Chapter 23

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Jasmine

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Part-23...Kusum:Kashish looks down. Kusum:sujal had a
                          severe accident after we lost Tia.He was paralysed 4
                          many yrs.
                          K is shocked:then?now?
                          Ku:now he has recovered from it.
                          K is relieved. Ku:his friend's wife…1 widow is living
                          there 2 look after him.charu
                          K is shocked:charu?
                          K remembers meeting akshat-charu in the holi party.K
                          thinks:Akshat is dead?poor guy

                          K:why did u kill piyush?
                          Tia starts crying. K:was'nt he loving?
                          T:yes.but his luv was disgusting.he was too
                          possessive.he cud'nt even stand me seeing dadi-dada.he
                          did'nt even tolerate saakshi dadi's affection 2wards
                          me.he hated me having friends.bcoz he thot that wil make
                          him lose me.so I did'nt hav friends at all.i was always
                          alone.my only relief was sujal papa.i did'nt hav any
                          connection with papa 4 yrs.later I got papa's letter.i
                          came 2 no about his accident,paralyses & recovery. i
                          told him 2 send letters only 2 college.thus I was
                          relieved with his leters I got once in a
                          while.later….dad's friend & his son the rock star
                          Ranveer came 2 our house while dad was'nt there.i was
                          seeing ranveer 4 the 1st time.he sang.that time dad came
                          & shouted at them.he threw them away.dad's friend
                          tolerated it as he respects dad a lot & he had an
                          inferiority complex as he's from a middleclass family.i
                          felt sad.so I went 2 ranveer's house.

                          Tia tells Ranveer:sorry 4 my dad's behaviour.
                          R:I tolerated ur dad's behaviour only 4 my dad.
                          R was very angry..R:I pity u 4 living with such a
                          horrible dad.
                          T felt sad:plz tell that u 4gave us
                          R:ok,I 4giv u only bcoz u r a nice girl.
                          T smiles.but R was serious.later when T went,R smiles.

                          Kashish:thus u both fell in luv?
                          T:no,we came really gud friends.later we started luving
                          each other.but as I scared dad was against it.he even
                          sent ppl 2 kill ranveer.luckily he got escaped.i cud'nt
                          tolerate it.later saakshi dadi became really sick.b4
                          dying,she told me 2 truths….my mom was forced 2 b in the
                          mental asylum bcoz of dad & sujal papa paralyisis is
                          caused by the accident created by the lorry driver who
                          was sent by dad.
                          K is shocked. Tia cries:I cud'nt tolerate anymore.i felt
                          that I'm in a hell.i was living there with heavy
                          fear.dad tried 2 lock me inside a room 4 days.e did'nt
                          bother about my sufferings.he was that selfish.i tried 2
                          escape from that house.but dad caught me.

                          Tia:leave me dad.i hate u.i luv only sujal papa who
                          adopted me.i'm going there
                          Piyus:I won't allow u 2 b with sujal;who snatched my beloved
                          & daughter.
                          T:beloved?my mom was never urs.she was always my papa's.


                          T:he tried forcefully 2 push me inside a room.in that
                          struggle, I pushed him.his head hit the wall & he fell
                          dead.
                          T keeps crying.K sheds tears:that devil made my daughter
                          suffer so much..

                          The police officer who is in charge of this case is
                          Omkar nath.Ranveer goes 2 see him:sir,I want 2 reveal a
                          truth that I'm the killer of Piyush.

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Comments (3)

jasmine dear really a very nice part.. coollllllllllllllllllll.... very good.... wah wah par yeh kya akshat ko kya ho gaya..& charu taking care of sujal.. sujal is paralysed....... i want to kill that piyush but tia has already done that now i can't kill his bhoot... so ranveer is tia's love & he is akshat & charu's son good... please ab saari problems khatam kardo.. sujal ko ek dum theek kar do aur end mein sujal-kashish ko ek kardo....... continue soon........... sun_42338853.977037037

18 years ago

jasmine gud gng... plz update soon....

18 years ago

waiting for the next part. Pls post it soon. Just read ur story in one go

18 years ago

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