Chapter 34

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hey guys,

sorry for not being able to reply back to everyone..busy...I have to finish this fan fic by this week before I go to my vacay...

So expect another part 2marow followed by epilogue 😳

Chapter 33

Geet looked at the poison that was in her hand and then at Maan. She drops the poison on the floor and slaps Maan. He looks at her shocked and with anger.

How can you think that by killing yourself will solve all the problems?
Did you ever think about Ayush? What he is going to go through?
No..you only think about yourself...what you want and base your decision on that..without thinking of anyone...
Do you think Ayush will live without his father?
Or do you think that I...(She stops in the middle..she lightly pushes him to leave...but Maan holds her hand and pushes her behind the door... closing it with his feet...)

Maan: Complete your sentence...you what? (Geet looks down...trying to get out of his grasp...) I said finish it...

Geet: Nothing...let go of me...

Maan (pulls her toward him..his hands were on her shoulder now...barley any space between them...) Why are you fighting yourself? Your feelings?

Geet: Am not..let go of me...

Maan: NO...not until you answer my question..so tell me Geet..you what? Tell me

Geet (pushes him) Tell you what? That I won't be able to live without you if you die? Is that what you wanna here? I am tired of sacrificing, trying to live, trying to make sure everyone would be happy..I just...(Maan comes near her...Geet looks at him with tears) How can you do that to me? I had loved you, why did you play with my feelings like that? (Maan looks at her with pain...he stood there like a statue unable to move or think or even react) I had given you everything...my heart, my soul and my body...You broke my heart, left me broken on the road. You left me to kill myself..(Maan looks at her shocked) I had no other choice...I would've jumped from that bridge if (Maan comes and places his hand on her lips to stop talking..she looks at him with tears...she removes his hand..and begins pounding his chest...while crying...) how can you do that? Why? What was my fault of loving you? Why?

Maan wrapped his arms around her letting her cry...she just hugged him crying her heart out...letting out all the pain that she held inside her for all these years...both just stood there...Maan didn't know what to say for his actions, even if he tried he couldn't justify the pain he caused her...he couldn't erase her pain, erase the memories of her living alone raising Ayush by herself..the pain of being betrayed by the only person she trusted and loved...

He picks her up when she was still crying..it was getting worse...he could hear that she was having difficulty breathing...he places her gently on the bed and holds a water glass in front of her. When she didn't make any move to grab the glass, he holds her face and makes her drink the water. She stops and looks at him. He places the glass back on the table.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KQZv0CrLKUQ&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Maan: Geet...I know what I did was beyond wrong..I admit that I was selfish..I let my ego come in the way of our love..the trust is Geet..I did love you...but revenge had clouded my judgement...(he looks down..) No matter what I say will make you forget what I did..but I just want to let you know that I am not that person anymore..you and Ayush are the world to me..and I want us to start our life again..for the future..forgetting the past...I will do anything, endure all the pain for you...But please don't go far away from me...

Sonu: mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do
dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do
barsoN kiyaa hai maine intezaar
mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do

He holds her hand and lightly kisses it...Geet just looks at him with silent tears...he slowly moves up to her arm..kissing her slowly...Geet just closes her eyes...after six years they are this close to each other...she felt his finger caressing her face...she opens her eyes and looks at him..he slowly wipes her tears away with his thumb...he holds her face with his hands...she saw tears in his eyes...slowly she brought her hand up..she stops short near his face...Maan looks at her hand and then at him...she slowly wipes his tears away...he holds her hand that was on his face and kisses it moving up on her arm again..he stops at her lips...

ye aashiqi tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam -2
ye shaayarai tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam
tere liye hi saaNsein mili hain
tere liye hi milaa hai janam
yeh zindagii tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam
ye aashiqii tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam

Maan looks at her and then her lips...he gives her a small pecks on her lip...she slowly brings her hands over his shoulder, pressing it to support herself...she slowly starts responding back to him...wrapping her arms around his neck...both kiss each other with passion..Maan felt so happy to see her in his arms like this...to actually feel her...he felt as if his life was coming back to him...all these years he died to feel her again, to touch her and to love her like this. He wanted to make her happy but couldn't...now he would make everything better...

mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do
dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do
barsoN kiyaa hai maine intezaar
mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do

Karsan: hey hey hey ...

Both look at each other after kissing...Geet pushes him away and goes to the window crying...Maan comes from behind and goes on his knee...he hugs her around the waist with tears...Geet turns around...holding his head as he kisses her stomach...she sits on the floor..Maan puts his head on her lap while crying...

Sonu: har pal tanhaai mein tumhein yaad kartaa thaa
apni sooni duniyaa main aabaad kartaa thaa
Anu: main bhi to hoNThoN se paiGhaam likhti thi
kore se kaagaz pe teraa naam likhti thi
Sonu: dard ke vo sabhi sakht mausam gaye
Anu: ham mile to lagaa pal yahin tham gaye
Sonu: ab na judaa hoN sapne hamaare
jab tak rahe dam mein dam
Anu: ye bekhudi tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam
Sonu: ye aashiqi tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam
Anu: mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do
dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do
barsoN kiyaa hai maine intezaar
mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do

Geet gets up and goes toward the balcony..looking at the moon...Maan holds his diary in front of her...she looks at him and then at the diary...she opens the diary..it had a picture of her, of them and of their marriage...she flips through the pages all of them were dedicated to her...she looks at the diary in shock when she realizes the poems he wrote for her were written in his blood...she drops it on the floor...

She remembers when she used to cry in the corner remembering him, the pain, writing letters to him wanting to tell him about Ayush but never got mailed, instead they were burned in fire...now she saw and realized how much he went though as well..she closes her eyes crying...

Maan stands in front of her...she looks at his hand..slowly bringing it toward her..she saw a faint bruise where he had cut his finger to write...she kisses his finger and looks at him with a sad smile...Maan picks her up and places her on the bed...Geet hugs him tight crying..Maan hugs her back...holding her tightly...

"I want to give you the happiness you deserve...please give me a chance..."

Sonu: tum mere haathoN mein prem lakeer jaisi ho
main deevaanaa raaNjhaa, tum heer jaisi ho
Anu: tum aisi baatoN se beqaraar karte ho
mere sabr kaa aaNchal taar-taar karte ho
Sonu: jaao na is tarah baaNhoN se chhooT ke
Anu: chaahooNgi main tumhein ab sanam TooT ke
Sonu: teri vafaa ke badle mile to, manzoor hai har sita..m
Anu: ye mausiki tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam
Sonu: ye aashiqi tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam
mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do
dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do
barsoN kiyaa hai maine intezaar
mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do

She looks at him...he takes her hand and takes out her bangles one by one...while kissing the place...she turns around showing her back to him...he kisses her back...messaging it slowly while Geet sits there shivering..feeling his touch...he stops his hand on top of her blouse hook...Geet turns around and hugs him...she caresses his face..kissing his tear...

She looks at him and gets off the bed...Maan gets up and holds her hand pulling her close to him...he places his hand under her chin making her look at him...he spins her around...Geet takes his hand and kisses him...Maan moves ahead a little...Geet runs and hugs him from the back...Maan smiles...she smiles back at him with happy tears...

She takes his hand slowly leading to the bed...She lies down, looking at him with a smile...Maan kisses her neck...giving her gentle kisses making sure not to hurt her...Geet hugs him tight digging her nails in his back...she was dying for his love...maybe now she might be ready to let go of everything..maybe begin to trust him again...

Both slept off together feeling content and happy..after so many years they were finally together..maybe now they can start their new life...their past will be there but hopefully during the time that past will no longer will be there...

This is my favorite song..so I hope you guys liked it as well😳

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Comments (41)

Wow... Loved it!!! They r finally together.

12 years ago

Simi wat hpnd to u? U r nt doing ur fav job on dis ff.

12 years ago

haha yep sorry but didnt' want to drag it and ruin this fan ficumm new fan fic really depands on if I have any ideas😆

12 years ago

can't imagine the ff to be ending. pehle geet aur ab ye ff bhi. my heart i aching. bt really happy for both of them. u hv to promise that after u come back frm vacations u will start a neww ff on maaneet. plz

12 years ago

part 33nice part dear...good they have forgiven each other i mean Geet forgave Maan and Maan too has forgiven himself...cont soon dear...

12 years ago

i am happy that geet gave one chance to him to rectify his mistake...

12 years ago

sorry dearlove itcouldnt comment more cause of uncle death

12 years ago

good one.. cannot wait for their future life together...

12 years ago

I'll miss this ff badly. I It. valli222011-12-20 03:01:08

12 years ago

fantastic update dear👏...i want to see them happy finally😛...continue soon!!😊

12 years ago

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