Chapter 17

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Jasmine

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Part-17....AGAIN BACK 2 PAST

                          Piyush:I'll get Tia back.she's my daughter & I'll get
                          it at any cost.4 that I'll do anything.
                          Kashish screams:no
                          Sujal:Tia is not ur daughter.she's my daughter.
                          P:its very easy 2 tell that.but u can't 4get blood.
                          K:one cant simply become a father thru blood relation.
                          P:do u think I'll not luv Tia?
                          K stares at him.   P:I can luv her more than ur hubby
                          sujal.
                          K: shut up.I'm Tia's mom.i'l decide who her father is.
                          P:kashish,u r in a dreamworld.i assure u that I'l luv U &
                          Tia more than sujal.
                          S is stunned.
                          K:its very easy 4 u 2 tell.no 1 can luv easily.u cant
                          beat sujal in luv.u r nothing b4 garv in case of luv.
                          P controls his anger:now I'm going.but I'll take my
                          daughter,also u.
                          S-K-Esha r shocked.Ks goes.K cries & runs 2 her room.S
                          goes there.He sees K kissing Tia.
                          K throws away the doll given by P with anger.It falls
                          on S's feet.
                          T:what did u do mama?my sweet doll..
                          Tia is about 2 cry. K:sweet doll?its an ugly doll.don't
                          accept anything given by that devil.i'l destory that
                          doll.
                          T starts crying.
                          Feels sad & gives that doll 2 Tia:u play with this doll
                          T smiles:thanku papa
                          T runs away with the doll. K:gsujal,what did u do?
                          S:kashish,ur anger shud'nt b with that doll.it'll hurt our
                          innocent child.
                          K keeps silent. S:kashish,don't u feel like going back 2
                          piyush?
                          K is shocked:sujal?
                          S:I mean…piyush is ur child's dad.so…
                          K loses her control:what DID U SAY?TELL sujal.how dare u
                          talk like this?
                          S becomes upset. K:don't u think I & tia r a burden 2 u?

                          S:what r u saying kashish?I can't liv without u both.but I
                          was tensed whether I'l lose u both.
                          K:I can't liv without u & tia..
                          K hugs S.she cries:plz don't leave us sujal.plz …
                          S weeps.

                          Piyush files 2 get Tia back.S-K r shocked.
                          S consoles her:don't worry,we'll win.we won't lose tia.

                          P meets psyciatrist Swayam;his friend who came from
                          US.   P:I need ur help,I want kashish too along with
                          Tia.u shud make sujal believe that kashishis abnormal.sujal
                          wil desert kashish & I'll get her.
                          T smiles:ok.   P laughs.

                          Sujal is alone at home as K & E hav gone 2 Tia's
                          school.Callling bell rings.S opens the door.it was
                          Sawayam with a smiling face.
                          Swa:if I'm not wrong,u r sujal.kashish's hubby.rite?
                          S was wondered:how du u no me?u no kashish?
                          Sw:u r rite.i no kashish.
                          S:ok,cum inside.
                          SW gets inside:where is kashish?
                          S:she has gone out.
                          Sw thinks:I no that.that's why I came here.
                          S:u were kashish's classmate in US?
                          Sw:no,I'm kashish's doctor.she was under my psyciatrist
                          treatment.
                          S is shocked.

                          DO U THINK SWAYAM IS LYING?

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Comments (3)

hey jasmine gr8 gng.... nice twists... but this is toooo much swayam???? nywys cont soon dear...

18 years ago

jasmine what a past life history......yeh kya ab yeh piyush kya kum tha ki ab us tarzan swayam ko bhi le aayi ho........ aur yeh kya ab kya sujal us swayam ki baat par yakeen karega...... plz let sujal not believe that tarzan..... mere hisaab se woh swayam jhoot bol raha hain... kashish ne sahi kaha tia ko sujal se zyada pyaar koi nahi kar saktha woh piyush bhi nahi.... plz sujal , kashish ko milwao....aur tia ko unke saath rakho.............. agla part jaldi likhna..................

18 years ago

nice part...ur story z pretty kewllll...keep it up....

18 years ago

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