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[MEMBERSONLY]
WRITTEN UPDATE
Part 1
A man shows a man and says this is your house
and says I understood it before itself that you will
Like this house.And why did u suddenly shifted you house?
and the man who came to take the house says I liked this house
Before itself so I took.A man standing out says dont u undertand me
Alokh sir?I am watchman here.I think u have forgot me
Alokh-Who r u?How did u know my name?
watchman- I think you are joking .How will I forget you.
Alokh-Are u made ?I came here first time
(Many people standing out)
Alokh-What the hell.What is hapenning here
People-We are so happy to see you back.We thought after that
Incident did that happen to you also
Alokh-One minute.I dont know you.you all are coming to
Make friendship with me.I dont know you all and not only that
I have not seen you all before.Not dont disturb me go from here.
People:U have never talked to us in this way before.
How is Mohini.She was crying and searching for you
Alok:Now its so much please go from here
(At the room)
He was setting his house
Was thinking who will this Mohini be and blood falls on his hand
Then suddenly he see many starnge people gjosts! he runs out of the house
he see's ambulence and many dead people
A man shows a man and says this is your house
and says I understood it before itself that you will
Like this house.And why did u suddenly shifted you house?
and the man who came to take the house says I liked this house
Before itself so I took.A man standing out says dont u undertand me
Alokh sir?I am watchman here.I think u have forgot me
Alokh-Who r u?How did u know my name?
watchman- I think you are joking .How will I forget you.
Alokh-Are u made ?I came here first time
(Many people standing out)
Alokh-What the hell.What is hapenning here
People-We are so happy to see you back.We thought after that
Incident did that happen to you also
Alokh-One minute.I dont know you.you all are coming to
Make friendship with me.I dont know you all and not only that
I have not seen you all before.Not dont disturb me go from here.
People:U have never talked to us in this way before.
How is Mohini.She was crying and searching for you
Alok:Now its so much please go from here
(At the room)
He was setting his house
Was thinking who will this Mohini be and blood falls on his hand
Then suddenly he see many starnge people gjosts! he runs out of the house
he see's ambulence and many dead people
Part 2
Then he runs again back to his house.
There he see's someone sitting in a chair when he goes to see his face.he found himself but with a very scary face
Ghost-Dont be scared we both are different people .You are living
The life which I used to live before 3 year
Alokh-How can this be?You r telling lie.You want to kill me
Ghost-If I wanted to kill you I could kill you before itself
Your timming only will kill you as they killed me.
U can see all neighbours are seeing me on you.
Part 3
He runs and goes to knock all the doors
Finally a guy open the door.And asks why r u so tensed
Alokh-I am you new neighbour please helf me.
Neighbour-Come inside and sit please
Neighbour's wife (NB)-What happened?
Alokh-I am Alokh not the old one new alokh
But the old one died and I am new and I am alive
Neighbour-I cant understand what new and old
Alokh-Thank you sir.In the building next to u there is ghost
You wont belive.They tries to kill me
NB-u Mean they made your contiation like this but why?
Alokh-They tried to kill me also they talked with me through mirror
Finally a guy open the door.And asks why r u so tensed
Alokh-I am you new neighbour please helf me.
Neighbour-Come inside and sit please
Neighbour's wife (NB)-What happened?
Alokh-I am Alokh not the old one new alokh
But the old one died and I am new and I am alive
Neighbour-I cant understand what new and old
Alokh-Thank you sir.In the building next to u there is ghost
You wont belive.They tries to kill me
NB-u Mean they made your contiation like this but why?
Alokh-They tried to kill me also they talked with me through mirror
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