Chapter 16
🤗 heylo ladies ... M so sorry for the delay .. but Yes ! Finally here's the update
..And It's the Last chapter+ Epilogue of this FF ..I.e. of Rolling hearts in deep ..
I may come back with it's second season But not sure about it ...as studies are on and there's too much pressure on me .But i assure you that i'll keep on writing OS and complete the Redeeming one asap ..
So here's the Last Chapter 😭 *Sobs*
It was an hour now and still Rey's eye's were searching for kriya . He took a deep breath and again stepped on the stage .And on the other side kriya was struggling with rey's crazy fan's ..Who were busy fighting for rey ...
"Rey is mine ..." said a girl standing beside kriya .
"How Dare you say that he's yours' ..?? He is mine got that you freaky mad girl !! " kriya stamped for the tenth time ...She wished if she caught this girl later she will surely break her teeth.
"Oh .. Then you will say ..that you are kriya ghai , the rumour girl ... C'mon say that also nah ...you dumb ..See it don't matter's to me wether who so ever you are but Rey is mine ..got that ..and even i have to kill that kriya ..I will ..! I can do anything for Rey ..My love .." that girl piled .
"Hahaha .. you got that right girl I'm kriya ghai c'mon kill me if you can ..See you are getting this golden opportunity to kill Kriya Ghai ..Then you'l not Meet me again .." Kriya smirked ..
"Hahha you dumb ...You can't be Kriya ghai .. man ! Look at yourself .. you nerd ..Your hair's your spectacle's ..." that girl said chuckling ..
Then that girl turned around ..But she just recalled her words which she said just now .." Your hair's ..Your spectacle's .."
"Shit !!! It's Kriya ghai ..Her hair's were the same ..her height .. her complection .. Her face ... those spectacles ??? " she said ..with a shock ..And she turned around to see kriya ..But she couldn't find her ..
"Where's the girl who was fighting with me ..." that girl asked her companion ..
"No you should be happy she has left ..." her companion answered ..
"No man !! She was Kriya ghai .. " that girl said ..
"What kriya ghai ..!??????? " her companion was too shocked ..And this nam "Kriya ghai " spread across the folk like a fire .. Then with a huge note ..Nilesh began to paly his guitar .
Kriya somehow manges to come out of that mad crowd ..She quickly checked her cellphone ..
" 3 missed call's from mom " she said hesitantly ..
She quickly dialed her mom's no.
"Hello mom ..Umm You called me .." kriya said shivering ..
"Ya .. listen .. I always say that Do the thing you like ..And after your denial for the relation I cannot do anything , Just guide you for your future. And when you said that You love him .. i was glad you made this decision ..He is right for my girl ...He is right for you ...Kriya ... See I can't be with you in your whole lifetime ..Some day I'll also depart to heaven .. But I'm not sad about it , now i have got someone who is there for my girl ..He loves you and you love him , All i want is you both stay like this forever ...Now .. I'm watching the concert ...and @ BACKSTAGE segment i didn't find you ..Where are you ...??? Don't tell me you are not @ his concert .." Smriti said..
"Mom !!! Don't ever say that you'll leave me ..I love you ... And I'm @ rey's concert only .. " Kriya replied sobbing ..
"Okay now rush or else you will miss his next performance .." Smriti ordered !
Kriya wiped her tear's and and headed towards backstage . she removed her spectacles and quickly adjusted her hair's ..smacked her lips .She greeted all ... and Went near the stage and as soon as she turned She saw him ...Her face turned pale ..."What are you doing here now ??? " she questioned him .
** Flashback **
After meeting Rey ant his morning rehersal Kriya went back to her home , Where she find her mother .Who just came back from her business trip .
"Mom you are back so early how .." Kriya said .
"Ya kriya i told you that i want you to meet someone nah.. So see .. here's that Golden Man ." smriti said ..Turning side ...
"Shivam !!! you here .." kriya exclaimed ..Her eye's opened wide ..After all she was seeing him after many year's ...He was her Highschool friend ..And Rey's biggest enemy ..
Alway's Shivam tried to hurt rey ..And always he tried to stay close to kriya to make rey jealous !
He was a Real Dog .Watching Rey win those small issue's @ highschool his heart burned and he tried to defeat Rey . It was because of Shivam That Rey couldn't Propose Kriya or tell her how much he felt for her ... And again Their lives clashed here .
"Oh ya babe .. Its me only .. Hows you " he said giving her a warm hug ...
" I'm Fine dude .." she replied.
"So i think things can move on .??" smriti popped in .
Then she took kriya in a separate room .
"Kriya ...How was shivam you like him ..??? "
"Mom ... He is good .. Ya obviously ..he's a nice guy .."
"oo.. Nice ..So Marry him ..?? " smriti winked .
On which kriya reacted despondently . "No Mom I cant ... How can I..."
"Why not kriya .. You like him ..And also see your carrier ...Its on top you have achieved almost everything beta and now you have to achieve the another goal I.e. To become a Married women ..You are 28 now C'mon stop acting childishly ..."
"Mom ... So what's the big deal .. I Don't wanna marry him .."
"Then with whom you wanna marry ..?? " smriti questioned her , instantly to which she also replied without thinking and the answer was obvio. "Rey "..
"Don't say now you want to marry your cassinova friend rey . I know he's nice guy .. Caring But beta .Trust me shivam is best for you .. .." smriti blurted..
"Mom .. *Taking deep breath * We both love each other ...and want to spend our lives with each other ...happily .. Lovingly ..."
" Now let me handle all things in my way .You leave .." her mom said despondently .
Kriya stamped furiously to her room ignoring shivam who just tried to talk to her .
" How can Mom Say like that .. Marry that person ... ..*Holding her head * ..Oh .. Mom .. I should have told you all the things earlier ...Shit today I'm surrounded by so much confusions ..How to tackel this new problem And Rey's concert ...Man i need to go there ... But how ..." Kriya called swayum And told him the whole senario ..
He told her to first attend Rey's concert but not as Kriya Ghai but as an oridinary fan .. as her being at Rey's concert can trigger the folk and also tangle the things between her and her mom , Untill her Mom gets ready with Rey and Kriya's relationship ..And also they cannot include Rey in this havoic as this was his most important day ...
*Back to present *
She was stood like a dumb ..
"Hey Kriya ... why are you surprized to see me here yaar .. also you didn't met me at your home ... what's the matter .." Shivam said ..
Kriya knew what she should do now .ie. to tackel it all professionally ie. in Kriya Ghai style.." Oh .. shivam sorry actually i was in a hurry ..also it's an important day for me and my Boyfriend .." she said in an erect voice which pierced his mind ..
"Your boyfriend ...! So Reyansh is your boyfriend ...??? " Shivam said shockingly ..as he knew about those rumour's but these things usually don't effect much in this industry . Now this girl with whom he was planning to marry was in relationship with his biggest rival ..
"Ya. Want to meet him He's right there on the stage .." and she waved her hand Luckily Rey just finished third song and he was to come @ backstage ..
"No . I'm just leaving congratulate him from my side .." he said.
------@backstage---
Rey entered the backstage again hoping to see her there but he could'nt .He was tired by this time ..He took a bottle of water and poured it on him ..
Kriya came from back and hugged him ..
He was so happy to see her ..
"Where were you .." rey said angrily ..
"Rey ...I was stuck with you Mother in law .." she said chuckling ..
"what . Mother in law ...????" he exclaimed.
"Forget it .. I'm sorry Rey .. well i was here in the crowd but mere andar itni shakti nahi h ki tumhari crazy fan's se aur fight karu ..." she said ..
"Hahha,, You don't need to fight .. you know why .." he said .
"Why ..??? "
" Because I'm all your's ..."
She kissed his forehead.." Now go ... on stage ..and rock it .."She pushed him hard ...
As soon as rey stepped on stage ..He was more energetic this time .
He began singging .
ps: The song used below is : "Nothin on you " B.o.b feat bruno mars
Beautiful girls all over the world, I could be chasing
But my time would be wasted, they got nothing on you, baby
Nothing on you, baby
They might say hi, and I might say hey
But you shouldn't worry, about what they say
Because they got nothing on you, baby
Nothing on you, baby
Rey strung the string of guitar ..This time the people saw a new Reyansh ..With more passion ..With more zest ..
Kriya was so touched listening to this song ..And Rey took over this song specially for his lady . He Smiled looking at her ...She was standing there behind those huge curtains ..
I know you feel where I'm coming from
Regardless of the things in my past that I've done
Most of it really was for the hell of the fun
On a carousel, so around I spun
With no direction, just trying to get some
Trying to chase skirts, living in the summer sun
And so I lost more than I had ever won
And honestly, I ended up with none
His voice was a pure blend of his feeling , emotions , his love for her , and his entire hard work . He was an idol . His passion for music was flowing in every one's mind over there .. His tough notes made thousands of music lover admire him ..And yes his fan's were crazy about him ..
It's so much nonsense, it's on my conscience
I'm thinking "maybe I should get it out"
And I don't want to sound redundant
But I was wondering, if there was something that you want to know
But never mind that, we should let it go
Because we don't want to be a TV episode
And all the bad thoughts just let them go, go, go, go, go
He winked to swayum ..Kriya wondered why he did so ? ..
Later she got to know ..swayum pushed kriya ..Making her come out of that curtain ..on the stage ..Rey sat down on his knees singing for her..In front of whole world ..
Kriya hesitated .
Should she hold his hand ..
Hands down, there will never be another one (Nope)
I've been around, and I've never seen another one (Never)
Because your style, I ain't really got nothing on (Nothing)
And you wild when you ain't got nothing on? (Ha-ha)
Baby you the whole package
Plus you pay your taxes
And you keep it real, while them others stay plastic
You're my Wonder Woman, call me Mr. Fantastic
Stop, now think about it
"YES " she should said her inner voice ..
I've been to London, I've been to Paris
Even way out there in Tokyo
Back home down in Georgia, to New Orleans
But you always steal the show
And just like that, girl you got me froze
Like a Nintendo 64
If you never knew, well, now you know, know, know
She grabbed his hand ..And he laid her way to the mid of the stage ...
All the audience was shocked with this sudden scene..
Everywhere I go, I'm always hearing your name
And no matter where I'm at, girl you make me want to sing
Whether a bus or a plane, or a car, or a train
No other girls on my brain, and you're the one to blame
And he ended his song holding her hand ...
"Ab propose bhi kr do ..." she said ..with a blushing smile ...
"Really .. kar du .." Rey was not able to believe ..Kriya just said him to propose her in front of whole world .??
"Ab.. a... " he stammered ..
"Rey ..." she shouted ..*lowly *
He again bent down on knees , holding Mike in one hand ..
"Kriya .. Will you be mine forever ..?? " he said on mike ..
Thousands of people witnessed their union .
Many of them shouted of joy and some of them shouted of pain ..as their bachelor star was proposing some other person ..:P *sobs*
"yes .. " she replied ..sobbing ..Wiping those wet traces on her cheeks ..
He took her in arms ..and twirled around .
Meanwhile the whole gang came there on the stage leading to a group hug ...
and they all shouted .. "Dil Dosti Dance " ===============The End ====================
lol😭 i was about to write the promo :P .. but literally its too sad for me ..I'm also going to miss this ff ...Really love you guy's ..My co-writer "ANKY" i reallly love you ...
If i start taking names of people whom i wanna thank for supporting ..then i may die writing them but yes there are some very close to my heart ...My BQueens .., vaishu , suju , snickers ... I mean really i don't wanna be biased but seriously i thank each one of you ..
It's now on third thread all because of you ..
In the end .. I love you all ! 🤗
xoxo
- Upasna ..
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Comments (34)
loved it sooo sooo much...mindblowing... 😃
12 years ago
srry fr late comment!!!!jst caught up wid d remaining updates!!amazing update!!!👍🏼if u write anything else plss pm mee!!!!
12 years ago
Upi u ended ii...nahiii!!!*filmy style* m so gonna miss this FF...It was one of those FFs jinke updates ke lie i waited eagerly... But awesome update... Kria ki mom maan gyi...nice... N kria fiting with a dumb girl for rey...possessive GF... N d song fab!!! D flashback was superb...achaa hua shivam ka chapter jyaada ni kheecha tune ... N rey proposed kri infron t of d wholre world...oye-hoye...loved that part ... N plz iska season 2 teko likhna hi hoga...jab b tym mile...but plz likna jaroor... Hugs...
12 years ago
heyy i tkinnkk i totallly forgot to comment!!:'(i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry!!!i'm soo latee...aaaww it's endingg!!:(butt ending was tooo cuteee!!!:)Yes! her mom accepted Rey!!:Dme supperr happy!!OMG he proposed her in front of the whole world!!:)aaawwesomee!!Thanxx fr writing such a beautifull FF!!:)thanxx fr PM's..big hug frm me :)
12 years ago
Awww upi kya ending hain👍🏼... i super like it... it's just beautiful😊... i will miss it but itna accha ending tha i am happy... sweety u have steered this ff so nicely proud of u...🤗
12 years ago
Fantastic update dear...loved it😊👏😊
12 years ago
Wow nice part but i want to very miss that ff nice proposing style hole world witness of ur love
12 years ago
OMG upi...this story is an epic...I sill cannot believe it that this ff has ended...since day 1 I was in looovvveee wid this ff...I loved each n every scene of this ff...I don't hv words to describe how amazing this ff was...I use to always read each n every part twice...this ff was awesome close to my heart...n plzzz make 2nd season of this ff...N I am waitinf 4 redeeming love...N I am sure it will be as amazing aS this!!!!!!!!:):):):)<3
12 years ago
wonderful update,,,,,,,,really luv dis ff i vl be missing it😭,,,,,hope 2 see season2
12 years ago
wowwwieee happy endings loved it really
12 years ago