Chapter 17

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NOTE :
ok so i was quiet bored with the character of dabbu ...so i thought to change him...so my casting for dabbu is KARAN WAHI as i think he is perfect to do a comic role...
and here he is doing internship for becoming a doctor ...he is nt as silly as in the show...his pet name is dabbu fr sure but his real name is daksh....so sorry for a sudden change over here...but pls spare this...woh kya haina...i dnt have any other better work...!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†





now do tell me tht did u like my casting ..or else if mass is disagreeing then i will change it...๐Ÿ˜Š

virat's gift to maanvi ...


so how is the gift ...??? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ tell me ok...๐Ÿ˜ณ

lavanya_sweet2013-10-05 12:00:10

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sirf ek comment besharmo ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก ...!!!! baki sab kaha hai ?? itna mehnaat karke , jaldi update ke liye, ek comment ...?? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿคฃ LOL ..sorry fr this ๐Ÿคข im not in proper mood today ... ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

11 years ago

thanks for all ur love ๐Ÿ˜ณ...!! thns for ur lovely comments...and likes...keep doing the same...๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜‰ok so a good news๐Ÿ˜›...an update coming in few mins ...๐Ÿ˜ณ

11 years ago

thank u ...oh really ?? u read tht sumwher ...??๐Ÿ˜• no i guess u saw it...cz sumthing similar to it happened in EHMMBH ...i also dnt remember clearly ...but sumthing lik tht... i had in my mind also...tht evn i had seen it happening...๐Ÿคข

11 years ago

aww that was superb sweet update really loved it to the core. The way how everyone react when they saw manvi in virats arm was so funny. Then come to b'day wala part it seem so cute nd gift wala part when manvi was opening everyone's gift nd guessing who gave it to her was so sweet nd dnt mind i felt like i read or saw that scene somewhere bt dnt remember. Then the thermocol heart scene was way too much cute. Overall lovely update nd very well written. Waiting for the next part. Do update sn thanx for the pm tc

11 years ago

awesome update
loved virat tharmacol heart gift๐Ÿ˜†
dimaag ke ghode dauda na koi tumse sikhe I loved this line ๐Ÿคฃ
update soon
thanks for the pm

11 years ago

awesome update dearWaiting 4 next partUpdate Soon

11 years ago

lovely updateit was funny when jeevika came running to virat when she saw maanvi in his armsloved the gift part - how she recognised each persons giftloved virat's idea of gift\loved that virman parttheir phone convo was so sweetthe dialogue i liked isV
: bhaaabi ,bhai ..maaa!! shhhshshhh...so ri hai !! shhhsshhh chup ho jayiye
...jaag jayegi...shhshhshhh...vo ye car mai hi so gyi ..maine isse jagane ki
koshish ki par ..ye toh uthi hi nhi...isiliye mai isey utha kar laya...aur aap
sab ne toh melo drama shuru kar diya ...hadh hai yaar...!!!(in a soft tone)

11 years ago

nice update all family togethercelebrating her birthday update soon

11 years ago

my fav pArt isgift opening part

11 years ago

awesome updateloved itcontinue soonkaran wahi as Dabbu I don't mindthanks for the pm

11 years ago

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