Chapter 3

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Jasmine

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Part-3..Kashish cums in a grand violet sari.Sujal cud'nt
                          take his eyes off her.
                          S:kashish…u look really nice.
                          S's arms go 2 her face.K moves away.S becomes dull.
                          K:we'll go.
                          K walks out.
                          S-K reach the party place. 1 guy announces:now the
                          famous baby doll is going 2 perform .we ask all the
                          cuples especially the newly married cuple Sujal-kashish 2
                          dance 2 the song.
                          S smiles at kashish. K:plz sujal.my mind is not allowing me
                          2 dance.
                          S was shocked:why?
                          K:sujal,I'm not feeling well.
                          S:kashish,then we'll go 2 a doctor
                          K:no need.it wil b ok if I take rest.
                          K's cell rings.It was kusum:kashish,how r u?
                          K:fine mama.   Ku:how is sujal?    K:fine.how r u? &
                          papa..
                          Ku:we both r fine.kashish…keep sujal happy.don't giv him
                          chance 2 become sad.he's gr8 kashish.he gave u a new life.

                          K becomes upset:now we r at a party.so bye mama.
                          Ku:bye.

                          KAshish thinks:I shud'nt make sujal sad.
                          K looks at S.he looks sad. K smiles at S.S becomes very
                          happy.K:sujal,now I'm ok.we'll dance 2gether.
                          S was thrilled:really?   K:ya.
                          Babydoll performs:Aksar…{Dhadkan}.S-K 2gether.S looks at
                          K. Seeing K's dull face,S's face becomes dull.After the
                          song got stopped K moves away from S.S becomes dull.
                          S thinks:why do I feel that kashish is keeping a distance
                          with me?


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Comments (2)

hmm...jasmine a good part.... tho jasmine yeh kashish apne ateet se bahar kab niklegi yaar aur kab sujal ke pyaar ko samjhegi... par no prblem no tension woh kehthe hain na ki sabar ka phal meeta hotha hain tho is hisaab se jab kashish sujal se pyaar karne lagegi tho duniya ki koi taakat usse sujal se judaa nahi kar sakthi chahe woh kashish ka ateet hi kyun na ho... ya koi qayamat kyun na ho... kyun tumhe kya lagtha hain main sahi hoon... plz agla part jaldi likhna..... thanks fiza mere comments pe comment karne ke liye....

18 years ago

nice partz jasmine........like da prev. storiez....ths story z awsum 2......plz continue it soon.... hey surya... all ur detailed comments 4 jasmine'z story r pretty interestin... ...i like ur feedbak...

18 years ago

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