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My first attempt to PreRishโบ๏ธ๐๐ ๐. Also first attempt in writing a pregnancy announcement. ๐๐คฃ You see I have zero experience in this ๐๐คฃ heck I have seen such stuff over the internet and ITV only Also I have no clue absolutely ZERO idea on whatsoever have I have written.๐๐คฃ I know the characters dont match though I tried so much to keep the same ๐ but I failed. It's pathetic I know.
Also one of my friends wanted to write this down and she backed out so I did. ๐คฃ๐ I hope it was worth the wait for all waiting.๐ Thank you Sanu for proofreading it even when you were so sleepy. Any mistakes you know whom to blame ๐๐คฃ
Waise this HAS TO BE THE LONGEST OS THAT I HAVE EVER WRITTEN. ๐คฃ๐ Do let me know how it is
Comments (75)
such a great story, hope you write more prerish stories.
4 years ago
Mujhe pata bhi ni tha ankie u written a os....But very nice Os ankie... Loved the every bit of preRish their fighting nd their maturity Nd loved veena ji here....Anurag basu ko do char aur slap dene the...Pls write more...
4 years ago
Heellloooo Helloooooo Hope tum zinda hoo baki apne aap dekhlena Was stalking KZK2 forum and saw your name and i was suprised that this was not for a appreciation thread...so try maar liyaa and i am glad that i did..This was a very garam garam chasni mein dooba hua rashogulla type sweet OS...As i told u before also this story ka concept is also fiction and maybe we will never see anything like this happening on show for sure but it is nice to read and imagine them though...haa RB itna mellow nahi hoga even though he loves Pre and respects her mother but itna bhi sweet nahi banega woh for sure..Khair i really liked reading this part...But,I have few doubts Why will Veena Ji describe or think how good and sharp Mr.Bajaj is looking...it is bit weird like she is checking him out hahahha haa yeh agar Anoooooooooo Ki Maa karti toh i wouldn't have minded..\Next Bajaj roaming Bare feet in House.... is it inspired by that BTS video of Swiss Track..Last but not the least bahut acha likha hai..Keep writing and posting crazy pics of your Precious Cigar smoking , forever Lonely SHARK Bajaj.
5 years ago
It was absolutely beautiful and also it was quite different. I love the way you portrait PreRish journey through Veena eyes. I lost the count of times I read it. It was perfect from beginning till the end. I love that Mr Bajaj hitting Anurag for disrespecting Prerna. I love Mr Bajaj & Veena bond. Hopefully she'll accept in the show soon. Aww they are having a baby. The deal part was awesome & I'm glad she going to live with them. It time for a new start, in a new place, with new family member.
5 years ago
humpty ji ka OS and how did I even miss this ... so you wrote it a month back ,. aur pata bhi nahin... I can't wait to read this... weekend ke liye mil gaya
5 years ago
OS started with Veena. I like the past because it has nothing to do with Bajaj. Her young love is blind and failed all because of Anurag and his family's blame on her. RB entered in her life and eventually Sneha. So RB has a past with her father. I loved all the Sneha and Prerna scenes. I LOVED LOVED Veena-Bajaj convo. After the wedding. I LOVE this Bajaj. Thoughtful gifts, respecting her family, destroying people who gossip about her, pacifying her, making her continue her studies, and beating the hell out of her ex and destroying them.Surprise which is a popat plan. I loved all the convo between RB-PRB-Veena. She is like his mother. And they are expecting.This is such a feel-good OS Ankie. I loved it.
5 years ago
Ankie.. Thank you for sharing..A OS.. and that too veena's pov.. Totally unexpected tha..and bf ko villain bana diya.. Mera onu...Sneha, preyu and rishabh bond was cute..
5 years ago
WoW!! WoW !! Ammi...So cute and lovely!! you penned all the expression so well. Loved it. When Rishabh was wiping Prernas fingers!! That time I got a glimpse of someone. I don't get much time to watch the serial. Caught up with bits and pieces. Is Rishabh also suffering from OCD?
5 years ago
YAY I'M FINALLY HERE! Poora parhlia. When are you writing more? First of all, I absolutely adored the writing. Teri khudki writing stellar hai. AND DON'T SAY A WORD AGAINST IT OR I'LL BEAT YOU UP. I absolutely loved the smooth flow of words and the way they gripped you and pulled you into the life story of Prerna and Bajaj.Secondly, I loved how complete it felt. There was this beautiful feeling of warmth and the development actually flowed so smoothly, you could picture the high points in the narration. Thirdly, I loved how you used Veena's pov to tell the story. It added a nice, outsider touch to the whole dynamic and the fact that it came from a mother made it even warmer. Now coming to the story. It was so sweet. I loved how Prerna is so different here. Going for an internship, developing such a sweet bond with Sneha and then marrying Rishab. I loved how Veena asked him that question and his reply was so apt. Then the natural development between them actually felt so realistic. Nothing about it was rushed. Prerna took her time and so did he. I also loved how while Rishab was this enigmatic, cool af person, he could turn from ice to fire in a second for Prerna, destroying her enemies. AAH, LETHAL. That slap was just hilarious, I had a chuckle when I read that part. It's kind of really hard to imagine KSG angling upward to slap parth. Their relationship going a change after that and her becoming more open to him. The best part about Erica are her smiles and I can just imagine her giving those to KSG's Bajaj and the butterflies omg. Also the bickering when they arrive at Veena's is so cute. Mr. Bajaj is a germophobe. And the way he takes care of his daughter, wife, all the while being so considerate to Veena is just adorbs! I had the biggest smile when it ended. It leaves you with such a fuzzy feeling in your heart and contentment. And we'll never get that in the show probably so I'm so glad you gave it to us! EEEKS. IT WAS SO GOOD. WRITE MORE!
5 years ago
Anki .. check page one .Updated
5 years ago