Chapter 21

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Navya

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Priya: Jeevika, where are u? it's time yaar...
Jeevika was posing infront of the mirror, Priya entered her room...
Priya: Wow yaar... lookin really gorgeous... Nice saree too...
Jeevika: My Viren's selection never fails to be perfect!
Priya: Sorry?
Jeevika : [blushing] Chaal teek hai... it's time... It's u who's taking more time...
She moved out of the room, leaving a jaw-dropped Priya😆
At the temple...
Sanjay, Priya's fiance, too arrived at the temple...
Priya: Jeevs, my fiance, Sanjay...
Jeevika: Hello , my hone-waale Jiju... how are u?
Sanjay: Jeevika... Priya always used to talk about u!
Jeevika: [shocked] What? Priya... how do u get time to talk about me, between ur romance talks yaar... I mean how does i come between ur sweet lovey-dovey talks??
Priya: [blushed, mustered a smile] Jeevs, before u talk anymore stupidities... can we plz proceed?
Jeevika: This is her problem, patha nahi yeh aaj kal bahut sharmili ho jathi hai? Sanjay aisa kyun, kyun Sanjay?
Priya : [nudged her] Wait, i'll also get a chance when u're hubby comes... that day, u see, how easily, i'm going to make ur cheeks redden...
Jeevika's smile faded when she heard Viren's name...
She pretended to be happy...
Sanjay: U guys will never stop... Jeevika, what is ur husband doing?
Priya: Sanjay, who doesn't know abt the 'Great Viren Vadhera'?
Jeevika slapped her forehead...
Sanjay: Oh Viren Vadhera, Business Man of the Year, i remember seeing this photo in the newspaper... Surely he's just a hard-working guy...
Jasleen: Priya nd Sanjay , pooja's about to start...
The trio left... Everyone at the temple was praying...
Jeevika: [thinking] God... plz forbid all bad happenings from Viren, let his every desires come true... may his life be peaceful...
Just after Jeevika prayed for Viren, her phone started ringing... Everyone gettin disturbed , looked at Jeevika, She mustered a smile, nd left the place...
Jeevika: Yes...
Viren: I surmise that u're free now...
Jeevika: No.. i'm not... viren, did u take any contract to make me embarrased infront of all...
Viren: Oh no, madam has started again... ok bye😛
Jeevika: Excuse me, hello... are u there?
Viren: If u're not planning to start ur drama, thn i'm here... tell me , how's life in Punjab?
Jeevika:[smiling] U already knew the answer , Viren...
Viren:[teasing way] Just want to hear it agin from u...
Jeevika: I'm tired off this daily phone-calls Virenji...
Viren: Then come back to me...
Jeevika: Are u serious?
Viren: Missing my romance...
This made Jeevika's face redden like anything...
Jeevika: Viren?
Viren: Hmmm... let me guess it, u must've again gone senti, thinking about me right...
Jeevika: [moved the phone to a distance] Oh no, how come he knew about that?
Viren: And after that Madam, must've shed some tears...
Jeevika: No ways... it's a fact that i do miss u, but i never cried ok...
Viren: Hoth hai... nd how's ur 'so-called cook'...
Before Jeevika could answer, Priya called out for her...
Priya: Jeevs, if ur phone-tym romance is over... Mom is callin u...
Jeevika: Ok Viren, i'll give u the reply later ok, just wait for some more hours... Bye!
They reached home...
Riya: Happy holi guysss... [splashed out colours to everyone...]
Manvi: U idiot... wait i'll get u now...
Jeevika: What? Aaj holi hai?
Priya: Yes stupid... That's why we did pooja... [she took a pitchkari, nd fired Jeevika with colours...] Holi ho...
Jeevika: My dress... u crazy...
She was on her way to the washroom, just then her eyes met the cook...
Cook: [blushing] Happy holi Madamji...
Jeevika: [murmured] speaking of the devil...
Cook: Agar hum abhi bhi single hai toh... i would've accepted ur proposal.. [he made circles with his right leg]
Jeevika: [glared at him] Mr?? Have u thought about ur age? ur 48 nd how come... ugh! I just...
Before she could complete her sentence, Nani called her...
Jeevika: i'll get u soon... Dare if u talk to me that way, i'll ask uncle to fire u...
In Nani's room
Nani: Everyone's playing holi... tum bhi jao na..
Jeevika: Yes Nani...
She played holi with everyone, after a long-time celebration, it was mid-night...
Jeevika: Priya, why aren't u sleeping?
Priya: Bas,Sanjay ka call wait kar rahi hai! U too is waiting for Viren's call right...
Jeevika: I know how to call him, k...
At the terrace
She dialed Viren's number...
Viren: hello ... Happy holi...
Jeevika didn't respond...
Viren: What happened to my sweet wife? Did that silly cook annoy u?
Jeevika: Viren, why are u always behind that old-man?
Viren: So what else is the matter? nd don't forget u've successfully completed ur one week in Punjab...
Jeevika still didn't respond ...
Viren: Yaar kuch bhi bolo... look how i'm trying to entertain u...
Jeevika: What are u doin?
Viren: eating!
Jeevika: Viren, it's our first holi after marriage, nd we couldn't celebrate it...
Viren: That's why i said, ''Happy holi''
Jeevika: Just a formal greetings is not enough...
Viren : [after a long-time thinking] Ok.. open u're laptop...
Jeevika took her laptop...
Viren: Are u having net-connection over there?
Jeevika: Yes...
Viren: open ur yahoo account... nd turn on the webcam plzz...
Jeevika did what he said, she was shocked to see Viren with handful of colours...
Jeevika: [shocked] Viren... are u?
Viren: Everyone celebrates Holi... but here we celebrate holi in a modern way... that is in a tech-way... Happy holi [he applied the colour on the screen]
Jeevika caressed the screen, tears running down from her eyes...
Viren: I seriously was expecting this...
Jeevika: [weeping] Why do u always love me?
Viren: Because i'm ur one nd only husband, nd u're only mine...
Jeevika was weeping...
Viren: I hate tears Jeevika, plzzz not this tym... acha teek hai ek kissi deh do mujhe..
Jeevika: But how?
Viren : Through the screen, just imagine the laptop screen is replaced by me...
Jeevika kissed the screen nd hugged her laptop...
Viren: oh what a sweet hug... Love u... [gave her a flying kiss] Please catch it, before it flies to someone else😆
This made crying Jeevika, laugh harder...
Jeevika: I'll never forget this special holi Virenji... thanku so much...
Viren: Afterall, pathi toh main bada special...
Jeevika: Oho stop praising urself, nd go back to sleep...
Viren: Someone is getting jealous...
Jeevika: No i'm not.. i'm feeling sleepy, ok bye ...
Viren: I knew it this would end with a fight... Byee... Miss u...
Next day morning... Jeevika was in the washroom taking bath, the rest of the family gathered at the hall, gossiping, Manvi nd Riya asusual were fighting about their fav actors...
Jeevika came out of the bathroom wearing a bathrobe, she was drying her hair, suddenly she got startled to see some reflection in the mirror, she looked back nd saw 2 feet hiding beside a curtain... Jeevika moved back in fear, she wasn't knowing how to react... She ran out of the room, nd screamed louder...
''Help, Choor... Bachao... Uncleji,Auntyji, Priya, there's a guy in my room... Everyone was horrified nd marched towards Jeevika's room, with a piece of log to beat the goon. Jeevika was gettin scared ...
[To be continued]😛
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My sweet spammers... do u have any idea about ur deeds???
Ur craziness has reached upto page 142👏👏
Marzi nd Karina, i'm so happy that u had ur daily conversations through my thread😆😆
Haju nd Sara thanxx for giving me a trance with ur long ''update'' message⭐️
Keep bugging... nd Enjoy... anyways sorry for being rude, but don't expect an update tomorrow... seriously i need rest😛
nd forgot to mention about Amrita, for activatin my spammers energy
-Navya-
shobrakapooor2013-03-28 09:19:14

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aww 😭 😭 😭okayy..today we'll do it wid the suspense of ehmmbhbut tomorrow pakka huh 😆

11 years ago

i'm so sorry guys.. i'm goin out wit my frndzz today... so can't update today... will try 4 tomorrow... -Keep Smiling-

11 years ago

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11 years ago

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11 years ago

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11 years ago

tomorrow will be the Best Day of My Life Navyaa😆waitind desperately for the updaaatteee😃

11 years ago

My sweet readers... i promise u that tomorrow i'll defo update... Aaj mujhe ''Suvreen Guggal-Topper of the year'' dekhne do plzzz :) -Navya-

11 years ago

Ohmigosh that was so good yaar

11 years ago

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