Chapter 1

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He switched on the player and came to the centre... he always forgets himself while dancing... never minds who is present who is not...and this morning it was same...
somethngs different today...he is feeling pleasant...so choose to move his legs on that beat which always took him to another word...DIL SE RE!!!!!!!

he switched on and stood before the mirror in that glass reharsal hall on the top floor of their house...he closed his eyes and opened his arms and just tapped his ri8 foot to the beat...

he was very peacefully standing but some are on verge of loosing breathe... how can she??? it was HIM!!!!!!! that too dancing...that too on her fav song...and over all that ...he is SHIRTLESS!!!!! she stiked to the glass wall seeing him through it and caressing the glass as if caressing his back...

*refresh*

he started dancing seeing himself in the mirror and she was continuously drooling over him... but chup chup ke...finally he blindfolded his eyes...he was dancing perfectly and each move of his muscle made her sweat and she too moved along with him but outside the room caressing the glass ...he stepped near the sidewall...she ran to it...he did a side moonwalk and she sticking to the glass took turns moving along with him...his every incomplete step... she completed standing outside and dancing as his partner...she loved him??? loves him??? nah LOVE is a small word ...

he finally placed hands on the wall *glass* and started singing...she placed her ri8 hand over his left and with left caressed his face

ps: glass is there b/w them...so if write she is caressing him then it means the glass...

he went back...she finally in trance entered the room...moved along with him...trying not to be caught...*imagine kriyaansh dil se*

finally he trapped her b/w him and mirror...he was moving his head according to beat but never aware that at any moment he may kiss her lips...

she in trance titled her head but suddenly realisation struck and she ran away...after few mins when song ended he removed the fold and went to his room...nah their room to freshen up...

finally he came down and had his breakfast... she felt bad...but she cant help it...she sighed at her fate...

after 1 hr rey's assistant arrived home with a imp file... and as usual rey moved uneasily gritting teeth...and finally sighed seeing her come with tea and snacks and left...

after 2 mins rey excused for water and went to kitchen where she was busy preparing lunch...

rey: thanks...itne dinon ke baad akal toh aayi...gawar banke nahi aayi...

he said gritting teeth and left grabbing a waterbottle...

she looked down sad...

hmm...but somewhere happy that he spoke her and somewhere she made him slightly happy...

she sighed at her fate...

she is a lower middle class girl...one and only child of parents...they tried their level best to take care of her like princess...but never able to give expensive and "wow"thingies to her...

but she knew what she has and also knew more than anything hr parents love her lyk hell...thats enough to her... she studied till 10th... hindi medium...

her dad tried to join her in english medium school but she saved that money and used it for the fees of her dance training...

she was the top dancer of that small insti of dehradoon...

thats how she met ...to be correctly said rey's parents met her...

the two days when they went for a charity event ...kriya as the leader of that dance insti *students mei leader* took the resposibilities to look after the arrangements for them and was ordered to be almost with the for anyhelp of theirs...

they liked her a lot...she is of 24 then...they loved her a lot...her humbleness character etc...

so finally decided to fix her marriage with their son REYAANSH SINGHANIA ...the RICH BOY!!!!!!! of 27...

rey was ...uff he is complicated... he is a perfect highclass man...he want branded thingies else they will directly reach dustbin...wanted a stylish rich ...well talented as him in software field as his lifepartner...

but destiny bought these two and tied together...

she used to be in saree and pallu over head always traditional as per the ghar ka parampara... rey hated it...first of all a low middle class girl and then this...arrgghh!!!!!!! he hates her to core...

3 months after their marrriage but still...they live in the same room...shared the same bed but the situation would be lyk she is one side ocean and he on other...no interaction nothing...

she fel for him the very first day...why not...he is the PRINCE CHARMING!!! ...his style...his attitude...how can she who always dreamt of a dream boy exactly like him not fall for her...

finally today she wore a simple frock as he already informed to his parents that his assistant would arrive anytym .and she heard it... everytym he used to get pissed off seeing her with that pallu in front of his workers and friends so she thought of changing the whole thing and wore that simple grey kneelength frock...

again a sigh...

she smiled weakly thinking of her life...her love ...her life doesnt even consider her as existed... she shaked her head and continued her work with that sarcastic smile at her own life on her face...








so kaisa hai???

good or bad???

jaldi jaldi batadena...

personally i like this start...

did u???

like and comment plz...

have a good day...

enjoy...

love


-deetha


..tulip..2012-11-08 07:17:52

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Comments (69)

M so sorry fr d late comment !! I personally loved d start.. aftr all it started wid REYAANSH.. he was dancin..tht too on dil de re... dis song always sends me to "Kriyaansh dreamland" his every incomplete step... SHE completed it!! lovd dis particular line.. hoh.. saw d new face of Reyaansh thru ur ss.. he seems to b all proudy,egoistic,arrogant,mean n all! whts kriya's mistake,, if his parents found her d best fr thr son.. huh.. d way he behavd wid kriya.. I ws feelin lik maaring him awww.. Kriya does loves Reyaansh a lot! Fr him.. She's trying to change herself! Reyaansh.. cnt u c dis... kriya.. agn a selfless gal! she chose her dance ovr her studies..she dint want her father to pay fr her eng medium school fees.. thus she decided to mk dance hr evrythn.. n she succeeded! wonder.. whts gonna happen nxt!! Entirely new n diff concept.. Lookin forward to it..😊 i guess.. DANCE wud bring dem close!! update soon.. M waitin!

12 years ago

oosssoommm...!!!!! Loved it...:) thanxxx 4 pm

12 years ago

Wow . . . New ss 😃 kriya is a middle class gal & wears saree wid pallu over head 😔 rey to aise hi behave karega na agar vo itni dhaki chupi rahegi toh . . . . . . . Shayad uski waist tak nhi dikhti hogi 🤣 hehehe . . . . . Grey frock . . . . Lagta hai rey ke parents ghar pe nhi hai 😆 & the theme music 'dil se' is itself so sensuous . . . . . . Sorry, kriyaansh made it so ☺️ & khadoos rey gets more wild n hot later . . . . . 😉 the way u described the whole dance . . . . . . I could totally imagine it wid a glass as a barrier 😛 post next part soon

12 years ago

That was such an amazing start...Really loved it...Wanna noe how Rey will fall 4 her..Plzzz update soon...N thank u 4 accepting ma request n thanx 4 the PM!!!:):)-Tehmina!!!:):)

12 years ago

awwiiieee!!!!!!!im loving this!!!! bas itni si tym mei itne saare comments aagaye and ur this comment😳

12 years ago

maine 2-3 baar already padh liya... 😳mast likha hai tune...ekdum correct proportions mein hai..

12 years ago

😭 rey is being so cruel to kria😭👏👏 well written deetha diupdate soon

12 years ago

loved it deetha...u actually brought out the reality..and well uh...my rey-has to be one of the sexiest...revived memories of dil se...awesome...

12 years ago

kal wildcat miling????yayayayaaa...!!!!!!!*jumping like a maniac fr sure*i love u sp...!!

12 years ago

jeeyo meri wildcat...tereko kisi ki nazar na lage *typical aunty wala nazar utaring gesture*

12 years ago

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