Chapter 1

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Tanya

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Hello people. This one is a very short story. Its more like series of personality analysis that our fav heroes are doing upon themselves and their changing feelings. This is dedicated to the cutest couple on IF: Aadisha. (Those of you who know them, good for you and those who dont..you dont need to 😉) Dear Aadisha, Love you loads <3 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------

~Feelings~

The mix of amazing emotions

~Chapter 1~

Sanyukta sat beside her hostel room window and admired the beauty of the moon. The crescent shaped moon shone brightly along with the twinkling stars. Sanyukta's hair blew over her face as a cool breeze came along. Her eyes looked beautiful, and happy. Her face glowed in the moon's shining light and she was smiling. She kept looking at the branches of the trees, swaying in the breeze and the flowers dancing beneath the moonlight. How peaceful the atmosphere seemed. Everything seemed so beautiful and just so perfect! Whereas.. her life seemed to be the complete opposite. She had just fought with Randhir in the canteen, thinking he had creeped into her room and stolen her reports. It turned out that Parth was the actual culprit. She was still in a state of shock. How could Parth do such a thing? But, she was also upset with herself. Ever since she'd found out about Randhir's mother, she did have a soft corner for him. But ofcourse, her ego hid the soft corner and always made her do something wrong. Now that she thought about the past 1 year at FITE, she could see the number of mistakes she'd done. Yes, Randhir did behave like an MCP. But there was a reason to it... and she had never cared to think of that. All the times that she had hurt Randhir, and talked about his mother despite his warnings, she'd always ignored him and hurt him. She always did the most silliest things like spraying looser all over the walls of Randhir's room. She knew that Randhir was equally at fault, but she also knew that everytime Randhir did something to trouble her or get revenge at her, she was angered or insulted. But she was never hurt. Never emotionally hurt. On the other hand, everytime Sanyukta troubled Randhir, she always hurt him emotionally...Her smile faded away as she realised how wrong she'd been. And how she'd made another huge mistake by accusing randhir of stealing the reports from her room, without trying to gather evidence...

*Flashback*

R: Sanyukta chalo mere saath. Mein bus stop jaa raha hu. Meri Shimla ki bus aati hi hogi aur FITE ki bus bhi jald hi aajaegi. Chalo mere saath yaa fir raho yahi pe apne naye dosto ke saath.

Sanyukta followed him but on her way, slapped one of the goons. They had then reached the bus stop, only to find that the goon had returned, with a bigger gang this time. She got scared and stood behind Randhir.

Goon: Aye ladke. Humein tujse koi problem nahi hai. Chupchap katle yaha se.

One of the goons had tried to touch Sanyukta and pull her by her hair, only to be stopped by Randhir. Randhir fought with the goons to save her and got injured in the process. Even Sanyukta had fallen and hurt her foot. Randhir defeated the goons and carried Sanyukta in his arms, despite the injury on his shoulder.

*Flashback ends*

Randhir had helped her, saved her dignity from being harmed. He could have walked off, but despite their enmity, he had stood there to defend Sanyukta. Then he'd even got injured in the process, yet he cared about her injury more and had carried her all the way back to the Dhaba, in his arms. This thought brought a smile to her face. She thought of the numerous times when Randhir had helped her. The way he'd catched hold of her hand when she'd tripped. The way he'd dropped her safely back to her hostel room when she was drunk. She made up her mind to do something tomorrow and went to bed. Soon she fell asleep.

------Next Morning-------------

Their last class had just ended. Everybody started moving out of the class. Randhir was just packing his stuff in his bag and Sanyukta was waiting for him to finish. As he walked towards the door of the classroom, Sanyukta caught hold of his hand and stopped him.

R: What the...

Sanyukta clapped her hand onto his mouth.

S: Sorry.

Randhir's eyes widened in shock. Sanyukta removed her hand from his mouth. Before he could speak, she continued.

S: Shutup Randhir. Chupchaap meri baat suno. Listen Randhir. I am sorry ki mene kal tum par bina koi sabut ke shak kiya. I am sorry ki mene pehle bhi ese kahi baar tum par bina vajah shak kiya. I am sorry ki mene humesha tumhaare manaa karne par bhi tumhaari maa ke baare mein baat ki. I am sorry ki uss din mene tumhaare papa ko hurt kiya. I am sorry ki mene humesha tumhe nicha dikhaane ki koshish ki and I am sorry ki mein tumhe captain ki position se hataana chahti thi. I am sorry Randhir , uss har ek galti ke liye, jo mene kiya hai. Mein aur galtiyaan nahi karna chahti hu. Parth sahi kehta hai. Tum intelligent ho, aur tum iss dream team ke captain banne ke laayak ho.

Randhir stood there, speechless. He was amazed. This girl never failed to surprise him. One day ago she was fighting furiously with him and the next she was apologising? He didnt know what to say and so he spoke what he always does.

R: Hmph. Aagayi naa tum apni aukaad par? Samajh aagayi naa apni galtiyaan. Hmph. Tum ladkiyaan naa. Pehle galti karti ho fir sorry bolti ho. (smirks) tumhe kya hogaya aaj Farzi. Aur kya kehti thi tum? Ki mein ek sadu hu, ek MCP.

S: Haan. Tum ho ek MCP. Par sirf mere MCP ho.

Sanyukta's eyes widened as she realised what she had blurted out. Shit. what the hell had she said. She turned around and rushed out of the room. Randhir himself was in shock. ''Mere MCP?''

---------In Sanyukta's Room--------

Sanyukta sat on her bed, thinking about what she had said to Randhir. She had intended on only saying sorry to him but had unknowingly blurted out something, she herself hadn't realised. She understood now, that her feelings toward Randhir were changing. She felt a mix of emotions inside her. Hatred, love, possessiveness,care, sympathy, empathy etc. But only one feeling rose above them all...LOVE. She wasn't in love yet..No. But yes she was starting to hate Randhir less...and that certainly was some progress😆 She was starting to feel something else...but what? Well, that was for time to decide. For now..she had to sleep!

--------------In Randhir's room----------

''Tum sirf mere MCP ho''

As Randhir lay on his bed, he kept remembering this particular line. He kept having flashbacks of the way she'd apologised. The way they had kissed. The way Sanyukta had falled over him on her bed when he'd come to her house. The way he'd felt possessive about her in the village when Parth had helped her. Possessive? Now that certainly was a question. He was confused about his feelings towards Sanyukta. He still hate dher, but after her apology he felt something change. He realised that she wasn't showing sympathy to him but was actually felt guilty for all her mistakes. He could feel a number of emotions blending inside him. He realised that his feelings towards her were changing...he realised that everytime he had saved her, he had cared for her. Why? Well that was a question that only time could answer. He switched of the light and fell asleep.

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Both our heroes fell asleep resolving to give a chance to change the equation that they shared. To begin the next day with a fresh start. To not fight uselessly..to not suspect and blame each other without reason...to not shout at each other in anger. They were still ready to fight when needed and prove each other better than the other and the were yet to fall in love. But for now their ffeelings were changing..and they were trudging along with small and slow steps, along the path of love...

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Comments (33)

Perfect!I was in a flow while reading this... Luvd it ;-)

10 years ago

^^Tich se mein agree karti hoon .Pehle toh Mujhe thappad mariyo , itna time loyal na Maine ? Kitna bhaav khaati hoon Naa :'$ Coming to the OS : What I loved the most was the cute simplicity of the OS .I liked the progressive realization in SanDhir , they were willing to make amends . Sanyukta was so cute *mere mcp* also , she realized her mistakes .. Well that was a pleasant read .Brought a lamba smile on my face :D Bohot accha tha , I loved te initial description of the surroundings could pictures it .Tanu :* It was beautiful .

10 years ago

hell.. ghatiya like button kaam nahi kar raha..mere mcp???? Kya jhatka lagaa randhir ko...actually i fell in love with your confessions wale one shots.. Show mein toh abhi dikhenge nahi toh tumhare OS's se kaam chalaa rahi hoon..

10 years ago

loved the OS...!loved the way you incorporated scenes that we have already shown...!beautifully written...!loved the bit when sanyu said that he is her MCP...! and she realised that she is in love with him...!can't wait to read more of your work ...! simply beautiful ...!

10 years ago

SuperbI totally loved itGr8 work by you

10 years ago

Perfect !! The ending was totally fabulous MyLiFeMyRuLeS..2014-03-18 09:20:04

10 years ago

I can't believe I hadn't read this OS before! This was amazing honey! Ur sure do have a sensitive and mature style of writing at such a young age! 👏 You grasped their emotions and state of mind perfectly! 👍🏼Thanks for the PM and continue writing! Will be looking forward to more stories ❤️

10 years ago

Aah! Your order is my command! Definitely shall continue. Thank you for reading xD

10 years ago

well written...beautifully expressed. i loved the way you wrote their reflections..sandhir scene was cute.."mere MCP"..loved that bit.. :)you should continue this...make it an ss..its really really good!! :D

10 years ago

Anu di! How can I thank you? I am really literally crying with tears of joy. You know when I joined IF i was quite nervous whether you high-figh writers like Priya di, Tich, Aru di and You will accept me as a friend or no but I cannot express the joy I feel, now that you all treat me as such a close friend and sister, in words. I am not flattered. My limit of flattery has long exceeded. But I am just joyous. Thank you soo much. Im so glad you liked it and I appreciate you for taking out the time to read this story and share your review. Love you loads! *Hugs with tears of happiness* Also yours truly, Tanz!

10 years ago

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