Chapter 5

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15 years!! 15 years is not a small time gap. But for him it meant both decades and minutes of gap. All because of her. Every second away from her feels like years but her memory is so fresh just like he met her few minutes back.

He was of 10 when his family moved to Singapore. She lives in his grand pa's home. She is a adopted child. She was of 8 when he last saw her. How much he hates of not able to go to India in all these years. Finally when he thought he will go and see her , his stupid boss got his work overloaded. His parents already left to his grandpa's house. Finally after 20 days of delay he was here sitting in the plane. The announcement bought him to present.


"Rey tumhare chachu ke ghar jao aur waha se car leke yaha aajao. Hum sab tumhare nanaji ke ghar pe hai . " He grinned as his dad said those words. He all the way from singapore is finding an reason to convince his parents to visit his grandpa's house but they made it simple for him. With that he rushed to his chachu's house . His naanu lived on hill top.

" Haan dadu!! Mai khel rahi hun sweety ke saath!! Yahi hun " she shouted from the garden replying to her dadu who is inside the house asking her to not go out . She loved them so much. They adopted just because they are alone with their kids away from them. She knows that but she can't deny the love they shower on her . They took care of her like their own child. And she rarely remembers that she doesn't belong to that family. Every single member of that family treats her as their own. Grabbing the puppy in her arms she ran in smelling the tasty dishes all the women in house are preparing.

" Beta ab sweety ko chodo aur jaake tumhari dadi ko help karo . " she made a face listening to it.

"Dadu please!! " she pouted and glared at Neha who is helping the ladies. Because of her she is also asked to help .

" Arey usse kyun pareshaan kar rahe ho?? tum jao beta, khelo.. aur dekho saare bache gate se bahar na nikle. Neha ko bhi saath leke jao pareshaan karke rakha hai ladki ne "

" Love you dadi!! Aap best ho!! Neha chal " she grabbed neha's hand and literally dragged her out. And grinned wide seeing all 6-13 year kids playing in the front garden of the mansion. The whole family gathered for vacations and she is so excited for it. Dressed in a blue frock , she played with kids along with neha.

He zoomed off to his grandpa's home not even taking a bit of rest. He wants to see her NOW. He doesn't exactly know what he feels for her. But one thing he accepts is she means so much to him. Opening the roof of the car he let the air blow his hairs and play with them. the image of her playing with her orange teddybear. He shook his head laughing at how he used to snatch it just to make her cry as he thought she was too cute while crying.


Silently slipping from the house with all the kids with her and Neha , she rushed to the nearby ice-cream shop and all ran back home before anyone catches them redhanded. She loves playing with kids. It's almost an hour when one of the kids ran in and bought her favorite teddy bear which is half of her size. As they played with it she started dancing with the teddy bear holding it's hands , entertaining all and Neha laughing hard seeing Kriya dance dreamily.

He stopped the car for a small break and sat on the bonnet remembering the things she does. Suddenly he saw a girl twirling wrapped in a light green saree her hair blocking his view. After few minutes she stopped with her back to him and looked at him sidewards through the corner of her eyes. He immediately got down the car and ran to her but she vanished in seconds. Beating on his head for day dreaming he got into the car and started the engine to reach the house as soon as possible.

He grinned seeing the big gate in front of him . Grabbing his backpack which is the only thing he carried he opened the huge gate and looked at the house in middle of the huge garden. Instead of walking all along the cement path to the entrance he decided to reach quickly through the garden. As he excitedly rushed towards the house someone bumped into him hard knocking them both down.

She was playing with the kids and one of them is back of her to catch and she ran as fast as she can looking back at the kid frequently and banged into something hard and both fell down. She gripped his shirt and his one hand around her waist and other below her head as they rolled down few times and ended with him upon her. Both cried in pain as the bush scratched their hands. That's when he heard someone call.

"Kriya !! Are you alright?? " he heard Neha calling. And he in an instant pulled back a bit to look at the girl crushed beneath him. She slowly opened the eyes and looked at him when he asked her in trance.

"Kriya?? " He asked shocked, happy and mostly lost in her.

She nodded not knowing what to do . And soon something happened which left her mouth wide. He kissed her on her cheek pressing his lips hard on her cheek. He pulled back and looked at her shocked face and open mouth and realized what he did. Immediately getting upon his feet he walked back looking at her smiling sheepishly and scratching his head.

This vacation is gonna be his best memory. Making a note in his mind he turned and rushed into the house as she sat touching her cheek in shock.


Reviews please!! _/\_

Likes too !! Pleaajj!!

-Deetha!!😳



-Blind.Dance-2014-06-27 06:58:50

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Comments (23)

Loved all of them...Superb works

9 years ago

beautiful osloved itthanks for the pm

10 years ago

When u gonna give next update. Waiting update soon 👏

10 years ago

Aww i loved this!It was soo cuteeThe kiss was unexpected leaving kriya shocked ^_^He is soo into herr!!Loved the ending Amazing!

10 years ago

Awesome Awesome Awesome ab tu aese Oneshot deti toh dil karta few more chapters please n yuss please apni dreamgirl OS dat too was a moment..yahan post kar n uska part 2 de de meri bhen its been so long now ;)

10 years ago

So so cuteee update...Loved loved it alottt...Majnu rey hayeee..so cut eee...

10 years ago

Awesome OS Rey's desperation to meet Kriya. And Kriya is soo cute. 😳Loved her characterization. 😃The way he ran to meet her, he so loves her ^_^Owwie Both bumped and fell and his reaction on realizing it was Kriya, So sweet.The Kiss was unexpected. Beautifully written 👏

10 years ago

os was super cute... loved it soo much.. how rey missed her and was desperately wanted to meet her... loved d last part when rey kissed her on hearing kriya's name n she was still in a shock..

10 years ago

Wow awesome.loved the os.it was so awesome.please pm me when you update next.

10 years ago

shooo cuutteee os...😊😊kriyaansh meeting finaallyyy🤗n rey koi chance nai chodta use peck karne ka...😳😳

10 years ago

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