hello TASians...shocked to see me so early na ?? evn im ...hahahaha ...anyhow ...i just got time so giving an update to u all...happy ??? i hope u all are...but im not happy...the response i got at the start ws very nyc and i ws satisfied with it...but nw a days i dnt see evryone responding to it...i mean i send hell lot of PM's and the reply is few...it is really very dissapointing fr me...cz ur love used to encourage me to write...but i cant see tht any more...PM milta hai na ??? toh like toh kia karo ..!! nahi toh mai bhi blackmail karna start kar dungi 😆.. LOL hahaha ....anyhow thanks fr all those cmmnts which ever wer there...

so here goes my update ...

the much  awaited  is gonna come ... khush raho padh ke ...agar ab se replies nahi dekhe na toh kasam se ...i will stop it ...i will discontinue it  🤢  acchi black mail hai na ??  i hope this works ..🤢...😉

Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 13...

The party gets over ..it is 11:30 pm by now... virman leave the place and move towards virats car...maanvi ws goin to sit ..bt virat like a gentlemen comes and opens the door...maanvi smiles😊 and sits...virat sits in the car ..and drives to office..in btwn the journey...

Both were quiet for 15 mins ..as both didn't knw wat to speak...bt maanvi cundnt resist it and asked...

M :tum ne vo gaana kisko dedicate kia tha??😕

V : kisi ko toh ...Kyo??

M :nhi bas pucha...aisa lag rat ha ki uss gaane ke har shabd tum kisise kehna chahate ho...koi aisa jisse tum bahut pyar karte ho...(lost voice)🤔

V :sahi kaha...

M :matlab tum kisi se pyar karte ho??(surprised...)😲

V :ha BE INTEHAAN...BE PANAAH...(virat purposely said this cause he wantd to see her reaction)😉

By this words..maanvi's world has crushed down🥺...she didn't knw how to react..

M :oh...(she didn't knw wat to say n she said)  yaha pe gaadi rok do ..

V :maanvi??? (confused)😕

M :maine kaha yaha pe gaadi rok do...(commanding..tone)

V :nhi mai nhi rok raha...maanvi tum aise nhi ja sakti...vo bhi itni raat ko sunsaan sadak par toh bilkul nhi...😡😡😡

Maanvi opens the car door...and virat immediately stops the car with a screech...maanvi takes her clutch and gets down of the car and starts walking backwards...virat gets down and runs behind her...catches her wrist and pulls her back she comes to halt..and virat makes her face him...and thts it...the moment virat made her turn...virat felt bad ...he saw tears in her eyes😭😭😭... he felt guilty tht time...he regreted...bt he gathered courage and said

V :kya hua manvi ..?? tum ro kyu ri ho??? (concernd)😲😲

She didn't answer ...just tears kept flowing from her eyes...virat asked 2-3 times bt she didn't react...nw he yells a bit ... "DAMN IT manvi ..batao kya hua???"😡

M :tumhe ussey matlab ???

and she starts walking towards his car...not to sit in it...but she walks  till the bonet of the car ...whn virat pulls her and pushes towards the bonet...tht she is forced to sit on bonet...and he closes her path to run away by blocking the ways keeping his hand...now she was completely blocked btwn him...and maanvi was shocked seeing this...😲

V :kya hua maanvi batao na...he says with a calm voice...

He gets no reply...oly tears ..from maanvi's eyes...he understood tht she is hurt by listening tht he loves someone else...💔

V :maanvi ..mai kisi aur se pyaar karta hu...ye sun kar tumhe bura laga na?? she raises her head upto him...with confusion...😕

V :confuse hone ki koi baat nhi ...mujhe pata hai ..tumhe usi baat se bura laga hai..maanvi par tum adhi adhuri baat sunnkar aise kaise naarazz ho sakti ho???😡

M : par tumne hi kaha ki tum kisise pyar karte ho...😭😭😕

V : ha toh ?? uss kisi ka naam janti ho??(she keeps quiet)mai batata hu... Voh bahut acchi hai ..vo mera bahut khayaal rakhti hai ...vo meri dhakkan ki tarah hai...vo nahi toh mai bhi nahi...usne kab meri zindagi mai aakar ..mujhe badal dia mujhe khud ko nhi pata...usne aakar..meri puri zindagi khushiyo se bharr diye...vo hawa jaise aakar ..mere rooh mai sama gyi...(viraat was saying all this coz he ws waiting fr clock to struck 12..as he had said tht he will say it after 1 day..on a beautiful day for maanvi...and noticing maanvi's expression...virat ws enjoyin it...she was getting worried n virat ke mann mai ladoo phoot rahe the...)

With each word of viraat ...maanvi's curiousness was increasing...and tears wer flowing bt of fear...tht will the girl be she herslf or not...clock struck ...11:59 pm...and virat asked...

V :janna chahati ho kon hai voh??❓

M :just nodded...with flowing tears...still fearing ..whos name it will be..

Virat (cups her face)...brings her down of the bonet and makes her stand...and himself goes on his knees...maanvi is shocked😲 ..as she still didn't knw wat's coming her way...virat takes her left hand with his right one and slowly kisses the knuckles of her hand and sees in her perfectly brown eyes and says...thts whn the clock struck 12 am... exact😃

" I Love You princess...i love u from all my heart..."  maanvi ws unable to digest wat she heard...she ws stunned...virat got up ...😲

She didn't utter a single word ...she just smiled a bit and continued with her tears...virat shook her and bought her back to earth from lala land😆...she looked upto him ...and said...

M : I love you too virat...and nt able to control more ..crashed herself into his chest and hugged him...he also responded ...she ws crying bitterly... And she said "tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya virat..."😭

V : ...im sooo sorry for tht...(she aparts now and is looking at him)...aur ab se no tears...😭(wiping her tears) sirf khushi...no rona dhona...

M : phir tumne tym pass kyo kia ...ye bata kar ki ..tum ussey kitna pyar karte ho n stuff??? Tumhe pata hai tumhari ek -ek line meri jaan nikaal ri thi...😭😭😕

V :...actually maine taay kia tha ki mai tumhe aaj hi bataunga...toh isliye..maine tym pass kia tumhe ye bata kar ki tumne meri lyf mai kaise change la di(dashes his forhead with her and smiles😛)...kynki mujhe 12 bajne ka intezaar tha...

M : 12 bajne ka intezaar?? Par aaj hi kyun???

V :bhul gyi na...??

M :kya ...

Virat pushes her towards the bonet...and she automatically leans over it...like the earlier position...and virat takes her hand and kisses it...maanvi blushes 😳but is still confused..tht y today oly???

V : leans closer to her...and says... "HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRINCESS" and kisses her cheeks...😳

Thts whn maanvi realizes tht she had forgotten her b'day in all the mishap...she normally is the first one to tell everyone tht it's her birthday but due to all this she forgot her birthday😆!!...she blushes as virat kisses her cheek...😳😳😳

M : oh mai toh bhul hi gyi...any hw ...thnk  u so much...!!

V :hmm..mujhe pata tha ..ki tum bhul gyi ho...😆😆

M :sirf wish kia??... mera gift kaha hai??😕😕

V  : gift🤢 ?? abhi chahiye?? Mere paas abhi toh nhi hai 😕(innocently says it..)

...par mai tumhe kuch de sakta hu...😉 (smirks..)

M :kya?? (curiosly waiting to knw...)

Virat leans closer towards her lips...and she blushes😳...bt she doesn't back out she goes with the flow..and he brushes his lips over hers slightly... waiting to knw if she is comfortable...whn she doesn't backout he cups her face and... He deepens the kiss...after few secs evn she responds...it was very light kiss but yet passionate one...as with it they wer letting their feelings out ..so tht each 1 knws wat they feel...after kissing her ...he aparts...bt their forehead still touching...both wer breathing little heavy than normal...whn virat says...

"happy birthday princess once more" and manvi smiles a bit with a little touch of blush.😳.and she hugs him still sitting on the bonet of the car and virat responds to the hug...hugging her virat says...

V : uhhhmmm...princess im sorry if I hurted you...😕😕🤢

She doesn't understand first but thn she does ..he is asking srry cz he is thinking she is uncomfortable as he kissed her and didn't want that to happen...bt maanvi assures him tht she is nt uncomfortable... they both smile to each other and say

" I love you " 😃 together...and thn they laugh😆...virat makes maanvi get down from the bonet of the car and they start driving ...whn jeevika's call comes...

J : hello  ...happy birthday..mannu..! har saal ki tarah iss saal bhi maine tujhe sabse pehle wish kia na??😛

M :thns di.. ...ha di iss saal bhi ap hi ne pehle wish kia...(sees towards virat and smiles..in respond virat also smiles)😃😉

J :accha mannu tumlog kaha tak pahunche ?? bahut late ho gaya hai...😕😕

M :ha di bas pahunchne waale hai...

J :accha .toh tu aaj yahi ruk ja itni raat ho chuki hai kal subah chale jana yaha se office k???

M :hmm di...byee..😛

J:bye...

Manvi hangs up the call...

Maanvi says tht di has tld her to stay..at vadhera mansion as it's late...and no need to drive to office...and saying this she pulls virats arm and rests her head on his shoulder😳😳...virat smiles and thinks...

" ABHI SE HAK JATA RI HAI... BAAD MAIN MERA KYA HOGA PATA NHI!!! "🤢😆😉

wanna knw wat next ??  stay tuned to Virman : Tere Aane se ...

ok so thats it for today's update...do tell me how was it...and yea dnt forget to participate in the game ...!!! ok so see u soon with next chapiee's promo ...till then byeee...see u soon and pls shower the same love u all used to...!!! 😭 😛
lavanya_sweet2013-11-02 11:19:34