Chapter 18

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Navya

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Chapter:18 Jeevika kept the phone to the side, enquired whether Viren was still there. To her surprise, she found him still reading newspaper, but little she realised that there was a evil devil running inside that calm nd reserved person...😃 She thought: ''Y is he dead over the newspaper as if WW 3 has evolved!" She approached towards him slowly, trying to examine his reaction. Finally she gathered courage to speak up!! "Vi...Viren, actually... Before she could complete her sentence, Viren interjected... "Delhi 26/2: A wife brutally murdered her husband, she was caught red handed by the Delhi police, after the investigation they found that, she murdered him, just bcz her husband didn't grant her needs...'' God... i just can't believe the modern day ladies are so... they r taking advantage of us! Jeevika listened to all this with a grimaced expression. The moment she was abt to start again... 'actually Viren, it's my friend's...'
Viren: Oh no, i have to leave for work.
He stood up from the sofa, nd went to dressing room... Jeevika stood there dumbfounded raising her hand😆
Jeevika:[to herself] No way i'm gonna leave him like that, if my name is Jeevika, thn surely i'll convince him nd get permission.
She followed him to his room...
Jeevika: Viren, y aren't u...
By the time she could complete, he removed off his shirt😛 Seeing this Jeevika became embarrased turned to the other side, with her eyes closed...
Jeevika: Chiii, aren't u shameless...
Viren: What happened, mere 6 pack dekh kar shock ho gayi kya?
Jeevika: 6 pack, my foot! Can't u see how many times i've been following u...
Viren: Since when did u become my loyal fan???
Jeevika: [puzzled] Srry?
Viren: No, actually it's crazy fans who follows their favourite person?
Jeevika: ugh! what an idiotic joke!
Viren: It's just u , who gives no value to my jokes, my jokes r always poular specially in my office!
Jeevika: Whatever, could u plz put on ur shirt? Are u rehearsing to be Salman Khan?
Viren: Why should i? I'm leaving for work!
Jeevika: Iss tarah se, i mean will u go shirtless?
Viren: Haan, do u want to come with me?
Jeevika: No thanks...I want to talk something imp with u!
Viren: Yaa, thn y ru hesitating? Speak up, but ru still remembering ur promise... i mean 'Silent promise'
Jeevika: Ok fyn, ''u win, i loose'' Happy!
Viren: Wait a sec, how easily did u give up?
Jeevika glared at him, she was loosing patience...
Viren: ok ok go on...
Jeevika: It's my friend Priya's wedding next month... she has invited...
Again she was interpretted by Viren
Jeevika: What now??
Viren: Tum bhi na Jeevs, come on yaar, don't u have manners?
Jeevika:?
Viren: U wish to get my permission , so are u gettin permission like this to me, i mean just through a formal talk?
Jeevika: GOD... don't tell me ur taking advantage of my stupid promise nd the fights we had...
Viren: I never aimed that... infact u forgot to convince me?
Jeevika: [suspicious] How?
Viren: Why ru keeping distance while talking to me, paas aakar baat karo?
Jeevika: God, is this DTPH part 2...
She came forward, more forward, by the time she reached near him, he draped his arm around her waist, pulled her closer to his bare body! She was half dead now...
Viren: This is the new version of DTPH, [smirked] ok tell me...
Jeevika: Vii..vi.. can u?
Viren: Y are u stammering? tell me the matter...
Jeevika: My frnd...
Viren: ur frnd Priya invited u for her wedding prior 4 weeks later... u wish to go but ur scared wther i'll agree... Come on yaar, i'm ur husband, if I won't agree then who's going to listen u.
Jeevika: [kind of uncomfortable...] So u'll agree right!
Viren: Haan, agree toh karna padtha hai na... it's ur frnd's i mean close frnd's wedding! Haan tumhe thodi miss karungi, but i'll adjust! I mean i have to adjust right?
Hearing this Jeevika started gettin emotional...
Viren: Oh god, shuru hogaya aasu meter! But I didn't complete my words..
Jeevika: [wiped her tears] Toh phir...
Viren: Ya, i'll give u permission only if u tell those 3 words to me that too in a spcl way! Remember last tym ur presentation was very bad!
She got hold off from Viren...
Jeevika: No way, u'll never get convinced frm my ILU...
He again pulled her closer, he felt her heart beating harder..
Jeevika: Virenji, i don't know y but whenever u come near, hug me, i get lost by it, i'm happy to have such a caring husband like u... Its a fact that i can't confess in filmy style, but i'm just aware of onething that i love u , nd i wish to be with u forever, I Love u!
Viren: Wah WAh, good, but not great...
She looked at him with dissapointedly!
Viren: Srry meri maa, it was gud... I love u!
He kissed her on her cheek...
Viren: Ok are u planning to stay here, till i finish dressing😛
Jeevika: OO srry..
He left the room, got ready, nd gave a goodbye kiss to her...
Jeevika in the hospital after consulting the patients resorted to her usual stuff: Day Dreaming!
" Haan, thoda sa akdu hai, but phir bhi he's cute!"
Viren in his office: "I just wish my presentation goes well"
He looked at the bracelet "Oh, i forgot to give this back to her"
He smiled: "Yes, she's a bit naughty at times, i mean pagal toh hai, lekin dil ke saaf hai, i've tormented her a lot of times, but she never kept that in mind"
Meanwhile Jeevika got a call from Manvi informing her to come Chandigarh to go to Punjab with her in the train. The thought of missing Viren really hurt her. She doesn't want to miss him, but at the same time, can't miss her Friend's marriage too. She was in a total dilemma now.
Evening, Virika left early from work... They had dinner!
Night time, Viren lying on the bed, Jeevika by his side , resting her head on his chest, her left hand on his chest!
Jeevika: Virenji?
Viren: Haan ji😉
Jeevika: Should i really need to go?
Viren: It's all ur decision... when are u planning to go?
Jeevika: after 3 weeks...
Viren: Did u sent the leave application?
Jeevika: Haan, they'll accept it, cz its barely 5 months i took a leave [its 9 months since Virika married😊] nd not only that there r other cardiologists besides me, so I can shift most of my patients there! BUT u'll miss me right?
Viren: [started thinking harder]
She raised her head nd looked him...
Jeevika: U won't miss me?
Viren: No.. y should i miss u... [raised both of his hands] Infact mein toh chene se so paongi...
She bet his chest harder, got up, went to the balcony! She was totally angry with him. He followed her nd gave her a back hug, he nuzzled her neck slowly nd placed a soft kiss on her neck, she closed her eyes. He again kissed her nd said: ''Y can't we go out?"
Jeevika: U better go with someone, i'm nt coming!
Viren: But the point is, i don't have any ''someone'', if i'm havin ''someone'', then it's my Jeevika! [hugged her tightly]
Jeevika: [shrugged off] Keep ur white washing with urself!
Viren: So u won't come... warning, agar tum nahi aaogi, toh mein tujhe uttakar jaongi!
He carried her by his arms, Jeevika tried to resist it! They went to mall, bought lots of items, they went to a ice cream parlour.
Viren: Ice cream?
Jeevika averted her face in anger!
Viren: Chocolate or Butterscotch? acha theek hai i'll buy pista flavour...
Jeevika: No no... Butterscotch!
Viren smiled. They both had a good time eating ice cream...
Viren: No ru angry with me?
Jeevika: Yes i'm...
Back to home, they reached home, Viren held her by her hand!
Viren: There's something on ur face?
Jeevika: What is it? [she started searching for it]
Viren: I'll help u...
He moved closer to her, kissed on her jawline, carried her to the bed...
Jeevika: Viren? What is it?
Viren: Nothing, i'm just thinking when will i ever fight with u? When will i ever be angry with u? When can i love u nd on top of that , when can i romance u again, ur leaving me nd going right!
Jeevika: U don't miss me right!
Viren: Am i a fool not to miss u? [cupped her face]I'll miss u badly , ur smile, ur antics everything about u!
Jeevika: will u call me everyday when i reach Punjab?
Viren: Hmm...
Jeevika: I'm not goin, i can't miss u Virenji...
She started crying, he kissed her tears...
Viren: Kyun roh rahi hai, ur not leaving me eternally , u'll come back right!
She nodded her head, viren on top of her, hugged her. Both were enclosed into a deep hug!
3 weeks passed so fast, as much as the days progressed, Jeevika started getting sad! Finally the day arrived, Virika got ready!
Viren: One last thing pending?
Jeevika: What's it?
He pulled her closer, kissed her on her lips, she too responded this time!
Viren: [breathing harder] challo!
In the car, Jeevika was silent all the while, she was depressed, Viren tried to console her but his efforts were in vein!! He too felt bored because of her silence , he missed all her crazy rattings! After a while, she fell asleep, Viren got out of the car to buy tea. He came back, gazed at his beauty for the last time! He adjusted her hair, touched her face, kissed her forehead. Unconscious Jeevika held his hand tighter to herself, he slowly got hold off her nd whispered...
" Life is all about happiness and sadness, we should have the courage to face it''
She was lost in her sleep. He adjusted herself!
Finally they reached Jeevika's house, her mom this tym welcomed them well, she hugged her mom, mom apologised both Virika. Manvi started her usual bhak-bhak, Jeevika wasnt in a mood to hear it, her thoughts were only about missing Viren!!
They had lunch, finally it was time for Viren to bid adieu to Jeevika, she started to delay it by talking unnecessarily! He cupped her face.
''JAna hi padega na, toh jaane dijeye na''
He went out, Jeevika with a teary eyes, tried to hide it from her family! She thought "I wish Viren turned nd look at me for one last tym!''
She waited for long but Viren sat in his car, about to start it...
Viren: I don't think, i'll be able to bid adieu to her...
in her veranda
J: He didn't even look at me...
She went to the terrace depressed, she looked at his car slowly gettin faded away out of her sight! Finally he stopped the car nd peeped out through the window. She became so happy nd waved him a good bye, he too waved back, finally he too waved her back. He started his car. She stood there till she lost his sight waiting for the moment to be in his presence soon!
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-Navya-
Since most of u were disappointed last tym for havin just a short update, this time I've made it longer... longer than my usual writing! Take ur time in reading... nd i've something to tell u guyss... [it's asusual abt my xamms lol]
I dont know whether this is my last update before exam, if i'm planning to continue , it'll be on Sat! If i cant update on Sat, thn u can expect an update only on 22nd March, after my boardzz. Finally that day is goin to arrive, i'm really gettin nervous now, plz do pray for me for one last time, if u do so, i'll give u a brilliant update after exam😃
shobrakapooor2013-02-26 10:06:33

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