Chapter 23

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virat was again shattered... virat was disheartened and helpless, so he went to vanshika... his mom, his comfortor...
virat entered vanshika's room n sat on the floor. he laid his head in her lap and stared at the floor...
vanshika : virat... manvi will be alright baby...???
virat : why is all this happening with me...??? why am i struck in all this...??? what have i done to face all this maa...??? why is my destiny playing with me...???? why mom...??? why...??? i cannot do it... how can i play with manvi and most of all her feelings...?? how can i hurt her...?? mom manvi thinks that i proposed her and i placed that ring on her finger... and mom now..
vanshika : everything will be fine...!!!
virat : how will everything be fine...?? she wants me to propose her on her birthday and get engaged to her in front of everybody... for god sake she is already engaged and what will prem and his family think...??
vanshika : i really wanted it to happen... i wanted to see manvi and you together but this wasnt the way i wanted things to be... virat dont do it if you dont want to...
virat : i have to do it... for manvi... i just have to... if her break her heart, she will shatter and it might affect her health also... she might take stress and thats very harmful for her... i cannot let manvi die... i love her... so what she would never be mine...!!!
sonia : why do you always think negative virat...???
virat : sonia u have become more ill mannered yaar... have some basic manners of knocking before entering...
sonia : oh hello... i am not a guest her anymore... its like my family also... kyun maa...??
virat : maa... very quick... huhh..?? didnt take much tym to reach maa from aunty...
vanshika : virat dont tease her... she is such a sweet girl...
virat : sweet girl...?? you dont know her maa... teekhi churri hai ye...
heer : aur ye nithala hai... main nahi uthati naa... toh sota hi reh jata tha.. (he is so lazy...if i wouldnt wake him up, he would sleep forever... )
virat : lier... hurr...
vanshika : oh my gos virat grow up... how are you both fighting...?? like small kids...
sonia : he would never grow up maa... come small baby mamma wants to talk to you...
virat : lets go mommy... maa i will see you later...
sonia dragged virat out of vanshika's room and he just followed her...
virat : yes mommy... what do u want to say...??
sonia : what the crap are you thinking...??? go and grab your love dude.. manvi is all yours... and if you are scared about prem... leave him to me... i really find him hot...
virat : you want me to be with manvi because you find prem hot...
sonia : no no... its because i want my baby to be happy and let mommy find a daddy for you...
virat : hehe... so i should move on and you would handle prem...
sonia : deal...
virat : great then... its a deal...
sonia : so lets go n but a ring for manvi...
virat : lets go...

virat and sonia went to the mall to buy an engagement ring for manvi...
as they entered the mall, virat got a call from manvi...
virat : hello...
manvi : chep where are you...???
virat : manvi i am in..
sonia : shhh... dont tell her u dumbo...
virat : actually i am out with a friend...
manvi : which friend..?? that prem...??
virat : no... i havent met prem from few days
manvi : then who is that friend...??
virat : let it be ded futiya... why did you call...??
manvi : virat what should i buy...??? i am really confused and di is just confusing me more...

and they bumped into each other while walking...
manvi : aankhein hai ya... virat...
virat : manvi... you here...??
manvi : came for shopping... who is she...??
virat : she is a friend... sonia...
manvi : but i dont know her... i know all of your friends...
virat : manvi...
manvi : i dont wanna talk i am going...
virat : manvi listen na... jeevika tell her to stop...
jeevika : only you can stop your jungili billi...
sonia was just standing and smiling seeing manvi getting jealous again and most of all possessive... thats a good sign...
virat : manvi... stop there only if you love me...
manvi stopped midway as if time froze for her...
virat : i knew you would stop...
virat went close to manvi, held her hand and brought her to the place where jeevika and sonia were standing...
virat : manvi meet my friend from london... sonia.. she came with prem and me... and sonia meet my manvi... my everything...(and saying this he pulled manvi in his arms and manvi's eyes were looking at him with love and as if only she had the right to look at him that way... no one else.. )

manvi was now no longer jealous of sonia and wrapped her hand around virat's... she was now happy that virat is all hers and will always be hers...
manvi : di i will shop with virat... you were late na... if u want you can go...
jeevika : okk... all 3 of u carry on... i gotto go... bye...
manvi : bye di...
virat : bye jeevika di...
sonia : bye jeevika...
manvi : virat lets go and but my birthday dress...
sonia : but we have came here to...
manvi : i dont care... lets go partner...
virat : lets go baby...
sonia was shooting glances at virat but what to do virat just cannot refuse manvi anything...
virat helped manvi decide her birthday dress which almost took two long hours...

and the whole time manvi ignored sonia... she wasnt liking that there was a third person between virat and her...
manvi : partner lets eats ice cream...
virat : hmmm...
manvi : you are looking lost... what happened chep...??
virat: manvi actually we came here to buy a ring for you and its already late... i wonder if i would get something good or not...
manvi : wowww... come lets go and buy a ring first...
sonia : exactly... manvi is ryt...
manvi : like always...
virat smirked as he saw manvi getting jealous...
virat : but manvi... will you also join us...?? i mean will you go yourself to buy your own engagement ring...
manvi : so what...??? dont make mountain out of a molehill...
virat : come meri drama queen lets go...
manvi and virat fought on almost every ring deciding whether to buy it or not and finally after 60 minutes of arguing they decided on one ring...

manvi : this is fab... just our style...
virat : are you happy...??
manvi : very... thank you..
virat : anytime partner...
manvi : make me wear this ring... to check size n all...
virat looked at heer and she signalled him to go ahead...
virat was putting the ring on her finger when he saw that she was still wearing her engagement ring... he looked up at manvi and when she looked at her she realised what was bothering him...
manvi : why are u thinking...?? take it off n make me wear this one...
virat took out the engagement ring from manvi's finger and felt very happy... his manvi was now only his... like always only he would have right on her... like always he would be her everything...
and finally taking a deep breath, he made manvi wear the ring they chose...
manvi : happy engagement chep...
virat : what...???
manvi : yeah... we are engaged now... i am soo happy...
virat : same to u partner.. promise me you will never leave me now...
manvi : pakka wala promise...
virat : just remember you cant break your promise manvi...
manvi : why would i do it...?? now pay the bill so that i ca have ice cream...
virat : okk... manvi and sonia you girls wait outside and i will just pay the bill...
manvi : come sonia lets go...
sonia : hmmm...
naina9272013-05-10 05:53:23

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awssum...update soon n pm me..

11 years ago

It was awesum!! 👏pm me wenevr u update d next!! 😊

11 years ago

Awesome UpdateWaiting For Prem-Virat ConfrontationPoor Virat Too CuteLoved It

11 years ago

hey NainaIt was awesome... But i want to see that virat which he was before, obsessive and possessive... Not manvi,I just missed that ViratHope everything will fine soonThanx 4 d pmUpdate Soon

11 years ago

its amazing naina 👏continue soon ...

11 years ago

Amazing update loved the conversation between virat and his mum and then Sonia, the ring is beautiful can not wait for the next update.Thanks for the pm

11 years ago

Nice chapter Dear😊 😃Melvi😊

11 years ago

Wow its awesome started to feel sacred what will Happen between prem and virat when prem will Find out was an beautiful update Lol loved manvisJealousy and possesiveness

11 years ago

Lovely update!..Manvi getting jealous was cute...Thanks for the pm...

11 years ago

thanks... to know abt prem's reaction stay tuned aashika...

11 years ago

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