Chapter 1
[MEMBERSONLY]
After what feels like eternity, I concluded this one-shot.
Imagine it's after the closure of the current track when RB has departed from BZ after giving them Komolika as a parting gift.
He has decided to distance himself from a certain woman who is his wife.
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As fierce raindrops came crashing by, he stood near the huge glass window, ready to revel in the beauty of nature’s aesthetic violence.The storm soon took form of a ballet of terror, and he could clearly behold the agents of nature indulging playfully in it. The brewing storm, fire, and sadism in his eyes paralleled the sport outside the window. Perhaps his own spirit was an extension of the wild, fierce spirit that danced outside. His cigar smoke took form of a temporary cloud, elevating his mysticism and taking him to enigmatic heights before dying.
The nightmarish aesthetic delight was music to his ears, and in these moments, he looked back at his life. His was a life saturated by betrayal, pain, its resulting numbness, and revenge…void of a soothing touch.
Pain, his secret faithful companion always stayed in his subconsciousness. Due to the intensity of the pain he felt, its effects had grown largely numb. He hardly felt any emotion, and seldom listened to his beating heart that still sheltered the sensitivity of his finished years. But lately his wretched heart had started to stir for an intruder, threatening to break walls he had built against vulnerability, against love, against relationships,against everything a man couldn’t imagine his life without.
Suppressing the subtle stirs, he slumped in his rocking chair and began to ponder with a glass of alcohol in his hand.Suddenly, he heard mirthful giggles and stared out of the window to trace the source. SHE was there, his wicked tormentor…laughing, dancing, tempting him to join her in the far-fetched ecstasy. But how could this frail woman withstand such a violent storm? Surely his fancy was deceiving him. She gave him a look of mysterious sadness and vanished in the storm.
“Stop! You’re being unreasonably forbidding.”
“That’s none of your business. I told you not to expect mercy from my end. Moreover, I wouldn’t accept if you again run to babysit your persecutors you outlandishly love.”
RUTHLESS. HEARTLESS. MACHINE. BUSINESS SHARK.
These words bestowed him with a satisfaction so palpable that he never experienced a need for tenderness. How could he possess the need when its only source had long departed? And his recent hopes were brutally quashed by a gross specimen of femininity.
Rishabh retreated to his chair and his last conversation with Prerna began to register its presence in the conscious part of his psyche.
“I’m leaving this hellhole. Despite your blatant disregard, awful duplicity, and unashamed sleaze, I haven’t overlooked my duties. You’re welcome in the Bajaj mansion as my legal wife. But expect nothing more than what the law entitles you with.”
“You’re being stubborn.”
“Trust me, you haven’t yet experienced my stubbornness.”
Despite his calm face, that veiled rage and sadism in his eyes had scared her…for she had never seen him this consumed by brutality. They never talked to each other after their return. And Mr Bajaj ignored her like she had become invisible.
That was the real Rishabh Bajaj, aloof, indifferent,and pitiless. She grew sore with her intimacy with his pitiless side after subconsciously getting used to his tender side and attention, something she never acknowledged but had got used to. She was now possessed by secret regret and shame.
The storm outside the glass protection grew fierce,threatening to destruct everything that disrupted its dance of terror. His eyes glowed with a glint of pleasure, and he revelled in the melody of annihilation,with the darkness in his eyes bestowing him with a charm so seductive and damaging that one look could lure unsuspecting victims into devastation. That’s what he was going to do, wreak havoc and destruct people who had wronged him in the past, and had dared to meddle with his present despite repeated warnings. It was time to break free from all promises and wants that shackled him. He was fated to be a devastating God!
[NOCOPY]
Comments (63)
It's so so so awesome I'm literally at loose of words seriously how brilliantly you've written this piece and on Bajaj 😭😭😭
5 months ago
It’s brilliant, felt Iike I’d picked up a book for a second. Really good.Would have loved to see this continued but this alone is something interesting to get us all thinking differently. In my view what happens next is Rishab begins to play his role in the life’s of all that have wronged him and devastation plays havoc. Including with Prerna all the whilst falling in love. Who’s to say ones devastation can’t be another’s bliss. jagrutid2020-05-23 16:59:51
4 years ago
Yea mere bacche ka thread hai, jitni bar chahe utni Baar comment karoon 😏
4 years ago
Will read this later today - the intro is great !!!! Hope your still writing this
4 years ago
And I just now realized this was posted a month back
4 years ago
Hi Wistfulness Ji ,Hope you are doing good ,I found this more of a drabble than an OS or can be considered as an Open End OS....where U can continue this or leave it at this...His thought are wild and dark as was his character at the start which was a good decision to keep...yes his Tenderness was taken for granted but that doesn't mean U lose yourself into a One sided Love.Very Well written part...Wish to read more from You.. but on a lighter note also please
4 years ago
Nice.Can't wait to see how tables would turn this time .
4 years ago
Loved this - this is what I want to see in the show but am subject to the antics that are going on currently. It is only writers like you - who bring out the true essence of RB. You have showed him to be so powerful, so in control but at the same time so alone... love you writing. Please do continue to write...
5 years ago
Oi wistFrom where do you bring such literary wonders?!I absolutely loved the line rishabh had hurled at prerna 'about sleaze &all' mazaa aa gyavo padhke read it like 4 times!
5 years ago
Brilliant....Just too Good dear....U write so beautifully that it connects with us easily...LOVED IT SO MUCH.....Want this RB to unleash his wrath...Pls do write more dear....Hehe....Tumhari dhamki kaam aagayi...Commented after a long time in IF....
5 years ago