Chapter 1
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~~AsYa OS: A Night to Remember~~
By Mrina
After the Tanveer confrontation, everyone had gone to their respective rooms to calm themselves down. Zoya peeped out of her room to see if anyone was insight. Luckily, as no one was there, she tip toed out of her room and went out of the main door to the backyard. She wanted to spend some time alone under the dark sky.
Asad sat on his bed and thought to himself, "Maine Zoya se zyada Tanveer par bharosa kiya! Ye kaisi mohabbat thi meri jo main Zoya ke sach ko bhi pehchaan na paaya! I have to apologize for everything that I have done!"
He looked at the engagement ring that he had got that day from the orphanage when he had saved her from another near to death experience. He picked it up and put it in his jeans pocket, then got up walked to Zoya's room and stood in front of the door and braced himself. He gently knocked the door and waited for Zoya to respond. After a minute he knocked a little louder. Yet, there was no response. He peeped in slightly to see what Zoya was doing but she wasn't there! He looked in the bathroom and checked the cupboards. All her belongings were intact.
"Zoya gayi kahan?", he thought and went to the backyard. She sat on the bench in the backyard looking up at the dark cloudy sky. He walked over and sat down next to her. She felt his presence and quickly wiped off her tears.
"Aap theek hain?", he asked.
"Ji!", she replied and continued to stare at the sky.
"Itna sab kuch ho gaya, aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi?", he asked.
He looked down guiltily and continued, "Actually ghalati meri hai. Bataya use jaata hai, jo sunne ke liye raazi ho! Main Tanveer ki chaal mein itna phas gaya tha! Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye ho kya raha hai!?"
He looked over at Zoya who looked at him. He spoke up, "Aapki hifaazat karna meri zimmedaari hai, jise main baar baar andheka karta raha! Uske liye main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga!"
His eyes had tears which threatened to fall as he looked into her innocent orbs. She gently took his hand into her and intertwined her fingers with his.
"Aapki koi ghalati nahi hai Mr. Khan! Aap to sirf apne dost pe yakeen kar rahe the. Jo baatein aapko siwaaye dard ke aur kuch nahi de sakti, unhe bhool jaana hi behtar hota hai!", she said as she caressed his hand with her other hand.
She continued, "Main wo sab kuch bhool jaana chahti hoon! Aur aap bhi apne mann mein koi guilt mat rakhiye, kyunki main nahi chahti Mr. Khan ke humare aane waale kal par, humare beete hue kal ka koi saaya bhi pade!", she concluded.
She then gently released her hand from his and got up. She walked a little ahead and stood still feeling the cool breeze hit her face.
Asad got up and followed her and stood behind her. He took her right hand in his left and gripped it tightly. She turned to face him. He pulled her close and kept her right hand on his chest still holding onto it.
He looked into her eye and spoke up, "Main aapse wada karta hoon ke main hamesha aapko khush rakhunga!"
She looked at him with tears brimming from her eyes. He gently cupped her face and wiped off her tears. He then went down on his knees and held her left hand. He gently kissed it and looked up at Zoya"s face. She looked down at him with a gentle smile.
"Kya aap mujhse nikaah karengi? Kya aap apni poori zindagi mere saath rahengi?", asked Asad with a gentle smile and hope in his eyes.
She nodded in a 'yes' as a drop of tear made its way down her cheek. He removed the ring from his pocket and slipped it onto her finger.
She smiled as tears streamed down her cheek. He got up and wiped off her tears.
"Aap mujhe kabhi chhodke to nahi jaayengi na?", he asked, his eyes still had tears brimming.
She cupped his face and wiped off his tears and replied, "Main waada karti hoon Mr. Khan, Main kabhi aapka saath nahi chhodungi! Humesha aapke saath rahungi.. Aapke pass!"
She rose on her toes and placed a silent kiss on his cheek. He closed his eyes as he felt her soft petal like lips on his hard stubble cheek. She pulled away and her lashes fell. He pulled her into a tight hug never to let her go.
"Main aapse bohot mohabbat karta hoon!", he whispered in her ear.
She smiled and tightened her grip on him as a shade of crimson rose on her cheeks.
Suddenly it started to drizzle. Zoya broke apart and looked up at Asad's face.
"Ms. Farooqui! Humein andar chalna chahiye!", he said.
Zoya nodded and he guided her inside the house. As they entered, there was a sudden downpour.
"Good Night Mr. Khan!", she said and started walking towards her room.
"Zoya..", he called out.
She turned and to look at him. "I love you!", he said with a gentle smile and a certain blush.
"Allah Miya! What's wrong with you Mr. Khan? Aap blush kyun kar rahe hain?", she asked with a giggle.
He turned away and walked to his room. Before he could open the door, Zoya ran and held his hand.
"Naraaz ho rahe hain aap?", she asked with a slight smile playing on her lips.
"Aapse naraaz hona chahu bhi to nahi ho sakta! Good Night!", he replied smiling at her.
"Rukiye na! Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai!", she said.
"Kahiye!", he said and looked at her.
"Aankhein band kijiye!", she said.
He closed his eyes waiting for her next move. She moved closer to him and rose on her toes. He could feel her warm breathe on his ear.
"I love you too!", she whispered. She dropped a quick peck on his cheek and ran away. He opened his eyes and saw Zoya inside her room peeking out to look at him.
"Aap 2 minute ke liye baahar aayengi? Mujhe aapko kuch dena hai!", he said.
Zoya furrowed her brows and walked out. "Ji kahiye.. Kya dena hai aapko?", she asked.
"Aankhein band kijiye!", he said. She closed it. He gently held her by her waist and bent down and dropped a wet kiss on her cheek. She shuddered at that very blissful feeling.
He then gently moved in closer. Her lips quivered in anticipation as she felt his breathe over it. He gently brushed his lips against her and gently sucked her lower lip. She responded by sucking his upper lip. Her fingers ruffled through his hair and his hand were on her waist caressing it. They broke apart to take a breath and rested their foreheads together. They looked deep into each other's eyes. Zoya blushed and looked down.
"Good Night Mr. Khan!", she wished.
"Good Night Zoya!", he wished back.
She looked up at him and replied, "Aapke muh se mera naam bohot achha sound karta hai!", and retreated to her room and so did he. They both stood at the door of their respective rooms.
"Waise main bhi apna naam sunna chahunga!", he said.
She smiled and said, "Asad!"
Asad blushed a little as Zoya threw him a flying kiss and shut the door. He smiled and walked into his with a feeling of contentment.
Love you all! 🤗 Mwwwaaahhh ❤️
- Mrina 😊
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Comments (75)
It was amazing!! I really loved it so much.. I loved the scene originally used in the serial as well.. One of the best scenes of the show really.. Asad was, for the first time, so open about his feelings for Zoya and so guilty.. Even here, the portrayal is very good.. :)The end was beautiful.. Specially the kiss.. *Melting away*Lovely OS Mrinalini.. :)
9 years ago
This was so awesome..:')Asad said so much more than woh actually..;)And his confession was so beautiful..! This was so cute os and so lovely..!! Their kisses and hugs...wow..!! So well written..:)Loved it ..❤️cutie152015-03-21 23:25:48
9 years ago
I Loveee YouuuMko iss se zyada kuchni bolnaaa...p.s. i've re read this one as well multiple times!
9 years ago
Haha.. Thank you Bae! ❤️
10 years ago
Hayyyeee My munchkins 😳 What a beautiful story 👏 I'm Fangirling right now. 😳
10 years ago
Thank you All ❤️ ~ Mrina
10 years ago
Thank you sooo much all of you! Glad you liked my work! 😳Big Hug! 🤗- Mrina
10 years ago
its a perfect os dearI loved everything in itThat kisses hayeee😳
10 years ago
ALAAA BH ALAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Just loved it ❤️
10 years ago
Simply beautiful! Great writing! 👏
10 years ago