Chapter 1
confused with the name??
don't b bahut jaldi pata chal jaayega what i mean!!!!
bcoz I LoVe YoU
kria had returned from new york and she still ignored rey...
rey tried many chances but still he couldn't...
kria always used to make an excuse sometimes she used to say she has got a call to attend so sometimes she says its time for rehearsals... some or he other excuse...
this irritated ey to the core...
he was fed of this and decided to finish it for once and all...
one fine day kria was walking in the corridor when suddenly she pulled into fire exit...
kr- wat the hell swayam kya hai?? (sab rey ko imagine kar rahe the...🤣)
sw- kria i m tierd of it yaar...
kr- ab meinne kya kia??
sw- so u really don't noe tumne kya kia??
kr- accha ok fine i noe...
sw- aur kab tak chalega...
kr- pata nahi swayam but its jut that i don't want to hurt myself again...
sw- aur isliye tum apni in feelings se dur bhaag rahi ho??
kr- bhaag nahi rahi swayam it's just that...
sw- just that wat kria?? just one chance... give him one chance...
kr- but phir bhi un hone...
sw- bas ek baar??
kr- theek hai... kyunki tum keh rahe ho...
sw- wooowww kria!!!
kr- but that doesn't mean it'll b easy for him...
kr- but that doesn't mean it'll b easy for him...
sw- matlab??
kr- jo jaisa chal raha hai waisa hi chalega...
sw- then how wil he do it??
kr- it's all left to him... (and kria leaves)
sw- (to himself)--rey beta ab tu hi sambhal isse... meinne apna kaam kar dia...
in the boys locker room...
rey- swayam kya hua kya bola usne?? wo maa gayi na? is she ready?? kya hua tu kuch bolta kyun nahi hai...
sw- rey agar tu mujhe bolne ka mauka dega tabhii can spk...
rey- ohh m sorry...
sw- kria ka asar hai... bilkul uski tarah baat cutter...
rey- ab tu aise hi karega ya kuch bolega bhi...
sw- haan wo kya haina wo maan gayi hai...
rey- wat sacchi??
sw- haan par
rey- par kya??
sw- ek problem hai...
rey- problem kaisi problem??
sw- wo she is like jo jaisa chal raha hai waise hi chalega and u will have to try hard...
rey- wat?? matlab??
sw- matlab ye ki jab mein (and he narrates the FE scene)
rey- yaar ye baatcutter... pata nahi kitna tadpayegi...
sw- ahem ahem...
rey- wo wo wo actually chod... i'll see through it...
and den rey leaves...
for few days things went the way... kria used to ignore rey and rey he used to try hard but one day...
kria was pulled into the FE...
by the touch she could say who it was... she hadn't have to see the face...
kr- kya hai rey??
rey- kya hai matlab??
kr- yehi wat r u doing??
rey- kuch nahi i m just and comes closer to her...
kr- rey...
rey (keeps his finger on her lips)- ssshhh aaj tumhe sun na hi padega baatcutter u can't ignore me... ab bas bahut ho gaya...
and den kria as she didn't want to make it easy for him removes his hand...
kr- ohh toh aapko samajh mein aagaya i m ignoring u... mereko laga
rey- laga ki i m dumb??
kr- haan
rey- wat??
kr- sach tha...
rey- baatcutter m sorry...
kr- sorry for wat rey?? sorry for hurting me or sorry for calling our kiss as moment or sorry for not loving me back?? sorry for rey??(she shouts)
rey- luk kria i m sorry for everything... for each and everything... i noe pagal hun mein jisne tumhe jaane dia... jisne tumhara dil dukhaya... i noe it's all my fault... but just one chance kria just one last chance...
i promise i will never hurt u and will make sure u never get hurted...
kr- y r u doing this rey?? (with teary eyes)
rey- bcoz i love u kria... i love u... u r more than a friend of me... u r my better half... u complete me... i love u kria i love u... (with teary eyes)
kr- i love u too rey and they have a hug!!!!!
huh khatam!!! bas itna hi... this is something out of my imagination...
huh khatam!!! bas itna hi... this is something out of my imagination...
i miss KR and unki yaad mein ye likh dia!!! +++
this is ek chotu sa gift for all my lovely dear friends jo mujhse treat mang rahe the for my promotion to goldie!!!!😆
kaisa laga?? do telll!!! hit the like button and comment!!!
p.s. it isn't over yet!!! 😉
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Great.But the treats were the best. Yummy 😳
10 years ago
Itni saari treats with an os..Good job simmy...
10 years ago
really cute osbahut chotu sa tha but was really niceloved the last kr convo...
10 years ago
mast os tha...kria ignoring rey and he still trying hard to manofy her...finally confess kar diya...lovely os...thanks for pm...
10 years ago
real treat!!! Then come over here... :pand thank u!!! Sooo sweet of u!!!
10 years ago
yeah sweet heart I will surely wirte something on SanDhir..,I have something in my mind... Bas waiting for that moment...
10 years ago
[QUOTE=--resh_kr--]simsss!!!🤗haye ek aur OS! kria ignoring rey!!!aur kriyam convo...hmm finally kria agreed to give a chance to swayam but woh condition! haye kria is always THE KRIA!😳bechara rey has to struggle a lot to win kria's heat!toh yeh sab reyam ka plan tha to talk to kria..🤔reyam talk was cool! rey toh baatcutter bann gaya( like U 😳)haye rey itna khush wen he's given a chance but equally sad abt the condition!😒finally the FE scene!kriyaansh confession was amazing! rey ne finally confess kardia...i wish d3 mein bhi aisa hi ho!seriously the confession was mindblowing!!!👏👏bohut accha OS tha but chotu sa tha!!!well koi nai u've covered it up wid the TREAT!😉Okay so now the treat!haye my sweetypie! tune already merko meri treat de dia na! toh phir now again?😲well, anyways thank u so much darls!🤗waise tune yeh saare cakes mein kuch milaya toh nai na?😉😆😆😆 just kidding!😆ummm...yummy chocolates nd cake!! woh bhi chocolate wala!! love it!😳 yeh lo bechari tum bhi cake khalo *feeding u😳*sundae!! yummm..my favs!!!⭐️ haye pet bhar gaya!🤣waise thanks again for this lovely treat dearo!nd the OS was awesome!!lovely job sims!Love u so muchhh!!❤️ [/QUOTE] haayyeee this is awesome!!! Tera comnt padh kar I felt sooo happy!!!I love u sooo much!!! Hehehheee baatcutter heheheee I remember humare convo's...and nahi milaya... :p heheheee Yummm tune feed Kia :* love u dher saara!!!!
10 years ago
simmi you are seriously great yaar.. then why come you are not writting on sandhir...anyways loved it.. *applause* 👏 👍🏼
10 years ago
simsss!!!🤗haye ek aur OS! kria ignoring rey!!!aur kriyam convo...hmm finally kria agreed to give a chance to swayam but woh condition! haye kria is always THE KRIA!😳bechara rey has to struggle a lot to win kria's heat!toh yeh sab reyam ka plan tha to talk to kria..🤔reyam talk was cool! rey toh baatcutter bann gaya( like U 😳)haye rey itna khush wen he's given a chance but equally sad abt the condition!😒finally the FE scene!kriyaansh confession was amazing! rey ne finally confess kardia...i wish d3 mein bhi aisa hi ho!seriously the confession was mindblowing!!!👏👏bohut accha OS tha but chotu sa tha!!!well koi nai u've covered it up wid the TREAT!😉Okay so now the treat!haye my sweetypie! tune already merko meri treat de dia na! toh phir now again?😲well, anyways thank u so much darls!🤗waise tune yeh saare cakes mein kuch milaya toh nai na?😉😆😆😆 just kidding!😆ummm...yummy chocolates nd cake!! woh bhi chocolate wala!! love it!😳 yeh lo bechari tum bhi cake khalo *feeding u😳*sundae!! yummm..my favs!!!⭐️ haye pet bhar gaya!🤣waise thanks again for this lovely treat dearo!nd the OS was awesome!!lovely job sims!Love u so muchhh!!❤️ --resh_kr--2014-03-22 05:52:06
10 years ago
i don't watch this serial much bt then i read ur few works it was nice yaar !!!!!!!!!and this one i like the way she said sorry ...and it was lovely!!!!!!!!!!😊congrats for ur promotion to goldie ...🤗and haan ithna saara sweets and chocolate i'll sure become diabetic (kidding!!!!!!!!!)😛and then u can't cheat us by giving only pic we want real treat ...😉
10 years ago