Long Drive

16 days ago

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A car is running at a speed of 120 on a deserted road. It is 1 o'clock in the night and there are no other vehicles.
Just then the driver of that car's phone rang.
He slowed down the car a bit and picked up the call.

" Hello dad."

" Reyansh beta, what am I hearing, you are going to Assam."

" Yes dad, now you have called me at 1 o'clock in the night to ask this. Come on dad "

Rey said playfully.

" You are going, that's fine. It's your job, but who drives so late? You should have gone by flight."

" Dad, you know how much I like long drives, this one is going to be really long And you know, besides dance, I have other work too, there is an event in the orphanage and I can do this much for charity, right dad"

He said smilingly.

" Tumse bat karna hi bekar hai. Go with ease and stop on the way and rest. And"

" Dad I'm not a kid I'll take care of everything। "

" Ok son, safe journey and take care"

He put the phone down and turned on the music, changing the song just as he took his eyes off the road.

Wo khate hai na nazar hati durghatna ghati

Suddenly someone came in front and seeing them Rey turned the car to the other side and applied the brakes.

Immediately getting down he saw a girl in a white Anarkali picking up some stuff which had fallen due to the accident.

Rey went to him and said, "Are you okay? Are you hurt? Sorry, I wasn't paying attention to the road." "

Till now he had not seen that girl's face.

She got up and fixed her hair so that it was falling on her face.

" yeah i'm fine"

" Sorry meri wajah se aapka saman."

" Please don't say sorry, I too was not looking while walking, it was dark and there was no one around, so I was just walking like that."

" Okay... by the way what are you doing alone on this deserted road so late in the night?... I mean it's not safe you know."

" Bus se ja rahi thi pata nahi mera purse kahi gir gaya tikit ke paise nahi diye to unhone niche utar diya .

Mobile bhi band hai to madat nahi le pai kisi se. । "

He said sadly that Rey was still looking at him and he got angry with the bus driver

" How can he drop a girl alone in the middle of the road?"

" Hey, don't worry, as soon as I reach there I will complain about him to the police."
She said smilingly.

Rey then said "How will you go? Come, I will drop you, where do you want to go?" .?"

" I have to go a long way but please drop me at any bus stop."

" I too have to go far away."

" But it will take me two to three days, Darjeeling is very far from here."

" What are you serious. I also have to go to Assam. If you want, we can go together. "

" Oh no, you will be in trouble, I will go by bus"

Rey picked up his luggage and started putting it in the car

" There won't be any problem, I am alone anyway, they say that if you get company during a long drive, it becomes even more beautiful.
And the company itself is quite beautiful." He said with a smile and opened the car door for her.

" Well.....hmmmm by the way the name of this beautiful company is Tani." he said

" And my name is Reyansh. Now please sit down, it is very late and this is a jungle. You may not like it but I am scared."

He said smilingly, Tani laughed at this and sat down, started the car and a long drive began which was quite long.

Rey saw that she was sitting quietly with her eyes closed and feeling the breeze coming from the window. Her hair was coming on her face again and again, and she was making cute faces while removing it. Rey started laughing.

Then Tani's attention went towards him.

"why are you laughing"
" Do you know how weird you are?"
" What? "
" Meaning, if your hair is bothering you, then you should close the window. If you make such weird faces, then you will surely laugh."

Taani tied her hair in a messy bun and said, “I can’t miss such a lovely opportunity to feel the cool breeze at night.” "

" As you wish. Well tell me are you going to Darjeeling for some work"

" You can call me 'you', no, Riya's home is in Darjeeling, I was in Mumbai for work for the last 6 months but now I am feeling that I should go back home."

" And look what a good company you have got Reyansh"

" You never know, maybe just by looking at you he feels like going back। " She said smilingly. Rey became silent at this. As if this statement of hers had created a stir in his heart.

Tani started the conversation again " Do you live here? "

" I have an event here in Assam and I am going there for that. I am a dancer."

" Wow nice, I like dancing but I don't know how to dance, will you teach me?"

" Do you want me to teach you now?"

" No, I am just very hungry right now," said Tani, making an innocent face.

Rey laughs, "I will stop you when I see a Dhaba ahead."

After some time, both of them were sitting at a dhaba. Rey asked Tani and ordered potato parathas for both of them. But one thing he found strange, there were only a few people there but they were looking at him in a very strange manner.

Rey came back and sat next to Tani and said, "Why are these people staring at us like that?"

Tani looked at him and then said nervously, "Maybe there is no another girl, so let's eat quickly and leave."

Rey ne dekha taani ke face par ajib sa dar tha . Usane jaldi se khana pack katwaya aur dono waha se nikal gaye.

Kuchh dur ek nadi ke pul par Rey ne car roki car ki lights on kar dono ne khana khana shuru kiya.

Taani ko bhukh jor se lagi thi to vo bina ruke jaldi jaldi kha rahi thi. Jisaki vajah se khana iske gale ne atak gaya.

Rey ne use pani diya aur bola
" Thoda dhire khaogi to khana kahi bhag nahi jayega. "

" Kya pata tum pura khatm kar do to " usane khate huye kaha aur ek baar fir se Rey ki bolati band ho gayi.

Rey was only looking at her she was looking more beautiful while eating.

Khana kha kar ek bar fir safar shuru huaa. Taani was feelings sleepy isliye wo so gayi. and Rey was driving the car.

Morning 6 o'clock

Rey ne car ek jagah dekh kar side main lagayi aur taani ki taraf dekha jo so rahi thi.
Usane windows band ki aur AC on kar diya aur apani sit ko thoda stretch kar wo bhi so gaya.



9 baje gadi ke horns ki wajah se taani ki nind khuli . She saw Rey sleeping and car ek jagah par park ki hui hai. Usane muskura kar Rey ko dekha and car se bahar nikal aayi.

She saw a river which was near . She went there and fresh hokar she started to play in water.

same time Rey woke up and turned towards
Rey's eyes opened and he looked at the seat next to him. He could not see Tani. He got scared and quickly got out and started looking here and there.

When he saw Tani near the river of the river, he felt relieved. He went to Tani and started looking at her. Tani was still playing in the water. When she saw Rey looking at her, she splashed some drops of water on him which made Rey regain consciousness.

"Good morning Rey " " Morning is already good " he replied

"What do you mean?" Tani asked in confusion.

" Nothing, let's go, otherwise we'll be late"

Both of them left from there. In the afternoon they got food packed from a dhaba and after finding a nice place in the forest, both of them sat under a tree and ate the food.

By now both of them had started knowing each other well.

After eating, both of them started their journey again. The journey was going on with the speed of the car and soft music.

Rey suddenly asked "Do you believe in love?"

Taani who was lost in the music with her eyes closed could not recover from this suddenly asked question and asked "what do you mean"

" means love at first sight"

Tani smiled and replied, " ab hone laga hai.."

Rey became silent again. Both of them reached Darjeeling. It was about to be 12 in the night. Rey dropped Tani to her house.

" Reyansh please stay here it is too late you can leave in the morning, it is not that far from here and your event is tomorrow night so please take some rest."

Tani said it with so much love that Rey could not refuse and both of them went towards home.

Rey saw a very small house outside the city which had something like a hall and a kitchen .

It was a one room house and it looked beautiful there. It was quite cold . Tani gave water to Rey and said "Be comfortable... the house is a little small but it is enough for you."

" No, the house is very nice."

Both of them had taken food on the way. So Tani made two cups of coffee and both of them sat near the window and started talking.

While talking, both of them did not even realize when it became morning. Rey knew that now she had to leave. She had an event in the evening. Rey ko taani se pehali hi nazar me pyar ho gaya tha aur tani ke behaviour se bhi lag raha tha ki use bhi Rey pasand hai. Tani ko wo khona nahi chahta tha. Isliye

Without thinking, Rey grabbed Tani's hand and said, "It's enough, I can't take it anymore."

" What happened rey, are you okay?" He touched rey's forehead to check his temperature

he said looking into Tani's eyes

" Look Tani, it might sound weird but… when I saw you for the first time, you entered my heart right then.”

He remained silent for a few seconds and started looking at Tani's reaction but she was standing normal, there were tears in her eyes.

" You and I have just met. It has been a difficult day for us to be together but in this one day I have lived a year. And I want to live every day like this. With you, with us.

Tani saw that Rey was waiting for her answer, so she let go of Rey's hand and looking out of the window said, tum mujhe nahi jante Reyansh ye mai nahi hu jo mai hu , wo bahot alag hai. Ye mera sach nahi hai.

" Agar tumhe janane se tumhara Sacha janane se mai tumse door hota hu to mujhe koi sach nahi janana. " Ray said, taking Tani's hand back.

" Reyansh aap "

" Tani, I just want this much happiness which only you can give me. Mujhe apani zindagi me shamil kar lo Please."

He said this while putting his head on Tani's forehead. Both of them had their eyes closed. Tani replied in the same way.

" Mai chahkar bhi aapko apani zindagi me shamil nahi kar sakti Reyansh " But there is something I can give you.

Rey opened his eyes and looked at Tani. She took Rey's face in her hands, kissed his forehead and stepped back.

" I know this kiss will never let you forget that you ever met me. Aur isake sath... I am giving you a feeling.

" Nahi taani mujhe ek ehasas nahi tum chahiye. ."

" You should leave from here Reyansh "

" Tani"

" please go"

The girl who was asking Rey to stay at her house a while ago, suddenly asked him to leave the house. Rey looked at her one last time and picked up his luggage and went back.

The next day Re spent half-heartedly preparing for the event but he could not get the thought of Taani out of his mind.

In the evening, after the event, the organizer of the event, who was an elderly lady, invited Rey to her NGO for dinner and Rey could not refuse.

There were many children and that lady at the dining table. Everyone was eating and Rey was talking to them.

A child said, "Will you come to meet us again?"

Rey "l will definitely come. Who wouldn't want to meet such lovely children?"

Rey said while caressing the child's head.

Then another girl said " didi bhi aise hi bolati thi but nahi aayi. "

Then another lady helper came and took all the children to sleep. All the children wished Rey 'bey' and went to sleep. Now it was only Rey and that lady. ।

"What was the girl saying, koin didi?

he asked while eating

" There was a girl named Tani, she was not from here, she was from Darjeeling, she used to come to meet the children regularly but 6 months ago she went to Mumbai for work and just a few days ago the news came that Tani has been murdered.

said this, she started wiping the tears from her eyes.

" You must have some misunderstanding, Tani was here with me just yesterday. "

" No son this cannot be possible because the police themselves came to our place also, I have seen her body myself."

Rey did not know how to explain to her that Tani was alive. Rey asked the lady to come with him and both of them came straight to Darjeeling and stopped the car outside Tani's house.

" Son, why are you taking me to Tani's house?"

" Aapko usase milawane ke liye.."

But as soon as he went to the door, it was locked. After trying hard, when he broke the door, his eyes were wide open with surprise.

How can that house which was beautiful and clean till yesterday become so bad?

" See, I told you this house has been closed for months."

" I have to go, the children are alone there. You should also go । "

She left from there and Rey sat there outside on the stairs.

" How can this be possible? I saw her together, we were together."

Then he heard some noise and went inside again and once again he saw a beautiful room. Tani was also standing there and he hugged Tani.

" Wo kehati hai tum nahi ho but tum to ho . Ho na ?????"

In return Tani separated from Rey and said with a painful smile।

" Kash hoti. ..... ,I went to Mumbai 6 months ago and I met Shivam, he was very nice and used to work with me. I always considered him a friend, but I don't know since when and what all he kept thinking in his mind. A week ago we both went on a long drive. I loved long drives, but he took me to a deserted forest. and usane mere sath........
I kept fighting him to save myself and when he felt he couldn't get me, he killed me."

Rey was listening to her like a statue. But when she said the last line, he got up and held Tani and said

" Enough of joking. The story is very bad. Come with me."

Rey took her by the hand and started to lead her away

"This is not a story Reyansh .
This is my truth which I did not want to tell you. After killing me, he is still roaming freely because the police did not find my body. But now it will get . Mai lekar jaungi aapko waha tak.

she stopped him and said

" won't you help me?"

Rey nodded her head in a tearful yes and hugged her.।

Ye kaisi karishma tha ye koi nahi janta tha but do alag duniya ke log ek dusare ko dekh sakte thy mehaaus kar sakte thy.

Both of them left from there towards their destination. On the way, Rey called his dad and told him everything. At first, he was very scared but after Rey explained, he became normal.
And to catch Shivam, he asked him to come with the police to the same place where Rey and Taani met for the first time.

Rey kept on driving the whole way while looking at Tani, but even after knowing this Tani kept sitting quietly pretending to be unaware.

By the time the police caught Shivam and brought him there, the whole day had passed and it was 9 in the night when Rey reached there.

No one else could see Tani, so Rey cleverly told the police where Tani's body was.

When his body was dug out from the ground, Rey was completely broken but his dad was holding his hand on one side and Tani on the other.

After settling everything the police took Shivam away.

Rey's dad also asked him to leave but he looked at Tani

" Go Reyansh, I can't come with you। "

Reyansh stepped forward and took her hand

Tani came forward and kissed his forehead again with her lips. And the next moment she disappeared.

Rey's dad brought him back home.

Rey remained the same for a long time, but kehate hai na ... love is very powerful. After a month, when Rey went to his dance class, he saw someone familiar among the students.

Rey went to him. And everyone started looking at him.

" You here?”

" I like dancing but I don't know how to dance, will you teach me?"

" Do you want me to teach you now?"

" No, I am just very hungry right now," said Tani, making an innocent face.

Rey had tears in her eyes and he hugged Tani.

And everyone else started cheering for them.

Tani kissed Rey on the forehead again.

And everyone started hooting again.

How it happened, what happened, both of them had nothing to do with it but God had brought the two hearts together. And this was their truth।

I know I have written nonsense but I can at least get a small comment and like. You can even give me shoes and slippers in the comment section. 🙏

End

Writer :- Shivangi Jaiswal (Nupur)













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Comments (8)

Beautifully written. Loved the storyline ..... was really interesting and with a happy ending

a day ago

Very beautifully written. Loved the story

a day ago

Beautiful story Keep writing 🥰🥰🥰🥰

11 days ago

Beautiful ❤️❤️ os Thanks keep updating

15 days ago

Beautiful os dear 😍

16 days ago

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