhere across the miles

I wish our moments together never come to an end

No moment no day but my entire life with you to spend

My heart wishes and would do so forever

The bond of our friendship grows no matter whatsoever

My heart slowly makes me fall in love with you my friend

I wish a day for myself when you confess your love and I wont pretend


Hope you all liked it😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice n lovely poem written as DS' feelings for Shivgam... ⭐️👏
Nice portrayal of the friendship leading to love ... thats known to her... still she is unknown to that..
Very beautiful lines... sweet atmosphere.. n an Awesome effort Manisha... ⭐️⭐️

Keep the good flow going... God bless.. .!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful Poetry on JalSena yet once again Manisha 👏
So loved it!
Nice artist's impression, as the friendship is progressing towards love and it's obvious for both to fall in love and feel the ecstasy.
With pure depiction of truth in her wordings, i loved her confession, though it's to herself!

Rendering line :


I wish a day for myself when you confess your love and I wont pretend


It said everything ⭐️

Luv ya Sweetie, and thanks a lot! ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow wow wow another sweet lovely poem by u Manisha !
Just too awesome!
Thank u for sharing it with us yar👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks😃

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Thank you😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Very nice n lovely poem written as DS' feelings for Shivgam... ⭐️👏

Nice portrayal of the friendship leading to love ... thats known to her... still she is unknown to that..
Very beautiful lines... sweet atmosphere.. n an Awesome effort Manisha... ⭐️⭐️

Keep the good flow going... God bless.. .!!!


Thank you so much Bhaiya...I'm glad that you liked my poem😃
I just tried to express through my words how she feels for him...I'm glad that i could succeed😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Beautiful Poetry on JalSena yet once again Manisha 👏

So loved it!
Nice artist's impression, as the friendship is progressing towards love and it's obvious for both to fall in love and feel the ecstasy.
With pure depiction of truth in her wordings, i loved her confession, though it's to herself!

Rendering line :


I wish a day for myself when you confess your love and I wont pretend


It said everything ⭐️

Luv ya Sweetie, and thanks a lot! ❤️ 🤗


Thanks a lot Bhabhi for your appreciation and your motivation...I'm so much thankful to you for your love😃🤗
God bless you too🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia_prc

Wow wow wow another sweet lovely poem by u Manisha !

Just too awesome!
Thank u for sharing it with us yar👏


Thanks a lot Sonia...i hope you are feeling better now😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


Thanks a lot Sonia...i hope you are feeling better now😃


Don't ask me yaar what happened to me after last episode last night...
Right now trying to read good things here...n of crse ur lovely poem came to my rescue!😳😊
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