Chapter 11

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Part 11

Recap: We see Preeti siting on the bench crying.

P: (out loud) Y did I feel so bad when abhi said that neev wrote all that? Y do I care? If it was someone else then I would of kicked their butts but y did I just feel like getting away from HIM? But then also y do I feel like he didn't rite those things about me? I got to find the note!

Preeti gets up n hears a voice. Voice: v

V: its prob. Cuz he didn't.


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Preeti looks up n sees love.

P: huh? Wat r u saying? Abhi read the note!
She asks with a very confused look
Love sighs.

L: my darling jaanu wat abhi said was alllllllll wrong. Dev wrote something COMPLETELY different…but u noe wat I don't believe is that u actually thought that Dev would call u those things!


Preeti takes the note n reads it aloud.

P: dear Preeti,
           I noe ur mad at me but b4 u crumble this paper up n throw it I my face at least listen to me yaar! I noe u hate me for kissing u..but…I don't noe how to explain this…but…if YOU want we can forget about it cuz I value our friendship more then anything else. So I am sry…plz forgive me if u can…again sry
                                       A friend seeking forgiveness, 
                                                                 Dev

Preeti has tears in her eyes as she reads it again n again. N then she looks up at love.

Love just gives a i-hope-ur-sry look.

Preeti runs to find Dev. She kind find him anywhere…or at least she
thinks...she is about to turn around when she bumps into someone…its….DEV!
D: (without looking at who it is) sry

Preeti looks at him n sees his eyes r puffy n red...from crying? He is about to leave when she grabs him.

P: Dev!

Dev is surprised by the voice n turns around. N sees the Preeti too has been crying..

D: (thinks) oh man she has been crying…no wait…she is STILL crying…man I cant wait to meet this abhi girl.

D: yeah?

She goes up to him n hugs him. Dev is confused, but cant help to hug her back

D:(whispers) I am sry Preeti.

P: no don't be..its my fault…I should of never listened to abhi..i don't deserve to be ur friend

She starts crying again.

D: no no Preeti don't cry! Anyone could believe her! She is a damn good liar! If I hadn't wrote the note then even I would of believed her. N about not deserving to be my friend! Now that's just B.S..

The come apart n Dev wipes her tears with his thumb.
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While this is happening can u guess who is listening in on their convo?
YES u r right it is the biznatches from hell …..Abhilasha n Ripikia (sry for rong spellings on ur names)

A: AHHH I hate this…at this rate neev will never come to me!

R: we're doing this so Dev will come to u?(she asks dumbly)

Abhi just gives her a i-cant-believe-i-even-hang-out-with-u look

A: DUH!

R: oooo ok(smiles)

A: sigh


Dev's house

D: hey I am home!

Dev's mom: DM; Fev's dad: DD

DM: Dev beta tumare dad tumko balhare hai(UR DAD IS CALLING U)

Dev goes to his parents room

DD: beta come

He points to the chair next to the bed.

D: so dad wats up?

DD: Dev have we ever not given u wat u want?

D: u have…

DD: so then ur mum n I r asking for something from u today..will u listen to our request?

D:…I guess…but wat is it that u want?

DD: there is a rishta for u.

D: WAIT! wat? Huh? How? Who?

DD: (laughs at his son) her name is abhi.

D: ABHI!!??? No no no no no n nooo way!!

DD: but y? she is perfect..she is rich..beautifull

D:(laughs) haha ur kidding rite? Lozl rich yea ok whatever, but beautiful? Lmao!

His dad gives him a glare

D: (sigh) ook I will try?


ON THE OTHER SIDE
Preeti is also called by her parents
Preeti's mum: PM; Preeti's dad: PD

PD: Preeti tere liye ek rishta hai

P: sigh

PM: PREETI! Stop n listen to ur father!

PD: he is rich...handsome…n comes from a good family. Give him a chance. Haven't we given u everything we ever wanted?

P: ahh y do u always use black mail? Ok fine..i will see!

PD: don't u want to noe who he is?

P: yea ok who is he?

PM: ADITYA NARYAN!

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How does Preeti react? Is she happy?
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Comments (8)

waiting for the part! but dont forget ur pic of homecomming!

17 years ago

ok i am about to post the next part in a couple hours....just typing it now

17 years ago

hun i will try to cont. by tonight...atleast i hope..if i dont..which i will..but if i dont then i will do it on sun. cuz HOMECOMING is tom!!! ahhh!

17 years ago

hey preeti..wen r u goonnna continue....just checkin...

17 years ago

LMAO U GUYZ!! i just reread the last part n my god!! i screwed up on copying n pasting lmao sry about that!! SRY!! plzz forgive me!! thankz

17 years ago

hey dear...just read ur last few parts....continue soon...

17 years ago

hun u wanted to be evil!!! u told me on msn!! i even have it on msn memory!!! lmao

17 years ago

OMG i'm a biznatch...ok fine wateva j/k..lolz..y did i have to be evil??...i never asked to bee...hehe its okk.. great part!!. OMG Aditya Narayan...!!.. Continue real soooon i really wanna knw wat happens next!!

17 years ago

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