Chapter 24
Chapter:24
''Jeevika wait...'' He called her name out...
Jeevika ran to her room, Viren following her, she looks at him smiling, tried hard to close the door, but Viren was so strong enough to push her behind.
''Now, noone can stop me!'' said Viren and he closed the door.
Jeevika went backwards, meanwhile he came forward. He cupped her face.
''I love u'' he smirked at her , making her cheeks grew red. He nuzzled her, she closed her eyes feeling it. How long did she waited for this moment? And how badly Viren missed romancing his wife. Their lips were about to touch, just then someone knocked at the door. Viren scowled at Jeevika, meanwhile she gave him a sardonic smile. She opened the door, it was Priya's Maasi.
Maasi: Puthar... u still didn't change your dress, aur yeh munda teri room mein kya kar rahe ho...
Viren clentenched his fist, he felt his patience loosing out. Each time or the other he tried to touch Jeevika, their moment will be definetly interuppted! He went out of the room frustrated.
The day went on with Viren gazing at Jeevika from a distance.
''Why, why is this always happening to me? I've come here just to be with my wife, and now what's happening! It seems as if we both are acting in 50's or 80's film where hero just glances at the herione...'' He raised his hands upwards irritated.
Just then Bansari Lal called Viren...
BL: Do u want any help?
Viren: [muttered] I just want my wife back for myself!😆
BL: Sorry...
Viren: Nothing uncle, i'm perfect...
BL: Actually beta, we are playing kabadi [team game] so thought of calling u too...
Viren: [again muttered] What am i going to gain by playing this game? Crazy ppl.
BL: I really don't know beta, but i think ur talking something, which i really can't hear!
Viren: [mustered a smile] Nothing uncle, it's just ur thought.
BL: Ok i'm going... i guess the game might've started.
He waited for Jeevika for a long time, and went to his room, seeing no sign of her. Next day morning, he woke up lazily, opened the window of his room, and was totally lost in a special scene. He saw Jeevika, laughing and playing with the kids. He was admiring her beauty, her smile, her cute antics. He got ready, and was doing his regular exercise. He was wearing a black colour sleeve-cut shirt and tracksuit. He started doing his regular dose of push-ups. Just then a group of girls surrounded his room, to which he was oblivious off!
They started commenting about his muscles, the way it moved, his abs. They were totally dead over him. Some of the girls even tried to take a picture of him.
Girl1: Wow yaar, ithni hot hai munda, bas dekh kar hi faint honi lagthi hai..
She was about to fall, just then her friend caught her.
Girl2: Stop behaving eccentrically. Have u never seen a guy or what? He's only mine.
Jeevika who was in the kitchen, just thought about Viren.
''Oh no, Virenji must've woke up , and I forgot to give him tea... ''
She took a cup of tea and marched upstairs. By the time she reached there, she was totally horrified to see the strange sight before her. She was raging with fury hearing those stupid comments of girls about Viren.
Girl3: I'm planning to call him for a date. Will he come?
Girl4: Excuse me? Have u ever seen ur face? If not plz go check, bilkul bandar jaisi lagthe ho...
Jeevika: [stuttered] Date?? What the...
She gained consiousness moved towards the girls and raised her voice, her voice was caustic.
Jeevika: What are u girls doing here? Don't u have any job or what?
Hearing Jeevika's voice, Viren just turned around, he too was shocked to see a group of girls smiling at him. One of the girls, came near Jeevika, and whispered in her ears...
''If u know him, then hum dono ka setting kar wao na... actually i really think he is interested in me, that's why he smiled at me, yesterday, afterall he's so handsome u know.''
Jeevika: [jaw-dropped, glared at Viren, he gave an inncent smile to her] Smile? He even smiled at u...
One girls went near Viren, and extended her hands.
''Myself Pinky, what's ur sweet name Mr.Hottie...''
Viren glanced at Jeevika, understanding what might've been running through her mind, he shaked hands with her and introduced himself, the girl kept on smiling at him. Jeevika was hell-irritated with his.
''Hey u... i'm giving u all 5 secs, if ur not going out of this room, then i'll definetly inform this to ur parents. So, just get lost...'' She shouted at them, within minutes they left the place, murming names for Jeevika. Her temper raised, she was about to talk, just then Viren kept both of his hands on her shoulder, trying to stop her.
Viren: It's ok... those girls are strange! Ok just breathe in -breathe out, it'll reduce your stress...
Jeevika just followed what he said, just then she shrugged him off and asked...
''Strange? Ur strange! U even talked to those girls, ok chuck the talking, but u even smiled and shaked ur hands with those girls... How could u?
Viren: [grumbled] Is it written on any rule-book that I can't talk/smile to a girl? I meam i've been noticing u for a while, u really get pissed off, when I talk with a girl. Why is it so?
Jeevika: Ithni ghandi harqat karne ki baad, your questioning me, shame on you!
Viren: Ur so impossible Jeevika, leave it, u brought this tea for me, how sweet?
Jeevika: [glanced at the cup in her hand] Tea? For u? Am i crazy or what? [She gave an evil smile on him, and drank the tea herself]
She was about to go, but Viren gave her a back-hug.
''U know , how badly i want u with me... We are not even getting time to talk freely here''
Jeevika: Why me? U've got many other hot girls right!
He made her face him.
''Jeevika, why are u still behind those girls yaar... what's their mistake by the way, i'm so handsome that no girl can try to resist my looks, even u can't right'' winked at her...
She just gave a death glare to him and responded...
''I know, it's all ur mistake. And my mistake that i've trusted u... patha hai ... ur just a.. just a ...''
Viren: [looked down at her] Just ur crazy lover!
She smiled at him, but changed her expression just when she realised the current situation. She ignored him, and walked off leaving Viren shocked...
''What mistake i've did? Ok whatever, go marry ur so - called stouty and fatso cook!''
She just turned out and glared at him. Mehendi ceremony going on, a lady asked Jeevika to sit down and asked her to show her hand.
Jeevika: Just apply mehendi on my left hand only, if u've applied on both of my hands then i wont be able to hold my mobile na, that's why!😃
The lady just gave a weird look to her.
Manvi: Oh iss mehendi ke chakkar mein, i can't eat anything!
Just then Viren shouted... ''Why fear when Viren is here?''😉
He came with a plate full of dal makhni and fed it to every girls out there. They were admiring him, which made Jeevika jealous, finally he came towards Jeevika, she averted her face seeing him, to which he ate food himself. He looked at her mehendi and said...
''Mehendi is beautiful, but just one thing is missing...'' he leaned down to her, and whispered ''My name''.
She just gazed at him at replied ... ''Please can u just leave''
Lady: Hey don't talk like that to ur husband!
Jeevika: Don't teach me ok!
Viren: Ji, don't worry actually my wife goes mad at times, that's why!
She glared at him like anything.
Viren: Anyone needs food/water?
Entire girls in a communion: ME!😃😃
Viren was about to go, just then he saw Jasleen coming...
Viren: Auntyji auntyji one sec!
Jasleen: Yes my son!
Viren:Actually there's a problem with my wife. Yesterday she was so lovey-dovey with me, but today she again started to get angry on me. Its happens daily, i mean her mood just changes everytime, y is it so?
Jasleen: [puzzled] She never behaved like this, in her childhood...[after a while, she started blushing] Shut up! Naughty, u've finally did it right!
Viren: [not understanding] What did i do? She just angry with me for no-reason, but somehow she turns normal after that!
Jasleen: Did u test her to a doctor?
Viren: I'm planning to... but could u please do it?
Jasleen: Are you sure about it?😉
Viren: I'm having doubt, but i think it might be the reason...
Jasleen: I'm so happy congratulations Beta!!! Oh my daughter...
Viren: Congratulations, but why?
Jasleen: Ur asking me the reason, U itself know it...
Viren: No aunty
Jasleen: Beta, stop joking...
Viren: Aunty, i never knew that Jeevika had a serious mental problem😆
Jasleen: So, u were not saying that she was PREG...
Viren: Kya?
Jasleen: [irritated] Chall hatt... KAMINA!!😛
Viren: Look Aunty is also angry at me, Lagtha hai, aunty ko bhi... God, her whole family is MAD! that's why... [something striked him] Hey... I got it... why she behaves like this... She is officially jealous... she can't bear to see any girl with me... Mrs. Jeevika Vadhera, i'll surely make u accept it, otherwise i'm not Viren Vadhera... [evil smile]
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Nd say bye to this thread since my next update will be on a new thread😊
-Navya-
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3766004This thread contains all the links to previous threads..Sorry for the inconvenience caused..-Navya-
10 years ago
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10 years ago
haiii guyzzz...i m new to tis topic but i fully read de story...its amazing...y hav u stopped de updates?plzzz continue it...
11 years ago
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11 years ago
Wohooo! What an amazing amazing update. Loved the freaking jealous Jeevika.That was adorable.Loved the ending. It was hilarious. 🤣Amazing work. :DKeep it up. :D
11 years ago
Aww!! Wonderful update !U r Really Superbb!! Writer!!👏Update Soon!! Waiting Eagerly For next Update. . .-MeHaK-
11 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE JEEVIKA JEALOUS LOLTHE SMALL PECK JASLEEN THOUGHT SHE IS PREGGY LOLCANT WAIT FOR VIREN ACTION UPDATE FAT
11 years ago