Chapter 31

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Last Part:

Dev gets down on one knee and says " Preeti …I love you…Marry me?" Preeti is shocked but is happy. "yes." Dev slips the ring he was holding and gets up and hugs Preeti.

3 years later.

You see a beautiful house. You go inside and Crash! "nooo!! Mum is gonna kill me!" you see a 3 yr old boy standing by a broken base. He picks up the ball that is rolling away and runs to his room. He puts the ball in his toy chest and runs back down to the living room where the mess has been made. "WHAT HAPPENED IN HERE?!" the boy turns around and is shocked to see his mum, no other than Preeti. "oh mum…the ball…n than throwing…n…" the boy starts crying. Preeti sighs and goes to the lil boy n says " Shaan…it's ok..hun…now stop crying." "hey what happened to my big boy?" says a man walking in the door. "Dev…he broke a vase." "so?" asks Dev. "he just started crying. "i..i…di..di…didn't mean to!!" says a hiccupping Shaan. Dev takes shaan out of Preeti's arms and says.."it is ok..it is just a vase, we can buy a new one sweetheart!"

At night; in Dev and Preeti's room:

Dev comes and hugs Preeti from the back. "happy aniversery!" Preeti laughs " I have been married to an idiot like you for 3 years now…that's a new record." "kya Preeti! Romantic mood kya turn off na kar!" Preeti laughs and turns around so she is facing dev. Dev picks Preeti up and takes her towards to the bed…………

The End.

ok so this is the end...i had fun writing this ff; i learned a lot from here too. i can bet you that my next ff will deff. not be like how i wrote this one lol. my writing style is gonna be very different. But i kinda glad that this ff is over. i thought i kinda became Ekta Kapoor and stretched it when i did the rebirth thing lol. but i hope you guys enjoyed! Wink if or when i write my next ff i will post the link here if you guys want it or u can pm me...if i am going to rite one than it will be posted after this weekend :) thankz for reading this ff and bearing with me LOL u guys, exspecially Sonal and Sonia! i wanted to close this ff but you guys really encouraged me not to, thank you! Hug Hug
luv u all,
~Preeti~ Embarrassed

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Comments (7)

Thank you, Ravina! Hey if anyone wants my new ffs link here it is: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=827700&TPN=1 ENJOY!! ~Preeti~

16 years ago

aww awsum ending...ur new ff is realli interesting :D

16 years ago

lol ok i am posting it rite now happy?

16 years ago

hello again!! lol ok i loived this ff now u stopped and ur next one betta bie longer lol......i loved it shaan seems so cute...it was kinda fastish like wen dey got married and all but yeh dw bout it its alrite....now plz hury up with the new one i am waiting..... ur gujju buddy from australia Sonia

16 years ago

Ok so do you guys want me to post my new ff now? cuz i have the first part ready...if you want me to post it now or whenever do tell.. Luv, ~Preeti~

16 years ago

aww sonal ur sooo cute!!!! n i am starting another one...n i had my friend proof read it n she really likes it lol she wants to join I-F now lol but the best part is....SHE IS NOT EVEN DESI! lmaoo

16 years ago

aww...lovely ending..but u ended it... ..wel..hope u start neother ff soon...n i mean soon...

16 years ago

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