Chapter 24

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Part 15 (iii) :

Next day swayam and rey reached Mumbai around 12 pm..they without wasting the time went to rey's house and did so many needed arrangements..then it was 5 o'clock in the evening, they were finally ready with all the arrangements perfectly done as per their plan...rey msged the gang

msg : "hey guys.. come soon to my home..missing you all :)"

that msg is enough for every one to know that rey and swayam are back to mumbai...they all are very happy..specially kriya and sharon...they all went to rey;s house immediately..vicky presses the door bell but they observe that the door was slightly open already..they all rush inside...but to their disappointment there is no one in the living room...

kriya calls "rey aap kahan ho??"

a loud voice comes from speaker in the living area...

voice " welcome all of you...how are you guys?"

obviously it was rey's voice...

kriya : rey ye kya majak hai ?? bahar niklo aap abhi ke abhi...

neil : yeah dude...hume yaha bula kar tum khud gayab ho

they all were looking at the speaker and talking...

rey : baatcutter tumhe tumhari surprises nahi chahie..?.

all looked at kriya now...kriya was shocked a bit..she couldn't understand what's going on actually...

confused kriya : (looking at every one) haan...par...par rey aise??

rey : kriya so be ready to witness the tasks given to me...i hope you like them...

instantly a sweet smile appears on her face..." rey aap ne plan ki hai tho tasks bahot hi acche honge..muje jaroor pasand aayenge" says kriya

rey : i missed your that smile kriya...

kriya blushes then it strikes her " smile ?? (looking everywhere) rey aap muje dekh rahe ho??kahan ho aap rey?? ye kaisi bachpana hai?? bahar niklo pehle...plzzz"

rey :(smiles) no...pehle jo plan kia hai wo tho complete karu...so ready for 1st one??

kriya just nods her head...

rey : okay but usse pehle koi aur aap log ko join karne wali hai...you know even that person want to be with you guys today...bharat can you just go and welcome that person plz

bharat was confused " main?? abhe kriya ke liye surprises plan kar raha hai tho muje kyun bich main gusa raha hai??ruk jata hu" saying he went to welcome the person standing outside the door...he immediately starts rubbing his eyes to make sure he is not dreaming after seeing the person...

impatient kriya shouts from living area looking at bharat standing there still " bharat kaun hai darwaze pe?? leke aana usse jaldi"...bharat just opens door completely revealing the person to the gang...

neha kriya shouts "vishakkaaa oh my god" they directly run and hugs her...the trio hugs tightly and after few secs starts jumping still holding each other...all three met after long time..they were really happy...

rey's voice disturbs their celebration " kriya how was the sample of my tasks?"

kriya holding neha and vishaka tightly " bahot bahooot badhiya rey...thank you so much for bringing vishaka here...mhuaaa"

rey smiles...even the gang smiles at kriya's kiddish behavior...

rey : ok now the first surprise kriya...vishaka thanks for coming on my request here today...please join us...and haan jara bharat ko bhi leke aao jaldi..he is still standing at the door...

they all look at bharat who was staring at vishaka dreamily...vishaka blushes but she goes to him and take him to living area...

rey : hey guys...

all turns immediately at the source of light coming from...and they see it is a big screen situated in one corner...on which now rey apeared all happily...

all shouts : hey rey...

rey : okay i dont waste much time now because i really want to come out of this screen and meet you guys...its been so many days...so kriya ready...??

kriya nods her head..all are very eager to see what is rey's first surprise for kriya...

rey : kriya its actually nothing special..i copied this idea from you only but only the slight change is there...you have to make out what it is...huh...okay..saying this he removes his jacket...and pulls his left sleeve up... there it is..the first surprise...a tattoo..he had put a tatto on his upper arm in a arm band shape...it was "kreya" written in a most stylish way which looks like a band but actually its "kreya" written there...

rey looks at kriya " can you see it baat cutter..what is written exactly?"

kriya already had tears formed in her eyes just nods her head...remembering the shivam's party where she did the same thing for rey as told by rey...but here its different...yes it looks something different...then she observes the tattoo is all turned out lil bit bluish and reddish in color...

kriya : "rey?" she was shocked...rey who observes her reaction "no...no kriya...plz dont cry...tumhe rulane ke lie nahi banaya maine ye..plzz baatcutter"

"par rey kya jaroorat thi aapko ye karne ki...ye permanent tattoo hai na?? kitna dard hua hoga aapko ye banate waqt...kyun rey?" she starts crying..

"kriya plz..i wanted to do this...you know jab uss din tumne aise tattoo apne hath pe banwayi thi mere lie tab hi i had decided that one day i will put such tattoo on my hand too..i liked it so much that day...i loved it kriya..really.."

kriya smiles wiping her tears and says "okay aap paas hue first task mein...ab next one plz..."

rey just smiles looking at her twinkling eyes...both were staring at each other but their look look gets disturbed by neil..

neil : par rey..iss tatto mein tho spelling mistake hai...all looks at the tatto again

vicky : haan...kriya ka K R I hota hai ..K R E nahi

swayam who was holding the video cam puts it on near by table and adjust it and come to explain the gang next to rey

swayam : wo kriya ki naam nahi hai akele...wo rey ka naam hai kriya mein...

neil and vicky : ohhh... rey in kriya?? hmmm looks at kriya...

kriya was blushing hard with all the stares from the gang...to rescue her, swayam " oye aap log muje miss nahi kie...muje dekh ke na hi na hello"

the gang says hi to swayam then forgetting kriya...but sharon did not say anything she just looks at him...but her eyes say everything to swayam..he knew how much she missed him all these days..and on top of that kriya's plan made her to realize importance of swayam in her life...so the deep feelings are clearly visible on her face...ofcourse which can be read by only swayam...he too doesnt want to bug on that now as rey has planned so many things for kriya and he needs to help rey to execute them...

rey : okay tho 1 task complete...ready for the second surprise...???

kriya : yesss ...all excited like a kid...

rey : (smiles) actually kriya ye surprise tumhare aur sharon dono ke lie hai...mere aur swayam ke taraf se...

kriya : really? she was really happy...she goes and stands next to sharon holding her hand...now both are eagerly waiting for their surprise...the screen goes off for few seconds then again starts on with a recorded video...

video :

swayam is in gautam's(krisha's father) office cabin...they both are talking something and laughing and then gautam takes swayam to show his office...he also introduces swayam to few of his employees...then swayam gautam and rey having food together having a fun time...

(kriya and sharon gets confused...they look at each other...they could not understand what was that)

then the video continues where rey is with smriti(krisha's mom)..smriti feeding him food...they both are laughing and enjoying...

(kriya is unable to digest this..she so wanted this since she fell in love with rey..but her mom never liked rey...she squeezes sharon's hand and sharon hugs her)

then the video stops for few secs before starting with the next clip..which was actually a surprise for kriya and sharon...

video : rey swayam sitting with gautam and smriti talking and having good time...gautam had put his hand on smriti;s shoulder all lovingly...

the lights turned on in the living room...the whole gang looks at sharon and kriya...they both were standing there hugging each other crying...because they were really planning a lot to patch up between their parents...they were waiting for this moment...finally it came like a surprise to them...only they knew how much krisha wanted to see their parents together...

rey and swayam enter living room and taps on krisha's shoulders

swayam : aise hi rothe rahoge ya apne parents ko miloge bhi...then enters gautham and smriti from rey's room...

sharon runs to smriti and kriya to her dad, gautam...



to be continued😛

guess what would be third surprise...😉

hope you guys liked it...

smileysmi2013-08-26 16:38:35

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