Chapter 3
Hello guys..thns u all for ur lovely comments...so here im to upload next part of my FF...enjoy it n do tell me how was it...
So here it is...
Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...
Part 1(b) :
V: heh accha mazak kar leti ho...!!!
Girl : mai serious hu virat ..she yells..
Virat's world crushed down there ...he was not able to belive what his love said.. n viren's n vanshika maa's face brightened a bit...which didn't go unnoticed by the girl(actually they both knew wat type of girl she was...but oly viren knew her real syd..!! both agreed fr this marriage cz virat was happy)
Goes near her n says ...
V: ye tum kya bol ri ho
Girl : ha virat ..mai tumse shaadi nhi karna chahati...
V: par tum toh mujhse pyar karti ho na ..?? Phir ye sab kya hai?? Ye mazak hai toh abhi ke abhi isse bandh karo...said almost on the verge of crying
Vi : maine kaha tha na virat ..ye sirf paiso se matlab rakhti hai..
Vm : sahi kaha tumne viren...
Virat was just standing there numb ..still trying to digest the things he heard...
Girl: sahi kaha aap logo ne...mai tumse pyar nhi karti ...mai tumhare saath sirf paiso ke liye thi sirf paiso ke liye ..suna tumne ...!! Suna ke nhi !! mai sirf paiso ke liye tumhare saath thi...mai tumse pyaar nhi karti ..mai ADI se pyaar karti hun!! ...adi hi meri zindagi ka pyar hai... tum nhi...tum toh mere liye sirf ek zariya the ..apne sapne ko pane ka ...mai tumhe sirf use kar ri thi!!
V: he gathered sum courage n cupping her face said "pls ek baar boldo ...ye jhoot hai..."
Vi: virat vo jhoot nhi bol ri hai ...maine bhi tujhe kitni baar samjhane ki koshish ki thi par tum iske ladki ke pyaar mai andhe ho chuke the...
V: bhai mai aapse nhi baat kar raha..!! (stern voice)
Girl : virat nhi mai tumse pyar nhi karti ...pushing virat away from her
He fell on the couch ..by that push .. n sat there numb
Vi: tumhari himmat kaisi hui mere bhai ko itna sub kuch sunane ki?? Tumhe pata hai na ki vo tumse kitna pyar karta hai...
Girl: just stares...n tells... pyar?? Ye toh sirf mere jism ke piche tha...
Before vanshika maa could react ...Virens temper rises n now he slaps her..
Ek shabd aur nhi ...agar ye tumse pyarnhi karata toh tumse shadi karne ke liye kabhi raazi nhi hota ...Tumhe kya lagta hai ..mujhe tumhare plan ke bare mai kuch nhi pata?? Bhulna mat mai ek wakil hu...mujhe toh tumpe bahut pehele hi shaq ho gaya tha...jab maine tumhare picha kia toh mujhe dhere-dhere tumhare plan ke bare mai pata chala...virat ko maarna chahati ho na?? (virat is nw listening to stuffs happning around him)
With this every1 gets shocked...virat also gets out of his trance hearing this...
Girl: gets shocked..."kya keh rahe ho??"
Vi: ha virat ... iss ladki ko pata chala ki tu apne hisse ki property iske naam kar di hai . par jab issey pata chala ki ye property ussey sirf tab mil sakti hai jab tujhe kuch ho jaye toh isne apne uss aashiq ke saath plan banaya tujhe maaarne ka taki vo teri property le sake aur vadhera empire pe raaj kar sakey..! yahi tha na plan ...bolo ??
Girl: gulps...
Vi: ye toh tujhse pyar karti hi nhi ..par aaj ye aake isne bataya kyunki issey pata tha...ki ye baat sunn ke tu apne aap ko nuksaan pahunchaye ga ...aur ye teri property apne naam karle...(turning towards girl)
Tumhe kya laga mai apne bhai ko aisa kuch karne dunga ?? ...aur virat aaj isne jo kaha usme se ek shabd bhi jhut nhi tha...vo sab sach tha...iska asli plan...
Vanshika ma who was witnessing all these scene quietly nw got angry listening tht she ws planning to kill her son...with this THUDDD!!!
She just went and slapped that girl...n went inside crying..
Virat went into another trance ...listening all this ..the girl whom he loved from the core ditched him... betrayed him...
Virat: kya yeh sach hai ?? (stern)
Girl : ha ha...aha ye sach hai maine sirf tumhe use kia hai...(frustation) n she leaves frm there
Virat: kyun??? Bhai mere saath aisa kyu hua?? (collapsing on the floor)
Vi: bhai ..pehele apne aapko sambhal...
Virat : bhai MAYA ne aisa kyu kia???(he got up n left..to his favourite spot...n viren left him..cz he needed sumtym alone and he knew he will not do anything wrong)
FLASHBACK END*****
And he drove of to his family ...leaving this place...to his home...
So guysss hw was it???? This was my 1 (b) part..of story ...Yess..ryt the girl was MAYA most of u must have guessed it...hehehe ..anyhw didn't sleep while reading the update na??? I hope not...anyhow...do leave ur opinions...
i m not able to send pm..to all cz it says they dnt allow to send more than 10 posts a day fr a newbie... so pls co operate...😊
Comments (23)
nice precapupdate soonthanx 4 d pm dear
11 years ago
Thanks for adding me..Waiting for updatefab promo
11 years ago
sro manvi is all set to enter haan ...interesting prexap ..update soonand thanx for adding me to the pm list
11 years ago
nice precapupdate soon
11 years ago
Nyc precap... Update soon... Do pm me wen u update the next part...
11 years ago
promo looking nice update soon
11 years ago
nice precapseems interestingplz update soon
11 years ago
Its great do pm me whn u cont. An also add me in ur pm list.
11 years ago
Interesting Precap..!! Waiting fr the Update..!!
11 years ago
hello guyzz...im back to irritate u all... first of all thnks for ur all lovely comments ...👍🏼 ..i want to reply to each comment but i cant...😵...anyhw guyzz here i will show up PM list ..if any1 missing do tell me... PM LIST :naina927pink1kulsum_virmanshonaten virmanfan013JESMY143VIRMANHuma0301-parishey-niki795alicemathtanishalnkvirman.loverNiShal4LifeNiaksharmaSyed695rasp_berry jannat89jia123sagarsabs...jai.Garimavirmanksgany 1 missing or added by mistake ???? do tell me...😊 ok so done with with the pm lists...bt yea if u dnt receive pm ..thn think tht im nt able to do it as ..i cant post more than 10 posts a day...😡 ...and ssrrryyy b4 oly if u dnt receive pm...😊ok so coming to my FF : here's a promo of my chap 2 so here it goes... Promo : " BAS KUCH GHANTE AUR DI ..PHIR HUM EK SAATH HONGE HAMESHA KE LIYE.."She smiled on the bond she n her sis share...***********************************************Virat got up ..from the bed ..he didn't even knw whn he dozed off to sleep after returning from the cottage (which is away frm city pollution etc etc remember??) n he felt his eyes paining yes his eyes wer aching a lot'n they wer swelled .he went to washroom fr getting ready for the day'he stood in front of the mirror'n he noticed that his eyes wer still red V : virat tu aisa nhi kar sakta tu apni zindagi uss ladki ke liye nhi kharab kar sakta kyu kiya tumne aisa kyun???... WARNING : chap 2 may be little boring but aftr tht it will becum alryt!!!! so thats it for today ...meet u all after 2 or 3 days...with a update...!!!!! laveniya_sweet2013-07-28 02:39:18
11 years ago