Chapter 11

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Ok guys I am updating the continuation of part 7..enjoy..hope u will...:)


Part 7 : (continuation)

Kr : ok I promise..

Rey : ok..kria jab tum muje chod ke chale gaye the tb I was shattered...kya karu kuch b samaj mein nai araha tha..phir ek din ek party mein mujse control nai hua tho I told our frnds abt us bt except hammare last conversation..then the whole gang tried a lot to cheer me..they even started searching girl for me..at that time only tani ki entry hui clg mein...then ( GUYS EVERYTHING IS SAME AS IN ORIGINAL STORY ABT TAANI REY STORY SO I M NOT GONNA WRITE IN DETAIL...so just imagine that rey z telling the same thing to kriys abt him n tani..n i vl end the explanation part abt taarey here only...)...

Kria after listening all this, could not compose herself ..she was unable to digest whatever rey was telling to her...after a min of pause rey again started..

Rey : I know kria tume kaise lag raha hoga..bt u know I accept the fact that I was attracted to tani in few situations bt in those situations also if tell u frankly, it was u bcoz of which I was getting attracted to her..I mean kria thr are lot of similarities btwn u n tani..main r like u, tani b mujse 'aap' kehke bulati hai..n like u wo b har baat pe apne krishna ji ko yaad karti haI..like u wo b hammesha akele akele baatein karti rehti hai..bt u knw kria to b frank, kai bar, trust me kai baar muje laga ki I am just doing unfair to her..bcoz jitne baar bhi main usse attracted hui hoon, tb main usse tani samaj kr nai balki tumhe yaad karke attracted hua tha..n as I said she likes me a lot tho wo shayad khush hi hui hogi unn sare moments pe bt mere taraf se tho aisa kuch nahi tha..tho muje lagta hai maine uske emotions ke sath khela hai unn palon mein..

R: kria dnt think that I am justifying myself..I knw maine jo bhI kia galat kia bt...I am sry kria..main ye tho nai kahunga ki mein tb hosh mein nai tha bcoz I ws very much in sense..bt hogaya mujse..I am sry..tum jo saja dogi I am ready to face bt muje chod ke mat janA kria plzz..meri galti hai mein manta hoon..n agar main chahtatchahta tho I could have hide this truth from u..bcoz ye sare baate mere aur tani ke alawa koi nahi janta hai..bt I dnt want to..mujme itni energy nahi bachi hai abb ke koi aur misunderstanding solve karu hammare bicha ka..tho I told u each n everything to u..I am sry kria..plz forgive me...(tears starts to flow from his eyes)

Kr: (wiping her tears) rey I can understand bt main chahti hoon ke aap ek bar fir se soche

Rey.: (confused) kis bare mein?

Kr : yAhi ke aap kisko chahte ho? Tani ko yA...rey I dnt want u to regret. Ur abt decision in future..

R : what the hell kria..itna sabkuch bataane k baad bhi tumhe lagta hai I love her?? It was just an attraction ..n too bcoz she z just like u in some behavior s...thats it...agar main usse pyar hi karta tho muje kabhi guilty feel nai hota...n naahi tumare aane pe kushi...got it??

Kr : (she just kept on wiping her tears bt they did nt seems like stopping this made rey more n more guilty...n ofcourse kria understood this also..so again she decides to divert his mind) ye mere sawal ka jawab nai hua rey..

Rey: (got frustrated) kaunsa sawal?

Kr : yahi ki aap kisko chahte ho?? Tani ko yaa...??(she just could nt complete d sentence)

Rey : ( he understood that kria forgiven him n she z just trying divert his mind by diverting the topic) ' tani yaa ' what?? Pehle qun tho complete karo (he has the smirk on his face which he used to have during dance fest when he was trying to make her realise abt her feelings towards him bt only difference is, this tym his eyes are teary)

Kr : (shocked or angry..) aap jaante ho main kya puchna chahti hoon aapse??

Rey : aur tum mere ans b jante ho apne sawal ke...

Kr : bt muje aapse sunna hai..

Rey : tho first complete the qun...

Kr : rey aap aise kaise kar sakte ho mere sath?? Aapko pata hai main kya sunna chahti hoon aapse tho batate q nai?

Rey : aur tum b mere jawab jante ho tho q puch rahe ho?

Kr : q ki muje aapke muh se sunna hai.?

Rey : kya?

Kr: yahi ke aap mujse pya...huh..rey plzzz

Rey :(nt so easy baatcutter..remember tumne muje kitna tadpaya tha mere sawalon ke jawab dete waqt...now itd ur turn) dekha fir se incomplete qun?? Baatcutter qun tho completely pucho tabhi main jawab de paunga naa??

Kr : ohh tho aap jaanbuck ke muje tadpa rahe hai abb..ok rakie apne jawab apne paas..muje b nahi sunna..saying this she left the place..

Rey: are batcutter listen..he too follows her...

In canteen:

Sh : I hope rey teek ho..

Sw : dnt wry sh..he vl b alryt..kria gai hai na...

Sh: no sw..tum nai jante..agar aunty ki yaad agai tho Rey ko kai din lag jate hai fir se sabkuch bhool kar normal banne mein..

Sw: bt not this tym..tum dekhna rey tho ab tk bhool bhi chuka hoga aaj jo b hua...I knw very well rey n krias relationship...kria tho ab tak rey ki mind ko kisi aur topic mein uljadia hoga..I am damn sure...




Done atlast...so howz it...n if any typo errors plz forgive..updating through cell..n plzzz comment n hit the like button..
smileysmi2013-01-02 11:42:58

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Comments (17)

Awesome part, loved it so much!

3 months ago

Hey Awesome updates dear😊D way u portrayed kriyaansh feelings n all..Seriously it's superb M luving dis ss❤️Pm me nxt time I have sent u buddy reqN plz do read my kriyaansh ff hum aur humare angel

11 years ago

awesome ..luvd itthnx 4 the pmupdate soon

11 years ago

wowwwieee!!!incomplete que...😆aww swayam ek dum correct bola,,,rey ka mind toh divert hogaya🤣

11 years ago

wow superb update.Kriya is too cute n understanding 😳 trying to divert rey's mind.Loved it.Update rest part soon.

11 years ago

awesome part loved it so much kriYaansh 😳 awesome

11 years ago

awesome and amazing both the chapter... update res of the chapter soon...

11 years ago

awesome partt.. just loved it.. beautifully written.. 😊whoa u wrote so much by ur cell..?? that too without mistakes.. hats off..!! 😉 thanks 4 the pm.. update soon and the other ss also.. 😳

11 years ago

Awesome updateKriyansh part was cute Swayam know them very wellWaiting for next part

11 years ago

for part 7 continuation...awesome...so happy ki kr ke beach koi mu's nahi hue...loved it...thnx for pm... alisha.a.s2013-01-02 03:01:57

11 years ago

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