Chapter 6

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Kapoor mansion

Ram heard the news from abhi that he knows where manvi is so he will go and bring her. On hearing this he got happy, but the next moment he got sad. He knows that his daughter hate him but he didnt expect that he will hate her this much.

He still remember how he used to treat her in her childhood, he never showed her any love. He always showed hatred towards her...

Flashback


Ram was busy talking through his phone to someone. At that time baby Manvi entered his room.

M: Daddy...U know what today ishh...

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Ram, who is talking with someone didnt listen to Maanvi.

M: Daddy... shuno..na...

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She got up on the bed and she was continuously annoying him..But he didnt even see her. Manvi thought for sometime and then she shouted into his ear..Now Ram got angry he started to shout at Manvi...

R: How many times I have to tell u that dont disturb me...dont come near me...Dont u understand ?

Manvi started to cry..but Ram didnt leave her

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R: Dont cry now...Get out from here

Raghav and Rita who came to visit Ram saw Ram shouting at Manvi, he asked Rita to take Manvi from there, Before Rita could ask manvi she throwed the drawing which she had and ran out of the room.

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Raghav saw the drawing it was a drawing of a man and a child who are hugging tightly...and was written "Happy father's day..."

Ra: See she came to wish you for father's day......

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Ram kept silent he know why his daughter came to meet him...

Ra: Why are doing like this with her..she is a baby

R: No Raghav I dont want to pour my love on my daughter..I love her infact i will die for her..but ..

Ra: But what Ram ....?

R: am afraid of my love towards people..because whoever I love that God is taking them with him..I Am afraid Raghav..I loved my parents they left me..I loved Priya she too left mee and went to heaven....Am afraid what if Manvi also ...No...no I dont want that to happen..

Ra: Are you mad..you are such a successful businessman but u believw all thses things...

R: No Raghav this is my fate...Time will heal the pain...

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Flashback end


Ram went to Raghav's room and he saw his friend crying like a child..

R: Raghav what happen

Ra: Ram today for the first time i slapped her I feel like i had not been a good father..

R: No Raghav in my absense u showed her lots of love..infact u grew my daughter like urs and u have all the rights...

Ra: No i shouldnt have slapped her..Will she talk to me?


Suddenly they heard car sound and they went out to see manvi..Manvi didnt want to come out of the car but Abhi insisted her to come, she couldnt deny so she came out and walked into the hall with abhi and aaliya beside her..Before raghav could call her she went to her room without seeing anyone.

R: We will speak with her dont worry (He got happy that atleast she cameback)


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Raghav just nodded, Rita went to kitchen and got the food for her children.


In Manvi's room

She opened her wardrobe to take a dress but her eyes fell on her child hood uniform, she started to reminisce her school days.

Flashback

Manvi in her school attending the class, suddenly an announcement came

Teacher: Children listen..we have children's day coming monday so we have a music competiton for the parents and children. Students  who wants to participate should come with their parents as both student and parent should perform on the stage. Kindly nominate yourself now..

Manvi rose from her seat she got excited to participate in the competition 

Stud 1: Hey manvi y u r giving ur name.. anyway ur dad is not gonna come and only caretacker or servant is gonna come ...

All students laughed

Teacher: Shut up all...Dont worry manvi i will nominate ur name..

Other students also gave name..after that the school got dismissed.

Stud 2: Hey manvi.. whenever u participate in any competition we always know that you gonna win but this time am sure.. am gonna win

Stud 3: Manvi gonna loose..

All students: Mavi is a looser...

M: HEllo...I will bring papa and will win the competition...

Manvi  retturned to her house was sitting in the hall and she was thinking about the competition and her face was dull.

Suddenly Ram who aas passing by saw this, he went to her 

R: What happen manu..

M: Papa we have a singing competition..and i gave name for that

R: Oh then ok u participate u sing well and u gonna rock it..

M: But papa...i should sing with my parents..since mom is not there i can call only u to sing with me

Manvi saw her father and she could see that his face got little gloomy. Now she know whats gonna happen he is gonna deny. so she became dull again....Ram first hesitated but seeing the dulness on her face he agreed 

R: ok when is that?

M: (got really happy) coming monday 

R: ok this sunday we will practice..and we gonna win...

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M:(beamed with happiness) Really ?

R: really..

Sunday morning

Both Ram and Manvi came to garden to practiice the song  "Papa Mere Papa" for the competition


Manvi opened her hands running in the garden..and after thinking that her father giving some time for her..she started to get emotional   and sung..

Chanda Ne Poocha Taaron Se

Taaron Ne Poocha Hazaaron Se

Sab Se Pyara Kaun Hai

Papa Mere Papa

Papa Mere Papa

Papa Mere Papa

Papa Mere Papa

(she started to cry more... Ram who saw her crying went near her and kissed her forehead

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...she got happy and she ran towards the gardener and showed her papa...and she gave actions that she is too happy.. then went to cook and did the same thing...Then Raghav and Rita also came...and she went near them 

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and showed that her papa is with her and spending some time with her..)


Chanda Ne Poocha Taaron Se

Taaron Ne Poocha Hazaaron Se

Chanda Ne Poocha Taaron Se

Taaron Ne Poocha Hazaaron Se

Sab Se Pyara Kaun Hai

Papa Mere Papa

(she did action indicating Ram as her papa...)

Papa Tere Papa

(Ram started to sing and he scooped her into his arms..)

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Sara Sehar Uska Jaana Pehchana Hai

Ho.. Lagta Hai Wo Naada Par Wo Syaana Hai

Chehre Se Hai Wo Bhola, Dil Ka Deewana Hai,

Phoolon Ne Poocha Kaliyon Se, 

Kaliyon Ne Poochha Gagiyon Se

Sab Se Pyara Kaun Hai

Papa Mere Papa

He.. Papa Tere Papa

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(Manvi and Ram sharing an ice cream....They are in the swimming pool and splashing water on each other.. then he trains manvi how to swim...)

Meethi Meethi Baaton Se Woh Sab Ko Hansata Hai

Ho Pyaari Adaaon Se Woh Dil Behlaata Hai

Ho Duniya Mein Aate Jaate Woh Pyaar Lutaata Hai

(Ritta and Raghav singing on seeing Ram and manvi..)

Saagar Ne Poocha Naiyya Se

Naiyya Ne Poocha Khiwaiyya Se

Sab Se Pyara Kaun Hai

(Manvi hugged Ram and sing)

Papa Mere Papa

Papa Tere Papa

(Ram in return hugged her tightly and singing...)

Chanda Ne Poocha Taaron Se

Taaron Ne Poocha Hazaaron Se

Sab Se Pyara Kaun Hai

Papa Tere Papa

Papa Tere Papa.

(all sing together...)

Manvi kissed Ram on his cheek

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Ri: Mannu.. wake up...Manu..

Manvi wake up from her dream... She got happy that she gonna spend sometime with her father...

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R: Mommy where is dad...

Rita got worried because Ram went on a sudden business trip..

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Ri: Beta...He went out he will come.. now go and get ready we will have breakfast..

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After sometime Niharika saw manvi in the hall waiting for someone...

BK(Niharika): What happen manvi...

First manvi ignored her beeji as she hate her..because of her rude behaviour with everybody..

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Later when Niharika asked her again..

M: Am waiting for dad  beeji.. he told me that he will come ad practice song with me for tomorrow's competition..

BK:  What Ram... no way... and between he went to US for business deal... he wont come.. so go and do someother thing...

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M: Whatt... no.. he told me that he will come..

She saw Rita coming toward her..

M: Mom tell beeji na that my dad will come...

Ri: Manu...beta...

M: no mommy dad told me.. he promised me that we will win..

She continuosly waiting for her dad but he didnt come it was almost night raghav asked mannu to have dinner and go for sleep but she is adamant...even abhi..asked her to come but..she denied...

Ra: Manu... beta.. plzz.. Ram cant come now...

But manvi being manvi she dialed Ram number, 

m: papa u told me that u will come right..

R: No manvi i cannot come now am very far from our home.. and i have work too

M: But papa...please tomorrow all my friends will laugh on me.. i told them that u will come and we will win the competition...

R: Manvi what non sense...i cannot come now understood...(and he disconnected the call)

she started to cry...and went to her room without having her dinner..

Next day Manvi doesn't want to go to school but Raghav made her get ready and left her into school..

Ceremony started and they were calling manvi on to the stage... but manvi... stood in her place with her face down..

suddenly all students started to laugh...

Stud1: Manvi...i told u right..then y did u gave ur name...see u became looser...

Suddenly she heard someone singing papa mere papa song...she immediately looked up and saw Raghav...

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Then he asked manvi to come on to the stage..

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And they both sang the song... and won the competition as well

Manvi got too happy as she got the award..

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When they returned they saw Ram..but manvi just ignore him... and went inside her room... that day was the beginning of her hatred towards Ram...

Flashback end...

Manvi came out of her memories when she heard Rita's voice..

Ri: Mannu... come and have dinner

M: No mom...

Ri: Am sorry beta.. I..

M: Mom.. y r u saying sorry...

Ri: I should have stopped Raghav... I

M: Mom leave it plzz.

Ri: Ok now plzz have this u didnt have anything from the morning...

M: No mom..

But Rita glared at her sweetly and Manvi took the plate and abt to have her dinner when Rita fed her food by herself...Manvi started to have dinner with tears..

After having dinner Rita made manvi sleep and went to check on abhi and aaliya...

Manvi went to her balcony..

she started to remember about virat suddenly then went into another memory lane..

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Flashback

When abhi, manvi and aaliya were returning from ice cream parlor manvi noticed that she lost her mobile which was kept in her bag..So she decided to check in parlor....

M: Oh no abhi.. i lost my mobile in parlor...plz go back to parlor

A: ok

Manvi into parlor where she saw people beating a man... she asked some random person

M: what happen bhaiyya..?

Person: Oh nothing...he is a thief he took that girl's hand bag thats y...suddenly something clicked in her brain.. she went near him and asked

M: Hey you took my phone right..

Thief : what no..

M: If u dint tell the truth i will put some murder case on you and push u into the jail for ur life time...

Thief : No maam.. plzz... dont do like that..I will tell you

Manvi got schocked

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M: Then tell me u were the one who misbehaved with me right...

Then he told her everything how he kept his hand on her making her to divert and then took her mobile... Now manvi felt really bad for slapping virat..

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M: OMG... What did I do to him...

she made her mind to apology to him...

Flashback end 

Manvi got satisfied as she did apology to him...and hoping for a new start she went to her bed to get some sleep.


Chandigarh housing board

Virat who came to his house saw pragya, priya, natasha (changed nandy's name as natasha) seeing "Kuch kuch hota hai" movie in the hall..

He straight away went to his room still in manvi's thoughts..

Here Pragya is no less...throughout the whole movie she is imagining abhi... as SRK and herself as Rani mukherjeee...and the song tum paas aye song is playing she went into her own dream... 

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Kapoor manision 

Meanwhile in Abhi's room he got tired... he wanted to get rid of  all the things which happened now so to relax himself he switched on the tv only to find his favourite movie Kuch kuch hot a hai and his fav song tum paas aaye is playing..and he just start to imagine pragya as rani mukherjee and himself as SRK..

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Pragya  and Abhi dream


(Abhi only dreams himself and praghya but pragya dreams of abhi herself and manvi)


[ Aa Aa Aa Aa, Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa ]

Aa Aa Aa, Aah Aah Aah]


(Imagine pragya as rani mukherjee and kajol as manvi..)

Pragya dancing with her dupatta... while manvi dancing herself..

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Pragya saw abhi..she ran towards him 

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but he is not there she searches for him and suddenly abhi appears singing

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Tum Paas Aaye [ Hm Mm Mm ]

Yun Muskaraye [ Mm Mm Mm ]

Pragya imagines him kissing her cheek..and she blushes


( Tum Paas Aaye Yun Muskaraye

Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye ) -2

Abhi imagining himself singing and doing actions like srk rolling on the ground and dreams of praghya and he hug her from her back

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and understood thats his dream blushes and hides his face with his arm

Then he sees praghya and dances with her..

Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai

Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai


He swirls around praghya and dances with her..


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and starts hitting her with shoulders..

and twirls around and  see she is nowhere and he bushes and sits down..


Tum Paas Aaye Yun Muskaraye

Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye

Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai

Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai -2

Praghya imagines manvi singing and dancing around abhi.. and then herself dancing with her dupatta..

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she sees abhi seeing her and she covers herself...and manvi throws her hands and legs and sings..


Abhi sitting and sees praghya and asks him to get up..

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she hugs him from behind and kisses him later they dance together..

Na Jaane Kaisa Ehsaas Hai

Bujhti Nahin Hai Kya Pyaas Hai

Kya Nasha Is Pyaar Ka

Mujhpe Sanam Chhaane Laga


Later abhi catches her and dances with her and set his hair with one hand 


Koi Na Jaane Kyun Chain Khota Hai

Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai


and Manvi sit with her back toward abhi's back and started singing...

 

Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai


Botth praghya and manvi singing to gether at different places..


[ Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa -2 ]

Hey, Hm Mm

Aa Aa Aa Aa, Aa Aa

Praghya twirls around and falls in abhi's hands..

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 and all three lie on the ground with their head together..


Kya Rang Layi Meri Dua

Yeh Ishq Jaane Kaise Hua

Manvi rolls on the ground and sings and 


Bechainiyon Mein Chain

Na Jaane Kyun Aane Laga

praghya stands with the support of the pillar and sings


Tanhayi Mein Dil Yaadein Sanjota Hai

Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai

Abhi sings and dances the signature step 


Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai

Praghya also sings together


Tum Paas Aaye Yun Muskaraye

Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye

Praghya comes to abhi while abhi is singing and she closes his eyes and go..


Tum Paas Aaye Yun Muskaraye

Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye

While manvi comes from behind and she sings the song and he opens his eyes and teases her cheek with his finger..and he closes her eyes and manvi opens her eyes and she playfully hit her head

Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai

Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai

He then spreads his arm and dances and then he thinks and do actiions like he understood that something happened to him..


Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai

Pragya imagines herself and manvi singing those lines..

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And music plays where praghya and abhi realized that they were dreaming... 

Dream ends


Where abhi switched of his TV

A: What happened to me just for 5 minutes i spoke with her and already am imagining her..


Here Praghya got schocked she dont what is happening to her.. 

Prgya (thought): oh no..what am i dreaming he seems look good but... also he had a girl with him definitely she will be his girl friend.. no no... what if she is a sister of him.. no... what am i thinking...whatever it is why am worried..? no i have to speak to virat to chat randomly so that i wont get this type of thoughts again.. also i have to tell him something ...

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She went to Virat only to find him thinking of something...

P: Virat...

Virat kept silent and he was not reacting..because he was dreaming of manvi...

Hua kya hua bgm...

He imagines how she had been watching him and crying ...

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The way she hugged him

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The way she was looking at him when abhi thanked him..

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Then he saw a happy manvi blowing bubble towards him..

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Suddenly praghya shouted VIRAATT....

Virat came out of his lala land and saw praghya...

V: What happened didi...

P: I should be asking that ...because u were lost in ur own thoughts.. what happen virat...


V: No di nothing.. ok now tell me what happen u were watchig movie right..

Praghya started to imagine her dream again...

V: Di.. now what happen to u..

P: Nothing actually ...tomorrow i will be joining with u to ur college...

V: what ...?

P: Yeah virat i will be joining ur college.. Priya bua want me to continue my studies in chandigarh university instead of going to someother college..

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V: but how?

P: Natasha aunty knows this principal and thats how...

V: wow di... i had been asking u to put admission but u didnt do that... see now...am really happy...

P: Ok we will sleep now else we will get late...and did u plan how we gonna go..

Virat remembered manvi and he got lost..

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P: virattt..

V: yeah di... actually tomorrow abhi my friend who is staying over here told me that he will pick me up...

P: Abhi... never heard this name from u before..

V: he is a new friend di... he will come and pick up...Dont worry he is a nice guy..

P: Ok viru good night  have a good sleep

V: Good night to you too...

Precap

A: What she is ur Di...(in mind oh no she is sooo hot)

Pragya blushing..


College first day

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Pragya falling on abhi...

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M: Hey... deep u came to india... wowww

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M: Maaa...

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Priya gets schhocked...

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Comments (12)

what's pragya's real look in this story? earlier in pics she had a mature look with specs. in this part she appeared before specs too.so....

4 years ago

sad that manvi was going to wish ram happy fathers day.but without understanding that he scolded her was shocking.it's so stupid of ram to not show love to manvi as he feels that the people who are loved by him go away from him.oh no ...manvi was dreaming.but ram manvi song sequence was so beautiful.sad that ram left for the trip.poor manvi.but happy that raghav sang with her n won the prize. abhigya just met.still dreaming of themselves on kkhh song.surprising that in pragya's dream manvi was also there.you described the song sequence beautifully.pics n gifs made me feel that I am watching it.happy that finally manvi realized that virat is innocent.virat pragya part was nice.wow ...virat abhi friendship may make abhigya meet again.perfect pics

4 years ago

Seeing virman i started reading
Its amazing
Do continue soon

4 years ago

Awww poor manvi really had bad past in childhood waiting to know more

4 years ago

Feeling so bad for manvi her childhood is tough
Waiting to read more of virman scenes

4 years ago

It seems that Manvi had a rough childhood. Sad that Ram didn't show any love towards her. In the FB, I felt bad that most of the students made fun of Manvi when she gave her name in the singing competition. It is surprising that Ram agreed to come with her to the school for the singing competition and practiced with her. But sad that he disappeared the next day. Glad that Raghav covered up the situation and ensured that Manvi won the competition. The bonding between Virat and Pradnya was amazing.

4 years ago

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