Chapter 12
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Virman : Tere Aane Se...
Part 10...
NEXT MORN ...(day after marriage)
Vadhera mansion
All gather to have breakfast at the table ...
V: (whispering in virens ears) bhaaiii raat kaisi thi?? And laughs ...๐
Vi : maa ko jane de beta ..phir dekhta hu...!!
Vm: beta mai nikal ri hu ...apna khyaal rakhna...she had some work related to her orphanage org.
Vi : ha beta ...ab bol tu kya bol raha tha??๐ก
J : virenji ye aapko kya hua??๐ฒ
V : ha bhai!! (acting innocent...!! )๐ฅฑ
Vi : kuch nhi virat se ..chodo kuch nhi and he kept quiet ...(he ws damn pissd of at his bro) when they reach a little far He starts chasing him..all around the house..and jeevika admires the brotherly bond and nw starts missing her sissy!!!...
J : kash mannu mere saath hoti ...hamesha ke liye...!! Im already missing you mannu...pata nhi ab tujhse kab milungi...!!!
Months had passd by and everything was normal ... ...maanvi had joined the office and virats PA and now ...virat and maanvi wer bests of buddies they wer lyk fork n knife ...inseparable...!! They used share all the things tht wer on their mind...and virat had started to fall for maanvi ...bt he didn't knw this..bt jeevs , viren and vm knew this...as the way he acts whn he is with maanvi was really very different...!!๐
So it was all on the track until...
M : virat tum pagal toh nhi ho gaye ??๐ก
V : arey isme bura hai hi kya??
M : bura ?? ye bura nhi bahut bura hai!!!๐คข
V : dekho partner mai keh raha hu na...
Viren n jeevika stuck btwn the two ... wer noticing thm making innocent face...๐ฒ
M : mujhe kuch nhi sunna!!mai cheeze pizza order kar ri hun bass!!!
V : maanvi cheeze pizza accha nhi hai tumhari health ke liye...!!
Yess they wer arguing on the pizza!! Can u ever guess them???๐๐๐
M : as if vegetable pizza accha hai...!! Usme vo gandhe vegetables hotey hai ...un vegetables se mujhe jyada khatra hai!!!!!
V : maaannvi!! Tum koi baat sunti kyu nhi ??? last tym extra cheese pizza ke wajah se tum bimaar pad gyi ...!! Yaad hai ya bhul gyi?????๐ต
M : vo isliye kyunki ... (she was continue arguing but the 2 inncocents souls who wer noticing all this ... )
J ,V : BAASSS !! HUM PIZZA NHI BURGER ORDER KAR RAHE HAI!!! (screaching voice, aloud )๐ก๐๐
V ,M : yea great idea!!! Saying this they hi-5d each othr ... sat besyd each othr ..talking ,laughing ,smiling!!
Jeevs and viren wer now completely doubting tht their siblings wer 100% mental cases!!!!๐๐
Vi : kya yaar hum chaar toh yaha party kar rahe hai taaki hum celebrate kar sake ...apni virat ki music launch hit...aur mere case jeetne ki khusi mai aur tum done ne pehle hi ladke mood kharb kar dia...aur ab jaise kuch hua hi nhi waise baithe ho!!!
Virat and maanvi sing:hum toh aise hai bhaiya ...ye apna fashion hai bhaiya!!!๐
J :hmm k k ..nautanki ho dono ...ekdum ek dusre ke liye bane ...!! (with this she got a stamp on her foot by viren) aaahhh!!!
Vi :chup raho ...kya kar ri ho???
M : kya hua di ??? aap chilai kyu??๐ฒ
J : (innocent face)mannu vo macchar ...maccharrr ..ha ryt macchar !!! bahut macchar bad gaye hai ...!!!
J : (whispering in viren's ear) u will pay for this vadhera!!!! (viren gulped by this sentence)๐ก
Vi : (thinking) ye kya aaj mujhe sofa pe sulaygi?????? nhhhi ...yaar apne pairo par tune ...toh puri truck chala dali viren!!๐๐๐
M : ha di !! inka toh kuch karna padega!!! Aae virat (hitting his shoulder) tumhare cabin mai kitne macchar hai uh??? Dekha meri ko kitna kaat rahe hai...di ka haath dekho kitna lal ho gaya hai...(showing concern)๐ฒ
V :oh hello ...bhabi ke pair par machhar kata ...toh haath kaise lal ho sakte hai ??? (manvi gulped ) tumhe toh bas bahana chahiye mujh par chadne ke liye...!!! (irritated)
M :tum ladder thodi ho jo mai tum par chadu...!!!
V :tumhe nhi lagta ki tum thoda over acting kar rahi ho ..!! DRAMA QUEEN kahi ki...
M : oooyeee mai koi drama nhi karti...!!! Mai bas concern hu di ke liye...
V : (suppressing his laugh ๐) ha voh dekha maine ...pair ko chood hathh...he cudnt complete b4 tht oly manvi pounced on him like a sherni started hitting him ...blue black...
M : kya problem tumhari uhh...tumhe kisine mental hospital mai kyu nhi dala..!! (she says all this while hitting him ...with her soft hands) pata nhi tum kaise iss dharti par aa tapke...tumhe toh mai chodoungi nhi!!!๐
V :toh pakad ke rakho na JAANE-MAAN...! (he says with a wink...) ๐๐๐
Viren, jeevika and virat start laughing...and viren gives hi-5 to virat...and maanvi ws all embarrassed first bt thn she recovered from it n again started hitting virat again and this tym...virat ws laughing while getting soft hits from maanvi...jeevika and viren wer laughing like hell seeing their younger siblings cute fights...and then after some time she got tired hitting virat and she sat on the sofa n she also started laughing with the 3...๐๐๐
Vi : kya yaar tum dono ...chote baccho ki tarah ladte ho ...!! Tum dono ko tho museum mai rakhna chahiye...!!!!๐
V :I agree ...par maanvi ko dekhne ticket lagni chahiye...!!! Bhawahhwhwhahahahbhahahe ๐
(viren n jeevika burst out in laughter again ...)
He also laughed for sure..bt thn he turned to see manvi n saw her fuming in anger๐ก ...so he quickly got up n changed his seat...to be saved from the sherni in her... Seeing this viren and jeevika lost the little control also having on them ...they laughed until their eyes watered ...and here maanvi was giving looks to virat ...throwing fire balls at virat...and our poor virat ws just looking here n there except her...!!!๐๐๐คข
After a hour..
Vi : accha sunn mai aur jeevs long drive pe ja rahe hai ...tu maanvi ko drop karke ghar chale jana aur maa ko bol dena k!!
V : yess boss!!
They leave...virat turns to see maanvi
Maavi was pouncing on her burger...he nods his head in negative ..when maanvi suddenly starts coughing ...he goes to her quickly and offers her water...she was still coughing ..he rubs her back but no use she ws worseining ..he tries to calm her down...he starts getting tensed...he rubs her back and offers her water again ..this tym she feels a little better...
V: maanvi yaar dheere khao na !! burger konsa bhage ja raha hai !! tum kitni buri tarah se khas ri thi pata hai?? Tumhe kuch ho jata toh uhhh??? Aapna khayal nhi rakh sakti kya?? Itna jaldi khaane ki koshish karogi toh aise hi khaas ti rahogi ..!!! tum mai zara sa bhi dimag hai ya nhi???? (concerned and yell)๐ก๐ก
M : virat break maaro yaar!!mai thik hu !! ekdum fit and fine!! (assures him with a pale smile)
V : haa...voh maine dekha do minute pehele!!! And continues scolding her
M : sees down !! (tears form in her eyes..)๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
V : lo ab apna melo drama shuru karo ...ab ro kyu rahi ho ??? ,,,,, accha im srrryyy I didn't mean to hurt u yaar ...i just got tensed for u !! mai tumhe dard main hi dekh sakta yaar!! I care for u tht's y I shouted!! Im srry !! aur tum bhi na pagal ki jaisi harkat karti ho...aur phir mushkil mai pad jaati ho..!! im sorry..!!(catching his ears)
M : its k partner!!
V : gives her a hug
Virat & Maanvi POV
Mai itna accha feel karta /karti hu ...jab mai iss ke saath hoti/hota hu...aisa lagta hai kabhi isse jane na dun...hamesha apne paas rakhu sambhal ke...bt maanvi aparts๐ณ
M : virat chalo mujhe ghar chodd do...
V : hmmm...
In the car...
M : jiju aur di kaha gaye hai???
V: bhullakad tumhare saamne hi toh ...bhai ne bola ki vo log drive pe jaa rahe hai...!!
M : accha?? Ek aur baat mai bhullakad nhi hu..!!๐ฒ
V : achha?? Shakal se toh nhi lagta...!!
M : virat jeena chahate ho ya nhi???๐ก
V :accha sorry sorry...!! Maaarne ka plan hai kya??
M : agar tum chup nhi baithe tho to definitely...!! I wont hesitate to murder u...!!!
V :vo toh tum hamesha hi karti ho...!!!๐
M : kyaaa??? V : ha ..tumhare baak baak se tum hamesha mera murder karti ho..!!
M : whatever..!! drive karo warna ...mai tumhe choodungi nhi ...๐ก
V
: toh pakad lo naa JAANE MAAN... ๐คข M : uhhh ๐ต
She folds her hands...and looks out of window...and virat just smiles thinking hw easy it is to irritate her...๐๐
Virat drops her home...outside the villa she gets down and even virat ...they both discuss abt some meeting ..and she leaves...and virat drives home...
Virat reaches home...
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11 years ago
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11 years ago
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11 years ago
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