Chapter 21

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Part-21

Kashish ko teen din k bed rest ka kaha gaya or usay hospital main hi rakha gaya………………..inh teen dinon main kissi nay bhi usay aik pal ko akela nahin chora…………………..har waqt koi na koi pass hota………………..veena bhi bachoon k saath rooz subah atti or who teenon kinjal sunny or sameer sara time baby k saath khelnay main guzartay
Akhir kar ghar janay ka din aa gaya
Kashish ko lainay sujal akela aaya ……………………kashish ka saman pack kiya…………….or wahan say chalnay lagay………..baby sujal k haath main thi
Aik dam say seeriyan utartay kashish k pair main mouch aa gaye………………or who neechay beth gaye
Sujal nay bhi peechay mur kar usay dekha
"kia howa?"……………us nay kashish k face pay pain dekha tau jaldi say bool utha
"lagta ahi mouch aa gaye hai"………………kashish nay uthtay howay kaha
"kia tum chal paoo gi?"……………sujal nay phir poocha
"koshish karti hoon"………………….kashish yeh keh k chalna shuru howi hi thi k us say na chala gaya
"kashish……………..doc ko dekha detay hain"………………..sujal nay nurse ko keh k doc ko bulwaya or us nay bandage band di
"kia app ko bahir janay k liye wheel chair ki zaroorat hai?"………………..nurse nay poocha
"nahin………….we will manage"…………………..sujal nay jhat say nurse ko kaha or who wahan say aik smile pass kartay howay chali gaye
"sujal tum nay mana kyoun kar diya?"…………………….nurse k jatay hi kashish bool uthi
"jab banada app ki hidmat main hazir hai tau inh sab cheezon ki kia zaroorta"……………sujal nay usay dekha jo yeh baat sun k or confused ho gaye(even I m confused k main kia bongiyan likh rahi hoon)
"tum issay pakroo?"………………..sujak nay baby ko kashish ko pakraya
"likin sujal…………..main kaisay?"…………………kashish abhi apni baat poori bhi na ki thi k sujal nay usay apni baghoon main utha liya
"sujal……………..yeh…………..yeh kia kar rahay hoo………………sab dekh rahay hain"…………kashish embarasment feel kartay howay boli
"dekhnay do"………………sujal nay kissi ki parwa na ki or chalta raha
"likin sab………..sab kia soochain gain"……………..kashish nay idher udher dekha
"array dekho dekho……….kitna pyar hai donon main"…………………peechay kharay aik couple nay kaha
"sun liya……………….hamara pyar sab ko dikhta hai"……………….sujal usay abhi bhi pakray howay bahir aay…………..jab k kashish nay baby ko pakar rakha tha
sujal any usay aram say car main bethaya or us k bag back seat main rakh k ghar ko chala
saray rastay kashish baby k saath khelti rahi or sujal sirf us k chehray ki muskurahat dekhta raha
ghar poohnch k sujal nay kashish k liye door khola or usay uthanay laga
"nahin main theek hoon" ………………..kashish nay usay rooktay howay kaha
sujal aik dam ruk gaya or usay aik smile pass kar k peechay say bag utha k chalnay laga
kashish nay car say utar k kharay honay ki koshish ki likin uss ka dard or bhar gaya
"sujal"……………..kashish nay jatay howay sujal ko awaz di
"yes……….mujhay patah tha tum mujhay zaroor bulaoo gi"…………..sujal mumbles or phir who kashish ki taraf mura
"kia howa kashish"…………….us nay questioning look main poocha
"mera paoon"…………..kashish nay apnay paoon ki taraf ishara kia with a pleading look……………….or sujal nay hanstay hanstay usay godh main uthaya
ghar k main door pay veena or sab loog arti k saath kharay thay
sujal jaisay hi main door pay poohncha summit nay hooting karna shuru kar di
kashish or sujal buri tarhan Sharma gaye…………………door pay poohnch k sujal nay kashish ko khara kar diya or veena nay unh ki arti ki
arti k baad sujal nay phir kashish ko uthay likin iss bar baby kumkum k haathon main thi
"array wah…………kia pyar hai"……………..summit nay sujal ko wink kiya
sujal nay kashish ko sofa per bithaya or khud bhi us k pass beth gaya
"yeh baat nahin hai……………who darasal kashish k paoon main mouch aa gaye thi iss liye"……..sujal nay explain kiya
"dekha mujhay pata tha…………….inh husbands ko na sirf apni pari hoti hai……………kabhi bhi biwi ki tareef nahin karain gain……………"………………..kumkum nay kashish ki taraf dekh k kaha
"abh…………..abh maine kia kiya"………………sujal aik dam bola
"aha ha ha………………..yeh nahin keh saktay thay k kashish ko pain ho rahi thi…………iss liye…………nahin"………………..kumkum nay iss baar summit ko bhi dekha jo k "bachay pay rehem khaoo" look main usay dekh raha tha
"kyoun yaar…………hum say agar koi poochay k tum apnay husband ka itna sab kaam kyoun kartay hoo………….tau hum nay tau kabhi nahin kaha k who yeh chahtay hain…………….hum tau yehi kehtay hain k hamara dil karta hai yeh sab kaam karnay ko………"kumkum says
"ok………….ok………..cease fire now…………………maine pandit jii ko bulaya hai ta k baby ka naam rakh sakain…………..likin us say pehlay chalo sab khana kha loo"………………veena nay aa k kaha tau sab khamoosh howay
kashish phir uthnay lagi likin sujal nay usay phir utha liya
"abh kyoun utha rahay ho"……………….kumkum nay poocha
"kyoun k main issay taqleef main nahin dekh sakta"………………….sujal said it with a smile or sab k chehray pay aik smile aa jati hai
"abh sahi hai"………………………sujal nay aik questioning look main kumkum ki taraf dekha
"absolutely"…………….and then she shows a thumbs up to kashish
phir sab khana khatay hain or us k thori deer baad hi pandit jii aa gaye
"pandit ji……….bacchi k naam k liye kaun ka lafz shub rahay ha"……………..veena nay poocha
"kundali k mutabiq bachi k kaam ka pehla shabd ka hona chahiye"………….pandit jii nay jawab diya
"ka…………….kanchi naam kaisa raahy ka pandit ji"…………………sujal nay poocha
"kanchi…………bohut hi pyara naam hai or yeh bilkul sahi jata hai kundali k saath"………pandit ji nay kaha
"tau phir theek hai……………….aj say iss ka naam hai KANCHI"………..sujal nay kaha tau har kissi nay iss naam ki tareef ki
pandit ji k janay k baad kaffi deer tak sab hala gula kartay rahay or phir sujal kashish ko aik room k pass lay k gaya
room khola tau wahan har tarhan k toys, babycot, param………………..or bohut say kapray paray thay
"sujal…………..yeh sab"……………………kashish nay poocha
"main nay hamesha hi aik beti chahi thi…………….or yeh tuhfa mujhay tum nay diya………….iss liye apni beti k saray arman pooray kar dalay"…………………yeh kehtay howay sujal ki ankhoon akinaik ajeeb si chamak thi
yeh dekh k kashish ki ankhain bhar aayein………………..sujal nay usay dekha or pooca
"yeh ………..yeh kia hai kashish?"…………………..
"thank u……….thank u sujal"
"kiss liye"
"mujhay itna pyar karnay k liye"
"thank u tau mujhay kehna chahiye…………..k tum nay mujhay itna khoobsurat toohfa diya"
sujal nay yeh keh k kashish k forehead pay kiss kia or usay hug kia
"kashish………..neechay aao………………kanchi ro rahi hai"…………….veena nay neechay say awaz di
sujal or kashish elehda howay "chalain?"……………….kashish nay poocha
"chalo"……………….who donon kanchi k pass neechay gaye or apni aik haseen duniya main jeenay lagay

                THE END

so guys yeh meri story ka end tha
app ka thanx k app nay isay parha..............or mujhay itna confidence diya

guys i m leaving the forum 4 about 15 days as my papers r coming
PRAY 4 me

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ana

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17 years ago

. all the best 4 ur exams

18 years ago

wowwwwww yaaarrrrrrr the part is absolutelyyyy marvelous gr8888 job yaar i love the part where sujal take kashish in arm with her baby girl kanchi and kashish was feelling embarrass and sujal was feeling proud at their love plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz send the next part as soon as possible

18 years ago

[QUOTE=purishivani]Hey GREAT STORY!!!! Man this is the first one that is soo short and thats a good thing!! I really loved it!!
Best of luck for ur papers!!!!! [/QUOTE]

thanx shivani
ya................i like short stories as k long stories main patah hi
nahin chalta k main baat kia thi...................so its better to
writeshort stories with diff ideas..............rite na
u liked it and love ur's

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ana

18 years ago

c'mon ana...u don't ve 2 say sorry...itz ok....i guess since v r frndz now....u better follow 2 special rulez..no sorry nor thx... ...k....tc...

18 years ago

Hey GREAT STORY!!!! Man this is the first one that is soo short and thats a good thing!! I really loved it!! Best of luck for ur papers!!!!!

18 years ago



thanx kulbin
love u sweety
thanx alot

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ana

18 years ago

[QUOTE=group_1223][QUOTE=cool_SK] [QUOTE=group_1223]1st best of luk wid ur examz...i m sure u r gonna do gr8.... u
ended ths story...awwwn.....i m soo gonna miss it.....it waz a luvly
part.....jus amazingly cute......i wonder how do u cum wid wid such
creative n kewl ideaz.....after ur examz...plz rite anoder story....n
ya da name was very sweet--kanchi---
u r an an awsum writer..never ever stop writtin.....i don't think iever
told u b4...but da title of ur story is really gud....i really like da
way how it has pure urdu wordz(hope i aint wrong)....n jus da name
speaks volumes 4 itself--will miss u 4 da nxt 15 dayz....best of luk
wid ur examz again... [/QUOTE]thanx alot jyothiloved ur comments yaari m too gonna miss u for next 15 days................i too like the title...............and now.........on ur saying................i m not gone'a stop writtingloved u toololana[/QUOTE]
ana....mi name z aisha...not jyoti....i m glad u r gonna b continuin writin....n thx 4 likin da comments[/QUOTE]

sorry aisha dear
yaar papers nay dimaag hila dala hai
so sorry again


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ana

18 years ago

[QUOTE=sun_423]ana dear u just ROCK.... sujal is chooooooo damn sweetttttttttttt he is a sweet heart... kanchi kitna pyaara naam hain bilkul tumhari tarah... lekin me very very sad that your story has ended....
par no problem ur story was
just &nb sp;&n
bsp; tooooooooooooooooooooo
gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddd...
in short i can say that your story started BEAUTIFULLY & has ended ELEGENTLY..............
plz start a new fan fic soon do ur exams well.. ALL THE BEST.........
love u.. [/QUOTE]

no thanx suri dii
u r totally mind-blowing di.......loved ur comments
luv ya too

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ana

18 years ago

hey ana dear superb ending.... cute part n sweet name.... in all very nice story.... keep writing.... all the best 4 papers.....

18 years ago

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