Chapter 3

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Kriyansh Version

Wedding preprations are going on. There was great hustle and bustle. Evryone was busy in his/her work.
A girl standing in pink salwar suit was guiding all the workers how the work was to be done. She was the one responsible for all the arrangements. It was her friends marriage. Oh.! Sorry best friends marriage.
A girl calls from behind Kria
Kria- Han bol Piya.
Piya- Itni tensn na le. Ho jaega sab. Araam se kar. Tu ta aise kaam kar rahi hai jaise teri apni shaadi ho.
Kria- Acha. Tujhe kya pata mai ye sara work kyu kar rahi hu.
Piya- Mere liye aur kiske liye.
Kria- Kar to tere liye hi rahi hu lekin tere jaane ki khushi mei.
Piya with shocked expressions- Kya boli tu..!
Kria- Jo tune suna meri jaan. Dekh kitni der jhela maine tujhe ab finally tere se peecha chutega.
Piya- Haww ja ab i wont talk to u. Ja jake ready hoja evening k liye. Huh.!!
Kria in Piya's room. They both were sharing the room. Kria was here for two weeks. Wedding was after 4 days.
She came out of the washroom with wet hairs and back against the door.
A guy enters and excitedly hugged Kria from behind and pecked her on cheek and picked her up rolling over the bed. Kria was hell terrified. She screamed.
Kria- Kon hai. Chodo mujhe. Tumhari himmat kaise hue mujhe hath b lagane ki.
Guy- Its me Piya. Me Reyansh. Your cousin brother from US. I know we are meating after a long time. Iska matlb ye nahi tum mujhe pehchanogi nahi.
Reyansh is Piya's Uncle's son. They shifted to US 10 years back.
Kria- I am not Piya. Chodo mujhe ab.
Rey left her after listening this.
Rey- Oh Sory. I am really sorry miss...
Kria- Kria.!
Rey- Miss Kria. I thought you are Piya. Its her room na. Aunt told me Piya would be here. I am really sorry.
Kria- Mujhe sab pata hai tum jaise ladko ka. Mauka dhundhte ho. Bahar se aye ho lekin yahn ki ladkio ko kam mat samjhana. Samjhe.!!
Kria asked him to leave the room. Rey left from there. While going in the corridor.
Rey in his mind- Yar what was that. Maine to kuch kaha b nai usne mujhe itna kuch boldia. She was cute. Whats new in that every girl is cute. Nahi uska attitude is different. Lekin pehli hi meeting mei misunderstanding.
While Rey was busy in his thoughts Piya saw him and called him.
Piya- Rey..!! Tu.?
Rey- Yes mai Piya. Kyu vishvas nai hua.
Piya- Tu itna bada ho gya.?
Rey- Tu khud ko dekh shadi krne ja rahi hai to mai vahi thodi atka rahuga.
Piya- Tu ni badlega sachi.Kaisa hai ? Bhabhi kaisi hai.?
Rey- Oye konsi bhabhi. Koini hai abi.
Piya- Matlb jaldi ban jaegi.
Rey- Han (Thinking about Kria)
Piya- Kya.!!
Rey- Yar whos Kria.?
Piya- My best friend. Meri marriage ki prepartns krvane k liye pehle aa gayi.
Rey- Oh acha. Badi sec-c bandi hai.
Piya- Rey kya boli ja raha. Dhyan se. She is not that easy to handle. Bohay khatarnak hai.
Rey- Acha aisa kya. Dekhi ja. Teri shadi se pehle pehle maine use apna na bana lia.
Piya- Tujhe kya kabi US mei koi pasnd ni ayi kya.?
Rey- Ayi na lekin iske jaise attitude vali koi nai mili..
Piya- All the best. Vaise to i know aisa kabi ho nahi paega fir b try karne mei kya jata hai.
After this Rey left from there.
He saw Kria walking backward. He got an idea. He too started walking backward but in opposite direction. As a result they both strike with each other. Rey asked for forgivenes and pretended that it happened by chance. Kria ignored it and was back to her back of assisting workers. Rey again thought of trying the same trick. He again started walking in the same manner. But this time Kria was aware and she went to some other place from where she was standing. Rey landed sitting on a sack. ๐Ÿ˜† He heard a laughter. It was Kria. Rey was fida on that smile too. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ With this Kria left from there.
Rey in his mind- Hassi to Phassi. Kya yar why the hell i am liking her every ADA. Is it Love At First Sight..!! Stop thinking Rey. He got up from where he was sitting and went inside home.
Kria was sitting with Piya' friends. They all were chatting and giggling happily.
Rey stood a few meters away from her where he could listen everything they were discussing clearly. So that she might not notice him.
Girl- Tumhe apne liye kaisa ladka chahiye.?
Kria- Mujhe. Sochne do.
*Thinking* Han to suno. Mujhe aisa ladka chahiye jo mere khatir kuch b kar sake. Gundo se lad sake apni life ki parwah kiye bina. Mere mama papa ki bohat respect kare. Mere kuch kehne se pehle mere parents se baat kare. And vo jo mujhe love kare Till The End. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Rey heared all this.
Rey in his mind- Waah. Miss ne khud hi ideas de diye. Ab kaha bachke jaogi miss Kria.
Next day Kria's parents were coming.
Next day morning. Kria was ready early. She was to meet her parents after 2 weeks. She missed them so much. And her wait was over.
Kria parents entered. Kria hugged them both.
Kria- Hey mama papa kaise ho ? I missed you big vala.
Rey saw all this melo drama.
Rey- Ye Indians kabi nai badlenge.
Well i am also an Indian. To mai b shuru hota hu na.
Rey- Namste Uncle. Namaste Aunty. *Touching their feet*
K Mom- Beta tum kon.? Maine pehchana nahi.
Kria was fakely smiling at this action of him. She thought *Ye ise kya ho gya ekdam se. Kya ye sachi aisa hai ya he is pretending. Ise pta b hai ye mere parents hai*
Rey- Aunty kaise pehchanoge. We are meeting for the first time. I am Reyansh. Frm US.. Piya ka cousin.
K Fathr- Oh acha.! Kaise ho beta.?
Rey- Arre ap log khade hi rahoge kya. Ayiye na andar. Baithiye ap log. Mai ap dono k liye breakfast leke ata hu.
Kria was seeing all this without any word.
Kria- Rey ap rehne do mai le aungi. Koi zarurt nahi hai mere mama papa hai. Mai inke liye sab krlungi. Ap jaiye..
Rey- Aunty Uncle ap log must be tired. Ap log room mei jaiye Kria will bring the breakfast there only.
Kria parents while leaving the drawing room.
K Mom- Kitna acha ladka hai na.
K Fathr- Han. US jakar b apne sanskar nahi bhula.
This was overheard by Rey *Naughty Rey ;)*
Rey to himself- Plan 1 succesful. With this he winked at Kria.
Kria was confused and doubted what all had happened was really true.
Two days passed. In these two days he had accomplished 3 of his plans successively. And now it was the time for his last try. It was sangeet ceremony to be held at night.
Rey was working from the morning to make this night special for her.

At Night. Sangeet Ceremony.

Rey who was still busy in making the arrangements for the guests and was fully drentched with sweat.
He didnt even noticed Kria coming towards him in a beautiful white saree.. She was losted in him. Piya saw this and came to Kria. Kria who was still in Rey's thoughts didnt noticed Piya standing near him. Rey was also wearing white Kurta Pyjama said to herself *Aj kitne smart lag rahe hai. Hayee.!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
It was heard by Piya.
Piya- Kon Kria.?
Kria- Rey.!! *In her thoughts*
Piya- Kya boli tu ?
Kria was astonished to see Piya beside her.
Kria- Mai.! Mai.! Kya boli. Kuch b nai. Tune kuch suna kya.?
Piya- Maine nahi to. Tune kuch bola tha kya? *EvilSmile*
Kria- Na.!
Meanwhile Rey called Piya and she went to Rey.
Piya- Rey. Bhabhi aa rahi hai. Thoda apna hulliya sudhar lo. Gai vo kaam se. Hogi tere par lattu.!
Rey- Challenge kisne kia tha. Acha chal ja and let me enjoy my moment. Sun maine tere ko bola tha mera room decorate krne ko krva dia tha na.?
Piya- Bhai fikar not. Sab set hai. Lekin Rey dekhke kuch galat nai.
Rey- Han. Trust me mai kabi b Kria ko use nai
Isliye thoda tensed.
Piya left and he looked at Kria. She was looking an angel. So gorgeous. Rey to himself * Ise koi haq nai hai yar mujh par aise var krne ka*
Rey went to Kria and held her by her waist. Kria was loving that moment. But there were so many people so she was a bit terrified. Rey immediately pecked Kria.
Kria- *With ๐Ÿ˜ฒ expresions. Rey apne ye kya kia.
Rey- Dubara krke dikhau kya. *Winks*
With this he took Kria outside the house.
Rey- Kitna aur tadpaogi mere ko.
Kria- Matlb.?
Rey- Dont you like me ?
Kria *Blushing*
Rey- Aye haye mai marja teri bulshing te. ๐Ÿ˜†
Kria- Bohat jyda karti hu.
And she hugged Rey. But Rey who was having some naughty intentions broke the hug and kissed her fiercely. And picked her up in his lap and landed in his room.
Kria- Sangeet function ka kya.?
Rey- Vo jaye bhaad mei.


*The End*

Baki ka apne ap soch lena sare..
M very bad in shwng d romacne thng..

This is for Piya di. Di ab na gussa hoiyo mere se.. Ye maine apke liye likha..
It isnt good i knw but also bt tht bad.. ๐Ÿ˜†

Do review with bada vale cmntss.

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Comments (21)

haye naam pad ke hi dil khush ho gaya..aww its of that punjabi song by harbhajan manncoming to ur OS hehehe... n KR n SS... heheh too much...shaadi kisi aur ki.. baat aage badd gayi inki..hehhehe

10 years ago

Haayee kudiye mennu maaf karde...meinne Tera chamak challo wale par comment nahi Kia.,.sholly Baba... haayeee it is awesome!!!I love the bond kriyaansh share!!!!unki friendship is kamaal dhamal!!!!rey kria ke peeche gaya...and that cheapo... Urggghhhbut humara hero Da puttar!!!he saved her!!!loved it re!!! Bahut mastam!!!

10 years ago

haayeee kudiye!!!this is awesome!!!!loved the way u have shown rey and kria!!rey heheheee naughty rey and then the challenge!!!rey itna sab doing to manofy kria and to patofy her!!!haayeee it was too cute!!! And finally confession!!! loved it!!

10 years ago

Cute n lovely os...I loved it...Rey ka flirting nature n then uske plans .. kya baat hai...Too good..Thanx for d pm

10 years ago

mmmuuuaaahhh...loved ths update my punjabi kudi.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ths ws such a awesome vala love story my God.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Rey is such a flirt here...aur kriya..atom bomb.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒaur tune jo woh likkhi thi ki kriya ko kaisa ladka pasand hai..sach bol waisa ladka tujhe chahiye na?? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Rey ka plans nd the way he treated kriya's parents..Lol.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†bilkul romeo rey tha.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณbadiya likkhi hai tune..write more n more..taki mai aur padh saku.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

10 years ago

Wonderful job Rupanshi ๐Ÿ‘Bohut cute tha...๐Ÿ˜ณI loovvveeeddd it...โค๏ธThank you for writing for us...๐Ÿค—Keep writing...

10 years ago

Haye haye haye... Ya Allah mujhe Iss duniya se mukt hona hai...Kya likha hai... Mein fida ho gayi...Rey Ka lover boy attitude was brilliant and the way he treated her parents...Kash duniya Mein abhi bhi aise ladke hote...I doubt kabhi they... ๐Ÿ˜† Tune romantic scene nai diya... But I was shocked at the first when he hugged her from the back...Pehle mujhe laga Rey iska hubby hoga...Then I thought ki isse use karega...Then I thought ki parents pasand nai karenge...Then I was like yeh pakka reject karegi...But I was wrong all the time... Yet I liked it.Aise hi likhti reh...Baalike... Tu ek din Varun Dhawan se mile... Yeh mera aashirvaad hai...

10 years ago

it was superb and fantastic and perfect love confession ending... loved it

10 years ago

awesome OS!accha tha...kuddoos!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

10 years ago

Oyehoyeee...So cute and naughty update...Especially last line...Sangeet ka kya???Rey:sangeet jaye bhaad main*evil grin*

10 years ago

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