Chapter 3

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so here u go ppl with aaj ka update...subah subah ...infact raaton raat de rahi hun na...i know...dnt know y im so much into this story!!!!!!


PART 3


next days were on a roll for kriya...she never knewhow tym flew away...she was getting up doing her work ...after rey leaves she does some work to be done then comes neelima with her small glass scale as if threatening kriya ...riya always had a hearty laugh when neelima acted as strict teacher...


neelima was surprised.this girl was indeed a very fast learner...


it was finally sunday .neelima left nonu... * iloved this name*


rey got up late as its a free day for him...as he entered living room after freshening up he saw a mesmerising sight... kriya was lying on the ground and lifting the baby girl on her legs...


*hope u got ...bachpan mei papa mujhe utha the the*


she was laughing heartily...he saw her laughing that openly for first tym...but what to call him???????/ alien???????/// he smiled casually and went to table to have his breakfast...


kriya noticed him and went to serve his breakfast...


r: ye bacha koun hai???


rey as as usual not intrested talking to her...


k: wo...wo neelima di ki beti hai...


r: oh...


he made a face


k: wo di sunday ko baahar jaati hai...waise bhi mai free hi hun so maine liya tha...


she said slowly loking away nervously...


he didnt speak at all...when leaving to rroom he spoke...


r: acha kiya kam se kam mujhe disturb toh nahi karegi...


he said casually and left leaving a badly hurt kriya...

but she sighed and recovered from it...


she thought that expect sighing at her fate she can do nothing...and sighed...and then laughed at herself before gtting back to nonu...


days were on a fast pace...6 months already completed after marriage...


one day as usual as promised to his dad kriya was back of him asking him to finish his juice...


she didnt dare to order or speak so just followed him with glass wherever he went...rey finally looked at her through the mirror...she was looking away nervously...he sighed angrily...turned back and gulped the juice in one go...the fact is he hated juice...


after wearing shoes and finally perfect to work he stepped out to his car...


k: rey...


she came running...


r: now what??? mera peecha nahi chodegi kya???


he growled at her...but neelima heard it and saw too through her kitchen window and rushed out...


k: aap ki hand kercheif...


r: thank u...


he snatched and left...she again sighed followed by a smile...


n: kya hua????


she asked concerned...


k: di app???


n: haan rey chilla kyun raha hai??? she asked already getting angry on rey


k: kuch nahi di kal raat ko choti jhagda hui thi isiliye...


n: kya hua???


she asked quickly and bit her toungue...kriya stamerred not able to find reason...


k: wo...di wo...


n: arey chodo couples mei ek normal hai ...mai bhi toh tere jiju ko 4-5 thappad maarti rehti hun din mei she chuckled making kriya laugh...


kriya found it a perfect reason...


k: pata nahi di kab unka gussa kam hoga.


she said...


n: kya bol rahi hai??


k: haan mai ke rahi hun kam se kam 3- 4 mahine rahega ye ...


3-4 mahine??? jyaada hogaye kya??? waise agar kam hue toh??? theek hai baad mei koi aur kaaran dhoodh lenge...


kriya thought to herself...


n: kya??? kyun????😲


k: kuch nahi di bas wo kya hai ki unhe bacha chahiye tha mujhe nahi .isi baat pe naaraz hai...


n: kyun nahi chahiye tujhe bacha???


k: di abhi mai uskeliye tayyar nahi hun...


n: hmm...ye bhi sahi hai... bina kuch jaane bacha karna theek nahi...theek hai par manane ki koshish karna...


k: hmm...


n: hey bhagwaan maine sabji rakhi thi ...mai chalti hun.


she said holding her head and walking out...kriya followed her out ...she stopped at door and looked at kriya..


n: jhagda ko simple hi rehne do...jyaada serious mat banao...socho ..agar sach mei rey ko bacha chahiye toh it means he is ready...donon milke samhal sakte ho...she caressed her cheek and left...

kriya closed the door and leaned on it...


k: bacha????????


she gave a sarcastic smile and went to finish her work and start learning...

days passed...kriya was gathering money...she almost kept aside her wants...she knows that coming months are gonna give tough tym for them...coz rey's salary...its almost sufficient but the way rey uses it makes her worry...she saved every penny...one for emergency and for ... HIM...


that day she went with neelima ...


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"cheers man!!!!"reys colleauge's cheered him up...it was his birthday


a small party at home...she tried to make him understand but he being he organised it...


she didnt try much too...as its HIS birthday...

rey was having his best tym enjoying after many months...he was looking around and went to the table to grab himself a cooldrink when he heard her...


he turned and was already irritated...


he was abt to snap when his friends gathered for a talk...they looked at kriya as she was waitng to say something...rey wanted to get rid of this soon...so he said...


r: what's it sweatheart...


he asked unwillingly...kriya instantly looked at him pain all over her face...he called her sweat heart just coz of others presence it made her bleed...


happy birthday she handed him a box...he raised his eyebrow but came to normal and opened... the box is filled with rose petals and in b/w was a shining platinum coated watch...and a small paper rolled an a ribbon tied to it...


"aww a love letter???" one of his colleages wife squeeled... soon all left the place making their way for food...


rey opened the paper...


it read...


whatever u ask may u receive

whateveru seek may u find

whatever u wish may it be fulfilled...


HAPPYBIRTHDAY MY DEAR HUBBY!!!!!



it was simple but it was her true feelings...which she penned down and was excited to see his reaction when he comes to know that she is now almost very good in english...


rey chuckled to her surprise...she looked at him confused...


as they were alone rey whispered ...


kaha se likha ye??? oh sorry kisne likha ye tereliye?? iska matlab bhi jaanti ho kya??? he chuckled...


she was broken...she was totally broken...


she expected... "u wrote this?????😲 "


but to her back luck she was blow it felt lyk a hard slap...somehow she managed to gather the broken pieces and was abt to tell when he again spoke...


r: oohhh ab samjha ...


he said chuckling again...she followed his gaze...there came neelima...he knew neelima was excellent in her english ...


r: sahi pakda tune apneliye inhe... waise thanks for the gift...


he said and left the broken kriya...she stood rooted to the place...


k: mai gawar thi...aur hamesha rahungi...


she said as she walked taking steps back looking at him laughing on his frnds jokes and slowly slid into her room and closed it and leaned on its back letting her silent loud cries and slid down making her comfortable pulling her knees close and cried...


thats it for today!!!!!!!!😳


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love u all...


deetha😳

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Comments (145)

meko update cahiyyeee... *pout* ... Its pg 90 nowww...

12 years ago

fabolous update..ignorance...nice idea kriya...:)rey ko uski importance pta chal gayi within two week ...:)nxt part soon

12 years ago

nah rey...kal subah mandir jaana hai...and mereko sizzler banna hai,,,...so going aftr cmplting this page

12 years ago

Loved d updatei knw late comment krabt u knw rey deserve disur story has rey's character 360 ka u-turn hai yeh toh

12 years ago

fir am off to sleep,,,,,,,,subah jaldi utna hai

12 years ago

Mind blowing updateloved itab rey ki akal thikane aayegijaldi updt the next part

12 years ago

amazing update...rey ko kriya ki attention chaiye...pls next part jaldi update karna !!

12 years ago

Deetha jaan this was just fab..It was a marvellous update..Rey is missing her presence..It was wonderful...I'm really happy ki she made him feell..Chal ab feel karega tera bhai...Happy Diwali jaan..

12 years ago

Mast update hain yaar.. Gosh! His reaction was watch-worthy jab pata chala ki Kriya English sikh rahi hain..ROFLn Kriya is looking after him silently without bothering him.. Par isse kya pata bechara Rey ko jyada bother to uski absence kar rahi hain! Hehe.. Mujhe iss bar sach mein laga Rey is way to cute.. Itna bura bhi nehi hain bechara!

12 years ago

super update deetha.rey ko sach pata chal gaya .and he miss kria's attention 😭 thnx fr pm.

12 years ago

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