Chapter 26
kriya is stunned to see rey's final surprise..it is indeed a most precious gift for
kriya..she kept on staring at the surprise..after couple of mins rey whispers "you liked
it?"...kriya without blinking or looking at rey, whispers back "i love it"...rey finally
feels satisfied..he thought kriya will jump in excitement after seeing this surprise but she
gave more matured reaction this time..her eyes are twinkling with happiness plus drops of
tears in them..a smile is floating on her face...rey once again looks back at his surprise
which is a building model, name written on it "KREYA dance institute"..both stands there
looking at it...
rey : you know kriya..dad has baught this huge land in Mumbai long back..he wants to build a
branch of his business here for me..he has recently discussed the building plan also with
engineer here..soon the construction gonna start..but the office building, garden area plus
parking lot will only cover 60% of the land..dad was thinking about what can be done on
remaining land..so when i was thinking about the 3rd surprise for you, this idea came in my
mind...30% of land will use for our dance institute and remaining 10%, i had suggested dad
that we can plan a day care for kids of our employees...he will decide on that..will get a
huge space kriya..will build all those necessary things which are required to teach and
learn different styles of dances...he looks at her..then again looking at the building he
continues
rey : next year will complete our Bcom degree..by that time our office building will be
almost ready..so we can start working with the help of dad plus will do our MBA also..after
finishing MBA we can take over the Mumbai branch completely..then will start building our
this dance institute..our dream..with our own earned money..once we open this institute if
you want you can leave the job and manage dance institute..i will manage the work..whenever
i get time, will come to institute or whenever i need any help you can come over to office..
he stops whatever he was saying when he felt kriya's lips on his cheek...yes kriya could not
hold back her emotions when rey started narrating his dream plans for their future..she
kisses his cheek..she stands like that for few seconds before moving away from him..it was
soft and gentle kiss but for rey, it is as if the time has stopped for those seconds...he did
not look at her after the kiss..instead he continues narrating his future plans...
rey : you know kriya i took permission from your mom also before proceeding with this
plan..it was not that tough as i mentioned her that will complete our MBA before starting
off with this institute...after all she wanted you to do MBA right?? again he receives
another kiss on his other cheek..this time the kiss expresses all the emotions kriya was
feeling at that moment..he push the thought and once again continues looking at the model..
rey : even we can involve our friends in this institute kriya..you know they are really
worried about their passion for dance..they are not getting how will they proceed with their
future considering dance as a career option..this will give them the goal they needed...they
can teach their signature dance forms in our institute..again rey receives another kiss..this
time he could not hold back his feelings and emotions..he closes his eyes...kriya slowly
turns his face towards her and kisses on his forehead..then on eyes..then nose..she was
about to kiss on his lips, rey opens his eyes slowly and says "i am sorry kriya"..she gets
confused why rey is saying sorry..understanding her mind he replies "for not discussing
anything with you before deciding on our future"...this time without wasting the time kriya
presses her lips on rey's...it is a slow and soft kiss..to calm their mind and let out all
emotions they were hiding till now..after a min kriya observes that rey is not holding
her..his hands are in his jeans pockets..without breaking the kiss, she removes his hands
from his pockets and finds that they are in tight fists...
she breaks the kiss and looks at him..to which he just bends his head avoiding looking at
her..kriya understands that rey wanted to hold her but it was her so called "condition"
because of which he was trying hard to not touch her by his hands as told by her...she fell
for him once again for his loyalty..she once again press her lips on his..while kissing she
slowly opens his fists with her hands and put them on her waist..then she puts her hands on
his neck holding tight...rey was really touched by her this simple gesture and start
responding with all his hidden emotions for her..within few seconds he starts kissing
her more passionately taking the lead...she let him to...rey push her to near by wall and
starts kissing her all over her face..then goes to neck then he proceeds to shoulders...he
wanted to go further down so he holds her dress shoulder straps and starts to move them down
but his conscious mind stops him to do so without her permission..so still holding her
straps, he looks at her..kriya understands him..she just turns her head to other side all
blushing..he got her simple gesture and pushes her dress further down and starts kissing her
fiercely this time...it was only then when rey inserts his hand in her dress and starts
caressing her inner thigh, she stops him by putting her hand on his..rey stops immediately
and looks at her...kriya points at the building model..rey doesn't understand what she is
telling..he looks at the model all confused...
kriya :(pointing at model) wahan tak pahochna hai tho hume ye sab postpone karna hoga..will have to wait...
rey smiles...he pulls back her dress and says " yeah right..hum itni jaldi next level nahi
ja sakte..will definitely wait"...then he was about to move away from kriya, she stops
him...she pulls up his left sleeve and touch the tattoo..she can still see those bluish
shades on the tattoo..this time she could not hold back her tears..rey hugs her
understanding her emotions...then he finally says those 3 magical words for which kriya was
waiting badly...yess finally rey says "i love you kriya"...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
swayam took sharon to his house..she did not utter a word throughout the journey...once they
reach his house and inside the house, sharon stops him
" i am sorry swayam"
"you dont have to be sharon"
"no swayam...last few days...sighs..last few days i really realised how much i had hurt you
in past..how much i insulted you...i am sorry for insulting you and hurting you again and
again since RDX sir party...yes swayam..before that party i never felt anything for you..you
were just a weakiing for me..but that night at party, though in drunken state, but your
loyalty touched me..since then i started noticing you..started liking you..but i was a
bloody control freak then...who has huge set of insecurities..it was because of those
insecurities i never accepted my feelings for you..every time you came to help me or to
support me, i used to feel very happy..aise lagta tha jaise ek ajeeb si confidence agai ho
mujme..but never accepted it..always denied and use to insult you..i am sorry swayam...past
few days,staying away from you made me realise my mistakes..i am really sorry..."
she breaks down and starts crying...swayam hugs her..but doesn't reply anything because only
he knows how much he has suffered whenever sharon had rejected him and insuted him..he lets
her cry and let out all her guilt...so that it should not affect their relationship in
future..after few seconds he move from hug and asks "coffee?"
sharon : nods her head but when he was leaving she holds his wrist..(after couple of
seconds) "kiss me"
swayam doesn't reply for few seconds because he was busy in studying her emotions..it was
then when sharon says"please", swayam crushes his lips on hers..their kiss was passionate
and intense..they starts letting out all their past frustrations and bitter moments through
their kiss...sharon pushes him near by wall and slowly removes his shirt..she starts
showering kisses on all over his face and then on his chest...when it becomes uncontrollable
swayam he grabs her hair and press his mouth on hers kissing her wildly..swayam slowly
lifts sharon and she circles her legs around his waist...without breaking their kiss he takes
her to his room and made her lay on his bed..they kiss wildly and slowly sharon inserts her
hand in his jeans..he too starts caressing her inner thighs while kissing on her shoulder
and leaving love bites every where...when swayam's hand touches sharon's inner core, he
moves back suddenly...it was then they come back to their senses and realises what were they
about to do..
clutching his thick hair, swayam sighs.." i am sorry sharon..damn what was i doing??
huh..how can loose control like this..? i am really sorry sharon.."
sharon too gets up..adjusting her dress "that;s okay swayam..we both are responsible for
that..will have to wait for some more time.."
swayam : yeah..come here..and hugs her...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
later all couples reach sharon's house for dinner...rey tells his gang about his 3rd
surprise...all readily agree to join the dance institute in future..sharon and swayam say
that they will be partners in that institute...
THE END
hows it...i know its not upto your expectations guys...this is really 1st time i wrote something passionate scene..so i could manage only this much...plz forgive me...but plzzz give your reviews this time...as this is the last part of my 1st work in this forum...it really means a lot to me...plz dont give "awesome" "amazing" one word comments..if if you did not like my update, feel free to express it...and dont forget to hit the like tab...😊
Your reaction
Nice
Awesome
Loved
LOL
OMG
Cry
Comments (141)
i am in love with this storyit was amazing 👏i have no wordsi read all the parts in one go and you penned down so beautifully
10 years ago
hey ...it was old note dear...i have already written kr os..remember RHTDM...??n kriyam ss, will start only when i finish any of my current stories..n thanks for the great support😊
10 years ago
i am so excited to read your kriyam OS and i know it is going to be amazing like all your other work...! also can't wait for the kriyanch OS as i am in love with all the OS you have written so far for it...!Please PM me when you have uploaded the OS, would love to read them, thanks
10 years ago
wow😲such a wonderful response...i dont know what to say...thank you so much..it means a lot to me..really...thank you...
10 years ago
It was just sooo awesome!!!!I read it all on a go!! N at d end wen i read d last part...i was lyk it was worth it!!! Completely worth it!!! To read a story on d whole d3 gang!! Fat too completing it in a single day! Putting aside my work!!! I did have a thot dat wat if it wasnt worth d continuos tym i put into it?! Bt at d end i was highly satisfied wid d end!!It was seriously a beautiful story!!!N also der was no misconceptions in btwn taani n kriya!!!N u also showed d cute romantic banters of kriyansh!! N also swayam's take on dat! 😉 It was in sm 8th part i think! D whole part i was waiting gor kriya to get done wid d truth!! Bt instead dey were playing around cracking jokes...telling each oder der pains in d simplest possible way!!! N dat was wat touched me!!!It was lyk...if such a thing has happened den dey need to get back der comfort level wid each oder!! Though dey were ol d more comfortable being wid both of dem...bt it wasnt d same as wen she left dem!!Der was a space created btwn dem...dey knew...n ol of dem together filled it wid der love n concern for each oder!!N d talks,d teasing,d smiles,d tears...ol of it filled d space!!!N den wen kriya felt at ease as b4... She stated d whole truth!!! D fact!!!N d punishment thingie was v much cute!!!Also d punishments dey provided to swayam!!!N wen reyam were away...dey got a whole new version of kriya!!!Of course dey were irritated cz of dis! Bt ol of dem had it beneath d core...dat dey have got kriya back! N dey didnt wanna hurt her or lose her in any case!!!Kriya became d love guru!!!She held a different seriousness behind her childish acts!!!N d last part was amazing!!! I mean a guy lyk rey!!! Who was just living in his present...had ol of his future planned wid HER!!!!Dat certainly was huge thing to do from his side!!!I just loved it!!! I was literally feeling everything u wrote!!I even had tears in sm of d scenes!!! N getting to d fact dat i dnt cry wenever possible!!! It was really a touching one!!!It was
10 years ago
Just read the whole story...! Loved it to bits especially the ending about their future plans...! Amazingly written..! Can't wait to read more of your work
10 years ago
will think n let u knw
11 years ago
ab iss ss mein tho mera dimaag nahi chal raha..tumhare paas koi idea ho tho batado...if it suits the track then will sure execute it...😉
11 years ago
Kuch funn likh doussi ko relate kar ke jo future plans likhen hain n allhilarious saor anythngtry try n koi idea ata toh discuss kar lo..me ko bhe aya toh bata dun ge 😉
11 years ago
wo sab tho teek hai zona par epilogue likhu tho kya likhu???sab kuch tho maine last update mein cover kardi hai...present and future...ab usse jyada aur kya likh sakti hu...kuch bhi idea nahi araha hai dimaag mein epilogue ke lie dear...
11 years ago