Chapter 9

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sravani

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Hello fellas.How are you all doing?? So here is the next update.Don't know if I'm asking for more.But the likes have come down from 42 to 31??It's so disappointing.Not that I've been sending PM's to unknown people.I've been sending PM's only to ones who have requested me.Here I write the update disheartened.Leave a comment.

Part 7

Swayam was walking through a tunnel.All he could see was their memories.Their fight in abandoned corridor.Sharon thanking Swayam in the same place.To his left.To his right.All he saw was them.The pain.The longing to be together.Sharon's insults.This was the conclusion of the bitter sweet relationship they shared.A new beginning awaiting for both where all is sweet.Where there is no place for misunderstanding.All he could see was them,their relationship and her.The walk from the entrance of school to the rehearsal hall seemed like the walk of their entire relationship.The relationship of their's which hadn't existed.Swayam was lost in memories until he was hit hard by a staff member.After years of pain one thing that Swayam would be proud of is to hold himself back from confessing.The regret he stored for not being expressive all these years had gone.Swayam's decision to step back from being the helmsman of the relationship did pay back.He could wait years to see Sharon being all this crazy.

Swayam entered the rehearsal hall with which he had a close connection.The rehearsal hall in the school was a copy of their college's rehearsal hall. Swayam's day would never have felt complete until he met Sharon in the rehearsal hall of their college.When they started off with construction of dance school making rehearsal hall just as their college's was out of question.Their college had funds.But for the starters who had nothing except skill was a tough task to accomplish.Sharon was adamant to get the rehearsal hall done.Swayam too wished for the rehearsal hall but him being the most understanding chucked the idea as they were falling out of funds.It was then Sharon stepped in and arranged for funds.Swayam wasn't sure why Sharon was too keen on getting the same kind of rehearsal hall made.The rehearsal hall in their college being gifted to Sharon by her father was a strong reason to believe.May be Sharon wanted the same kind as it was gifted by her dad.Though Swayam's heart knew that she also wanted it because of their connection with it.Somehow he wasn't able to figure it out.Now looking back his conscious was in a state of acceptance.Finally the rehearsal hall they had was just the same as their college's.

Sharon walked slowly to the rehearsal thinking about their conversation in parking lot.Chiding self for not responding back to Swayam's feelings.The satisfaction she saw on his face when she addressed him aap.She was ready to address him aap for the rest of her life only if she could see her Swayam happy.

They finally reached rehearsal hall the walk to which felt unending.The school being only 6 months old the main challenge was to attract aspiring dancers.They as usual started off discussing about their schedule.

Nilesh: chalo Sharon discuss karthe hai...

Sharon: ha..but schedule toh Swayam ke paas hai..

Nilesh: ha toh usse kaho start karne..

Sharon: Swayam..

Swayam:(eager to know how she addresses him)..hm..

Sharon: Swayam aap...

No doubt the diva who would never show a whiff of her mind is letting go her ego.Her feelings were seldom voiced.Both were in a state where they couldn't mull over what they had done.The murkier life they were in was filled with happiness.

Entire gang: Kyaaa(loudly)

Sharon: What kya??(a little embarrassed)

Nilesh: (thinking) kuch nahi Sharon chalo start karte hai..

Swayam: Haa toh guys you all know right now ..we don't have trainers to train the students here so aaj se I'm dividing the schedule ...and we have to train them is it fine with you guys??

Rey: Sure.Swayam

Nilesh: Haa yaar...

Vicky: Yo!! schedule toh batha

Swayam: Tek..hai..Rey I know that you have been busy in the evenings with meeting.,,so you have contemporary classes in the morning..is that fine.?

Rey: Yeah Fine.

Swayam: I will be taking salsa classes ..you know there are a group of girls ..

Sharon: Why will you take salsa classes??(angry)

Swayam: Kya hua??

Rey:(understanding that Sharon is jealous) Swayam ek kaam kar ..I will be taking salsa and contemporary classes both.

Swayam: Yaar ..??

Rey: vaise bhi I'm getting bored at home...

Nilesh: mera bata na..

Swayam: yeah tu hip hop lega..Vicky tu locking and popping... and Neha tum bollywood dance

Neha: Neha liking bollywood dancing

Swayam: Guys now this is the requirement...jaise hi dusre dance forms ke liye puche jayenge ..you have to jump in

Bharat: Pakka Swayam tu tension math le

Swayam thought Sharon would stay back completing the extra work.Sharon being Sharon completed the extra work in no time.Sharon informed Swayam about the work and was about to leave.Nilesh and Vicky saw Swayam lost in Sharon.Nilesh and Vicky quickly scribbled something on a piece of paper and threw it in Swayam's bag.

Swayam: Nil sunna aaj please mera work tu karle...

Vicky:(teasing) Kyun kisse ke saath jaana hai tujhe..

Swayam:(acting) Nahii ...mujhe ..nahi

Nilesh: acha tek hai..karlunga par ek condition par

Swayam:(confused) kya

Nilesh: kal tu jab aayega ..school tu Sharon ke saath ayega aur uska haath pakad ke aayega...

Swayam: nahi..tu pagal hai kya

Nilesh: toh chup chap apna kaam karle

Swayam: please Nil...

Nilesh: Yeah .karunga par condition sunna tune ??

Swayam:(giving up) Ok.Fine.

Nilesh:(winking at Vicky)

Swayam:(almost running) Thank You.

Nilesh:(smiling)Swayam(shouting as Swayam was leaving) tere bag mein ek note raka hai ..dekh lena

Swayam:(not paying much attention)ha tek hai tek hai..

Swayam started running towards Sharon who was walking slowly.After everything that has ever happened between them all they wanted to do was to spend some time together.Together in silence.Together lost in each other's eyes.Together.Together was all mattered.Be it pain or suffering.Be it happiness or fight.It had to be together.

Swayam: Sharon come I will drop you..

Sharon: Nahi woh..actually I got my car

Swayam: oh..but you can leave it there..I drop you

Sharon: kal subah??(expecting him to offer her a lift the next morning)

Swayam: hm..I will pick you up in the morning

Sharon:(happy) OK.

Finally the drive started.For the first time ever Swayam was all excited to drive someone home.After all she was his love.He'd drive her home daily but being close to her all of a sudden wasn't something he planned for.He liked how slowly but steadily they were being comfortable with each other.

Swayam:(hesitant) Sharon mein tumse kuch puchu??

Sharon: Yeah.

Swayam: Kal mein jab tumhe pick karunga ...and we reach school can I ..I mean Can I

Sharon:(waiting) What Can I??

Swayam: Can I hold your hand and enter(scared)

Sharon:(happy) Yeah.Sure.Kyun??

Swayam: woh...stupid Nil ..mujhe ek challenge diya hai issliye..

Sharon:(sad) ohh challenge...

Swayam:(suddenly) Mujhe koi problem nahi hai tumhara haath pakad ne mein..I can hold whole my life

Sharon:(looking at Swayam)

Swayam:(realizing what he said) Wohh I better start driving now

Sharon:hm...

Swayam: Sharon

Sharon: haa bolo

Swayam: Tum hindi songs sunna chahogi??

Sharon: kyun tumhare paas hai?

Swayam: Yeah actually I got some of them(showing her the CD's)

Sharon:(softly) mere liye??

Swayam:(not looking at her) Yeah.

Swayam: Tumhara ghar agaya hai

PRECAP:

Swayam: Tum mujhe aap kyun keh rahi ho Sharon.I've accepted you the way you are

Sharon:(confused) Kyun tumhe acha nahi laga?


After sometime

Sharon's Mom:(laughing hard) Tu usse aap keh rahi thi...

Sharon: What's so funny???

Later

At home Swayam opens the note which is folded.He finds a red rose in the folded note.The note read:

To the most handsome guy I've ever known..this is for you.

Keep smiling

Your love.

Swayam:(angry) Yeh Nil...simmi bas naam ke liye GF hai...hum sab guys ke saath dostana karna chahta hai ..dekhlunga kal usse

Next day

Swayam: Nil ye note kya hai??

Nilesh: Kaun sa(reading the note)

Swayam: ha yahi

Nilesh:(confused) Yeh mera nahi hai...ruk tu apna bag check kar

Swayam: (a little angry) mere paas toh ek hi bag hai ussme ye mila

Nilesh:(confused) wait(taking his bag searches for his note and finds it) yeh le mera note ye hai

Rey: Guys ruko tum log..wait ..mein dekhtha hoon

Swayam:Rey dekh issne kya likha

Rey:(teasing tone)

Stop staring at Sharon and concentrate on work.

Your dost

Swayam:(confused) Yeh tha tera note

Nilesh:(relieved) Yeah.

Sharon:(angry) Nil You are mad.









sravani.gunturi2012-07-03 01:19:40

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Comments (26)

well done. keep it up

12 years ago

awesm update dear, update soon sory 4r delay in comment

12 years ago

sharon casllingswayam aap... too cute.. thnx for pm...pls update nxt part soon

12 years ago

niceee update...sharon not allown swayam to take salsa classes...was too cute...aisey kaisey allow karegi...

12 years ago

Sorry for the late comment my dear...ur FF is rocking no doubts, so pls dont feel sad for any reason...awsum update...the channelizing of Swayam's thoughts abt the journey of their relationship was beautiful...luvd it where Swayam says I have accepted u as u r...really luking forward to seeing these two taking further steps ahead in their relationship😊 pls update soon...

12 years ago

awesome update sravani...loved gang's reaction when sharon called swayam aap...n wow jealous sharon...she got jealous when swayam said he would take the salsa class...loved it...precap is really interesting...eagerly waiting for it...update soon...

12 years ago

awesome update sravani!!!sharon again called swayam aap in front of everyone ... 😛awww... jealous sharon 😉 she didnt want swayam to teach salsa to girls...the precap 🤣 plz update asap 😊

12 years ago

Nice one.thanks for the pm.

12 years ago

Awesome update sravani...they want to be together no matter what...loved itand nil ka note😆update soon

12 years ago

Hayye..BEAUTIFUL part.I LOVE the beginning,where you decribed Swayam's memories.i LOVE the drive...and him buying Hindi music for her. I loved how happy she got when he wanted to hold her hand:D Precap looks WOW!Can't wait!:D

12 years ago

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