hello TASians...!! im back to update ... so here i have the next part of my FF ...thanks for ur lovely comments...and continue doing so...so enuff of my useless bhashaan...coming to the game ...my favourite thing was...

MY FAVOURITE PART :

" maanvi I wish ..i just wish mai ye smile tumhare chehere par hamesha rakh saku...i just wish ki tum mujhse kabhi alag na ho...i wish ki mai tumhe uss karan se bacha loon...kash mai tumhe bata pata ki tum musibat mai ho... kash "😭

and there ws only one to hit the bulls eye... 😃
it is 

rasp_berry

congo dear 👏 ...party time for u na???
congratzzz...🥳🥳🥳

so here goes an update dedicated to rasp_berry...enjoy dear ...😃😃

Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 16...

Maanvi , Jeevs and VM in garden...

Vm : beta ...aaj ke liye itna hasna bahut ho gaya..!!! bas ab mujhse aur hasa nhi jata...😆

M : par abhi toh joke shuru hua hai...!! 😲(thts whn virat sees her smiling )

Vm : nhi nhi..mai ja ri hu... mujhse aur nhi suna jata...🤢(she leaves from there)

M : ok...mai di ko sunaungi ...

J : mannu  ye joke sab chodd...chal kamre mai jake baat karte hai ...

Virika room

J : aa bait ...ab bol..         M : ha toh ...vo haathi jaa kar..chinti se...🤢🤢

J : mannnu ye nhi 😡...!! Tere aur virat ke barey mai...gaadi aage badi ya ataak gayi wahi ke wahi??😕

M : blushes...☺️   J : arey ...blush kyu kar ri hai?? 

M : mai blush ...kaha? Kab?? kaise???? 😲😲😲(like a stupid she asks this )

J : mannu bol na ...    M : di vo ...uhmm ...ermm..di vo..  

J : mannu aage bhi toh bol...    M : di vo ..virat ne

J : mannu bol na!!!! 😵(irritated)    M : di vo actually ...vo virat ne...

J : mannu bol na ...warna ek chata lagaungi...😡

M : (in one breath with eyes tightly shut) di vo virat ne mujhe I love you bol diya ...aur maine bhi...!!!😕😕

J : (shocked) no response...   M : (opens her eyes slowly to see her di) DI ?? aap thik ho?😲😲😕

J : uhh...(hugs her) uhh mannu im so happy for u 😃...!! Yesss...uhh I cant blive it is happening...uhh..(aparts and kisses her forehead ) mai tere liye bahut khush hu...!!!

M : smiles...looks down😳

J : par ye sab kab hua?? Kab bataya ?? I mean hame bataya bhi nhi...!!😛

M : di vo...ye sab actually mere birthday ke din hua... I mean ..uss din hum late aaye the ghar pe...sucess  party ke baad...😳

(narrates the whole story editing sum part😉..im sure wat part u all knw!! Sab ke sab... Besharam kahi ke...😆.)

J : (angry) 😡😡accha...aur mujhe ab pata chal raha hai!! (pulls her ears)

M : di !! ahh...hum batane waale the par ..tym nhi mila...😕

J : accha!! Tym nhi mila...mere rishtey ke barey mai maine sabse pehle tujhe call karke bataya aur tu hai ki..😡😡

M :sholly!! (pupy face)     J : all anger gone...accha chal thik hai ...(they hug)😛

Vi : arey hume kyu bhul rahe ho ?? 😲       M : jiju..aap..aaiye na..

Vi : mujhe mere hi kamre mai aane ke liye... permission dene ka thns...😛

M : bites her tounge... 🤢   Vi : accha waisey yaha pe  .. ram -bharat milap kyu chal raha tha??😕 (indicating their hug...)

J : vo apni saali se puchiye...!

M : (shocked) 😲mere se?? kya ?? di... She blushes and runs away from there as soon as possible..

Vi : areey maanvi ko kya hua?? Jeevs tumne meri pyaari Sali ko kya bola??🤢

J : maine ussey kuch nhi bola...!! Aapki pyaari saali ne  mujhse kya bola ye puchiye!

Vi : kya bola?? (innocently..)😊

Jeevika tells everything wat maanvi told her...and virens expressions...😲😲

Vi : kyaaa?? Abhi khabar leta hu us ustadd ki ..bataya bhi nhi aisey kaisey kar sakta hai vo uhhh...(getting up to go to virats  room)😡😕

J : virenji ..pls virat ki khichaai mat kijiye...😕

Vi : chup ..apne devar ki syd mat lo..!! abhi dekhta hu mai usey...

In virat's room...

Viren enters and sees virat on the chair...viren even goes n sits besyd him...virat was closing his eyes n trying to keep calm...

Vi: maanvi ki khayalo mai khoya hua hai kya?? (smirks)😉

V : (jerks and opens his eyes) oh bhai aap yaha?? Koi   kaam..??😲

Vi : ye toh mujhe puchna chahiye tumse...         V : matlab ...😕

Vi : mai batau ya tu samaj jayega?? Maanvi ko tune apne feelings ke barey mai bata bhi diya aur mujhe nhi bataya ...ahhh ..ye sula diya tune apne sage bhai ko !! uhh..(hitting his shoulder playfully and faking anger)😆😆

V : bhai vo...ha bas vo ...kuch planned nhi tha...vo bas... (with out xpression..)🥱

Vi : arey tu toh apne proposal ki story aisa bata raha hai jaisey kisi ki mayyad(death ceremony) ho..!!😲😲

V ; bhai vo ...kuch nhi ( gets up from the chair ..and walks towards the bed...brushing his hands in his hair...)

Vi : virat kuch hua kya?? Bol na mujhe ...maanvi ke sath jhagda hua kya??  (giggles)

V : bhai nhi ...bas kuch nhi  chodiye aap...

Vi : now he realizes tht something is really wrong thts y virat is tensed...

Vi : virat ab tu itna bada ho gaya ki apne bhai se apni problem bhi share nhi karega ...?? Bol na virat ...mujhe pata hai ki tujhe kuch bahut bada matter ..tense kar raha hai..aur ho na ho ..mujhe kahi na kahi pata hai ki ye maanvi se related hai... (keeps hand on virats shoulder)

Virat turns towards viren n hugs him tightly...viren is first shocked ...but then tries to calm him down ...

Vi : virat kya hua ? virat ...bol na virat kya hua..?? (aparts from the hug...and is more shocked .😲😲.) virat tu ...tu baith yaha pe... virat tu ro kyu raha hai ??? virat tu mujhe bahut dara raha hai ...virat bol na...(in response oly tears from virat😭😭) virat maine tujhe aise sirf uss waqt dekha tha jab maya...uhh  ...virat bol na kuch...😕😕

V : bhai mai aaj uss situation se bhi worse feel kar raha hu... mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha ki mai maanvi ko kaise bachau...mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai ..mujhe nhi pata mai kya karu ...bhai mai maanvi ko kho nhi sakta ...😭😭

Vi : virat tu kya bol raha hai..maanvi ko kissey bachana hai???? thik se bol...😕

V : bhai vo karan ...(narrates the whole story ...hw karan met maanvi..n hw he challenged him ...hw he tried to make a accident ..n how he calld n proved tht he will do what he said...!! )

Vi : virat tu ye kya bol raha hai??😲

V : bhai mai sach bol raha hu...usne toh maanvi ka accident bhi karane ka socha...mai maanvi ko nhi kho sakta ...bhai vo useey stalk bhi kar raha tha..maanvi ne mujhe bataya bhi tha ki usey lagta hai ki koi usey stalk kar raha hai par maine usey ...mazak mai le liya😭 ...bhai vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai ..bhai maanvi ko bacha lo pls...

Vi : virat tu apne aap ko sambhal ...hum kuch na kuch soch lenge ...hum maanvi ko kuch nhi hone denge ..koi usey tujhse chin nhi sakta...!! (hugs virat)😭

(viren to himself)

Iss baar mai virat ko tut tey hue nhi dekh sakta...pls bhagwan ji iss baar virat ko uske pyaar se alag mat karna ..jiss tarah maya ke baad vo tut gaya tha uske baad toh vo jina nhi chahata tha ..aur agar ab phirse waisa hoga toh ...vo bardashh nhi kar payega ...pls pls...maanvi ko kuch mat hone dena...😭😭😭

Vi : virat hum maanvi ko kuch nhi hone denge...tu bas vishwas rakh ..ab tu thoda aaram karle ...😭

V : hmm..(eyes still swollen)

Virat sleeps...with all his office attire🤢...(viren leaves from there)

M : ye virat kaha gaya?? Bas yaha leke aaya ...aur bhul gaya ..ki mujhe waapas ghar bhi chodna hai...!!!abhi khabar leti hu iski 😡😡.. (goes to virat's room)

M : viraaattt😵...ohh😲 ...ooops...ye toh so raha hai...kumbhkaran kahi ka😆...(goes near him...sits over there) ...sotey hue kitna cute lagta hai ...(ruffles his hair ...was gonna squeeze his nose..but ..thought it wud disturb him...so...leans in n places a soft kiss on his forehead...she gets up ..) ye lo 😲...ye toh with shoes hi so gaya...manners nhi hai iss vadhera ko😡(keeping hands on her hips)...!! (she removes his shoes) and covers him with a duvet ...(smiles and says) ...i knw abhi sirf 8 pm hai par phir bhi good night prince...😳😳😳

VM watches this all n just smiles on the bond  of the duo... And walks off😃

Maanvi had dinner and was leaving ...it was almost 10 by nw...

J : mannu ye beeji ko de dena ..thik hai?          M : ha di .. ... bye vanshika aunty...

Vm : bye beta...tum kaise jaogi??virat ko boldu tumhe chodne ke liye??😕

M : nhi nhi ..aunty mai chali jaungi ...waisey bhi apka beta ..sleeping beauty bana hua hai ..!!! 😆  They laugh...

J : toh mannu mai virenji ko bol ti hu rukh...!!!😕😕

M : nhi di it's ok ..mai chali jaungi ...ghar se car aa gyi hai !!! so no tension ok ??😃

and maanvi leaves alone...towards her car...

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ok so thats it for today's update...do tell me how was it...and yea dnt forget to participate in the game ...!!! ok so see u soon with next chapiee ...till then byeee...see u soon and pls shower the same love u all used to...!!! 😳😳 

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