Chapter 9
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hey guys m finally up with next chapter ..act , this chap was not going to b like dis.. but as you know ..anks will not be able to update dat frequent .. an neither i can update it dat much frequent .. m soory but ya i think you all wil be loving this ...*fingers crossed * i seriously think it's a crap ... a real crap ... but do tell wat you liked the most in it
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chap 15 ~~~~
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They were friends ...in the colg time but they were haters too ... they liked each other ...but hated too ... they were close ...but yet far too ...
They knew each other ..but were unknown too ...
*** flashing past *****
Kriya and reyansh .. friends or haters ??
They liked each other ...but who confessed ?? no one ...
And she left ...left for a new start of her carrier ...though they were apart but ... the feeling was fresh .though dormant but was alive ... never connected but felt for each other ...
She came back ...with those ..alive feelings ... n to study her better half ... yes she was their.. with those preserved shivers ...
But after living all those special moments she was left with numerous questions
Though all the moments they spent together , had different affections for both , but the feeling was the same ..."Who are you ! how are we related "??...
And day by day these questions were getting more prominent in kriya's heart ...
Though she knew .. the feeling she had for rey were bit different ..but were unknown ..or she knew them but denied every thing wat knocked her mind ... she knew .. that she was changing ! in-fact changed a lot !!
A girl who had walked on the ramp so many time ... was actually nervous when she walked down with "rey " ! a girl who use to be so conserved to herself had actually drunk ... then a
Date !! n dat too coffee !!
She was not a coffee crazy person but when he asked she could'nt resist ..Why why ...
The day when she returned India ...and at the party she only waited for rey !!
She was jumbled up with these questions ...
Why is he affecting her so much !!
What's this new connection ??? or is it old ??
Are we meant to be like this ??
Are we "together " ...??
But his thought irritate her every now and then ...
But why this irritation session ends up with water in those eyes...
Yes situations are changing ...day by day ...though they are yard away but they can feel ...what DESTINY is cooking for them ...
Yes i feel for you !! i definitely feel for you rey ...
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Walking up and down the stairs of the main door, Rey was waiting for all the group to come but firstly he was waiting for kriya ..
Eventually all boys were waiting for the galz to come up from their "make-up world "...*sigh* these occasions are made for this torture only ...
Rey bumped into swayum .
"WOOh rey !! chilllax !! aa jayegi wo !! " swayum said with teasing glimpse in his tone.
"Dude !! see yourself tu bhi toh yahan itni der se ghum rha h !! bol kiske liye " rey answered !
"Dude !! m waiting for my " to be wife " !! " swayum said .
"POINT hai !!! ( :p) vese me bhi yahan tujhe company dene hi aya tha ! " rey replied ,justifying his point ..
But both ended this conversation with a huge laugh !!!
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Galz finally stepped out of their room !! still adjusting their dresses !
They looked adorable ...with full indian touch to their wardrobe ...
Those long earrings dragged , boy's eye's to the gals neck !!
Yes they are back into their full strength ... killing the boys ...
Whole group entered the ceremony hall ... n they were bit amazed to see the set-up..whole hall was parted by a big white n blue curtain .bit transparent .with mirror work on it !!
yes ! the day was going to be most amazing day for all !!
yes the most amazing one !!
The gals were at right side of the hall and the boys on the left side ...still unhappy from this set-up ...on arguing a bit with swayum they got to know that this was important !!!
The ceremony started ...
Girls looked extraordinarily beautiful ...boys kept on staring at them through that transparent curtain ...
swayum winked sharon ... n sharon in return flushed with blush ...
kriya was trying to see where rey was ! she explored whole hall with her hazel orbs ...
Finally she got him ...
he was sitting beside swayum ...
She stared him ...how handsome he was looking today ...
Rey got her ...
Damn !! Damn ... did he saw me doing that ???...Kriya quickly looked at other side ... a girl came to her showing different designs !!
"Which one would you like mam ?" she asked kriya !
"UMM let me see what you'v got ! ' kriya began exploring the designs ..."
She choosed the one with light work ! but wait she heard a voice ...
She turned around n saw rey ...!!
He helped he decide the design ... sitting beside her turning the pages of the pamphlet ...
splash ...splash ...splash ...
she did'nt knew what was happening ...but she was enjoying this !!
"Here it it !! for my love " he pointed to a beautiful design with a great work ...
"OHH its seriously awsam " she said ...but when she turned to him ...he was vanished !!
"Where is he ??? gone ???" she questioned ...
"WHO MAM ????" the artist replied ...
"UMM no one ??" she said in a low tone ...she again searched the whole hall n found him beside swayum only ...
"was i dreaming ... n that too of "him " girl wake up !!!! " she was now fully confused ...
She got that design on her hands ...
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Sharon looked like an angel with the color of her love ...which was now on her body
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The night came ...
All the group decided to preserve it as a beautiful memoir ...
All gathered in the same hall ... n decided to play COUPLE DARE game ... so
kriyaansh had to pair with each other !!!!!
Girls on one side and boys on the other , sitting exactly opposite to their repective loves .. yes they were staying there !! all the group together ...!!!
The game started ..
1. sworan ...
Dare was to do a romantic dance though sharon's hands were full !
They danced ... ... with her hands slighlty up .he grabbed her waist ...( hooting from group ) n they dance on song " kuch iss tarah " ...
2. viha ...
Dare was to act as basanti and veeru ...with full emotions ..n that killer dialogue "BASANTII!! in kutto ke saamne mat naachna " n that full dance on song "jab tak h jaan ...jaane jahan me naachungi " :P
3. rimar ...
Dare was to to a "cat walk " noo ...a real "CAT waalli walk " with rinni on his back ...!!!!
4. nilesh n simmi ...
Dare was that simmi had to recite a poem named "twinkle twinkle little star..." n nilesh had to pretend to play drums on it ...
5 . vishakha and bharat ...
They were given a dare in which they had to pretend like they were driving a "buggati veyron " :P
6 :kriyaansh ...
Dare was to do a romantic dance though sharon's hands were full !
They danced ... ... with her hands slighlty up .he grabbed her waist ...( hooting from group ) n they dance on song " kuch iss tarah " ...
2. viha ...
Dare was to act as basanti and veeru ...with full emotions ..n that killer dialogue "BASANTII!! in kutto ke saamne mat naachna " n that full dance on song "jab tak h jaan ...jaane jahan me naachungi " :P
3. rimar ...
Dare was to to a "cat walk " noo ...a real "CAT waalli walk " with rinni on his back ...!!!!
4. nilesh n simmi ...
Dare was that simmi had to recite a poem named "twinkle twinkle little star..." n nilesh had to pretend to play drums on it ...
5 . vishakha and bharat ...
They were given a dare in which they had to pretend like they were driving a "buggati veyron " :P
6 :kriyaansh ...
Dare was to do push-ups !!!
but when their turn came ...the lights were off !!!
*** black ***
All got up ... wandering what had happened !!
Rey .. caught her wrist n hold her ...while everybody was leaving for ground where moonlight was ...rey and kriya were struggling with each other ...
"remember our dare !! " he spoke into her ear..
" Yaa !! but how can i do push ups ... ?? " she answered ..
"Who said you to do push- ups ..." he said ... n hold her from her shoulder ... n bent on her ... they slid together ...and ended at a position where rey was on kriya ... n kriya was on ground ...
She shut her eye's as rey reached near her ..
He started doing those push ups ..:P
with his hands near her shoulder on ground making it difficult to escape ...
It was dark but their love was sparkling ...
Every-time he came down ...he would count those no's in her ear's making more difficult for her to stay there ...
soon he reached the no. 10 th ... he ended it by whispering in her ear " Kriya ... I feel for you ... n i know you too feel the same ... i love you ..." he could'nt stop himself ... n his planted a kiss down her neck . She shuddered..."Oh gawd ... wat he said was true ... soon all those moments they spent strike her mind with a flash ...
Investigating how she changed , for whom ... how she got nervous , n for whom ...how she spent those sleepless nights , thinking about whom ... yes that tricky foggy layer on her thoughts was getting aside ... they were wet ... they were new , they were vivacious .. they were feeling "LOVE "
" Rey leave me !!! i hate you ... i hate you because i ... i ... love you !! " as soon as she said dis shouting a tear drop rolled down her cheek ...she got up n...she slapped him gently ( gently because she was left with no energy to control things now )... rushed to her room ...
"how did i say that ... was all that which i felt d same as he felt ..." she cried ... sobbing her herself...
She heard a knock on her door ... She did'nt open but rey ... he came in ...
kriya's pov ...
"I said it ??? how ... i didn't knew ... i really said it ... i knew it ...that was love ...
yes that was ...??? he is too ...mine ...?? how kriya ...!
"I said it ??? how ... i didn't knew ... i really said it ... i knew it ...that was love ...
yes that was ...??? he is too ...mine ...?? how kriya ...!
He'd never expected to see her cry. She was passionate, she was fiery, she was opinionated- but she kept matters of the heart in, very rarely sharing with even herself. At first he was merely baffled at seeing this strong, ethereal creature breaking down in front of him. Then he felt a strong sense of sadness- seeing this woman in so much confusion n pain that she couldn't hold it in anymore, finally. It was slightly horrifying, but then he'd enveloped her in his arms because he had no other way to give her comfort, something she needed desperately.
She went tense at first, stiffening, terrified at her own outburst and his reaction. Then, as she realized that it had become too much to take, she also realized he had offered to help shoulder the burden, at least for the moment, whispering her name, trying to soothe her as she cried. Her arms wrapped tight around him, as if she were clinging to him for dear life (she felt like she was) and he could feel her press her face into his shoulder, feel the wetness of her tears soaking his shirt, vaguely worried she would burn herself with the tears, but more concerned about her mental state.
He wasn't sure which one of them initiated it- him in a need to comfort her, her in a need to feel something, anything that wasn't hate from another human being- but then they were kissing. She pulled back, eyes wide and apologetic and shocked. "I'm sorry, I-"
"Don't," he cut her off, realizing he needed her too, needed to feel something that wasn't obligation or tradition, but something for himself. He kissed her again, deeper, feeling her mouth slip open, granting him access. He held her close to him, her body flush against his, keeping his arms tight around her. One hand slid up to cradle the back of her head, his hand tangling in her dark hair. He felt her move against him, realizing how badly he wanted her, though he didn't know quite why. Perhaps that was why. She was the unknown. He had the sense to pull back, gently asking, "I don't want to take advantage-"
"You aren't," she said, and he found himself unbuttoning her dress, helping her slip out of it. She undid his shirt, kissing the newly exposed skin. He could feel the warmth of her mouth against the blue diamonds, and shivered, not wanting her to stop, but needing to touch her as well. He gently caught her chin, tilting her head up and she straightened back up. "I want this, I want..." she trailed off, awkward and he could see her cheeks flush.
He rescued her from the embarrassment, whispering, "I want it too," and eased her back to her bed, kissing her. He pushed her hair off of her shoulder, pushing the sleeve of her shift down, exposing her shoulder, pressing a light kiss against the skin. He ran his hand over her leg, lifting up the skirt of her shift, scooting it up past her knee, to her thigh. He caressed her skin, but she shifted away when he got too close to her upper thigh, uncomfortable. He looked up in surprise and she seemed slightly disturbed. "What's the matter?"
"I... could you not touch me with your hands... there, I mean.. I-"
He frowned but respected her wish. "That's fine," he said, watching as she got out of bed, slightly discouraged for the moment. Then he saw the half smile, as coy as she was capable of, and she turned off the lights, blowing out the candle next to the bed, leaving only the dim moonlight for him to see by. She pulled the slip off, and he blinked trying to get his eyes to adjust enough to really see her, but she hugged the shadows, climbing into the bed. She took his hand, leading him to her.
But then he was, feeling the warmth of her body and he stopped thinking about what he was supposed to do, what people would think. He pushed aside his thoughts about the future or anyone's expectations, just focused on making love to her. He briefly wondered how much he loved her. In the moment he did, and in that moment she needed him and he gave himself to her as much as he could. In the moment, he knew that he was the only thing she was thinking of, the only one in her world, a nearly overwhelming thought. But lovely, too, to feel her slender legs wrapping around him, to see her strong facade fade away until she was truly vulnerable, truly needing another person. He'd never been more thrilled than when he heard her voice, low and rough with arousal, whimpering his name.
Later, he rolled over, not wanting to crush her beneath him- she seemed smaller to him now, more delicate, though he guessed that was to be expected. She froze awkwardly for a moment, not sure what to do.
So he opened his arms to her, coaxed her into them, glad to feel her relax, trusting him.
He'd never expected to see her cry, and he'd never expected to be the one to be able to provide comfort to her. But he was glad for both things.
"Watching her by my side ...so close was like a dream come true ...perfect though things in her heart still jumbled ...but i m trying to solve them . i will tear them apart ... be with me ...every time ... i will make you safe ..."
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Loving you is like a drinking water, because I'm so thirst without you...
Any day i can hear your voice, any day i can see your smile, any day i can feel your touch, will always be a special day
No matter how far away from me you may be, you will be closer to me than you think because your always in my heart
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Thread 3: *See Thread Three For Further Updates* *No More Postings*upasna_mishti2013-01-09 07:40:15
11 years ago
Heyy you were so right!!:)i forgot ch 15!!:S sorryIt's Awesomeee mann!!i luv itt!!:)I actually have noo words!!:#luvvv ur writing!!Aaaww !!i'm falling in luv wid KriYaansh again n agai!!!:$Fabbb!!Thanxx fkr PM!!update sooon:)
12 years ago
Thanq anki dear !!!😳
12 years ago
arre ruk ja abi abi updating me muje marna nahi h ab !!! fir bhi me to so rahi thi aur thread completed ??:O
12 years ago
toh khush reh na upi...tera thread finish ho gaya...ab update maar
12 years ago
sofiya ki bachchi to tu muje ye dikhane ke liye jaga rahi thi ... muje heart attack aa jata abi !!!!!! infact aa gaya ..u guys completed the thread !!!!!
12 years ago
koi muje pinch karo !!!! ye sab kya h !!!!!!
12 years ago
Ohhh dats so ..!! m sofiya ..guys now m colling her finaaly infact m visiting her now as vo ini asani se nahi jagti..😉 🤣 u know full kumbhkaran typs 🤣
12 years ago
Tum sab ne to sach me ese hart attack de diya par isne update nah diya
12 years ago
arhaan oh its is surprise frm me as in frm all IF Fns for her birthday !😉
12 years ago