Chapter 52

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Okay... soo here I am... posting the next part. . .

Recap: Kashish had a dream sequence of Sujal ... she told Anjali abt him... but Prerna listened everything.. she warned Kashish not to tlk ant tht guy anymore.. she was going to get married to Tusshar.. n bla bla bla...
Kamal had a plan in his quick-witted mind... and now lets see k kya hota hai...


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Well….now the next day. . . .
Kamal, Romila aur Sujal Bajaj house pohanchte hain. . .
Bahar se ghar bohat bada hota hai… har taraf lighting huyee hoti hai. .. Puurey ghar mein phoolon ki sajawat hoti hai.. . Log arahe hotey hain…aur kuch log wapis jarahe hotey hain… well…in short bohat rush hota hai…
Kamal gets out of the car and so as Romila
Romila: oh wow….kitna bada ghar hai naa… ( Sujal bhi car se bahar nikalta hai and was wearing glasses)
Romila: I the love it.. is net oh humarey ghar k bhi record tor diye hain…
Sujal takes out his glasses…and gazes at the mansion..
Kamal: ab baatein hee kertii rahogi k andar bhi chalo gi…
Romila: ohoo..maine kab mana kiya?? Aap chalo andar..phir main bhi aapke peeche peeche…
Kamal: hmm….chalo…
Romila: pehle tusi go inside..
Kamal: haan toh jaraha hoon naa..
Romila: tohh jaoo naa…
Kamal: arrey main jaraha hooon baba…
Romila: jaatey bhi nahi ho…hmm..
Sujal: uffffff…. Main tang agaya hoon aap donon ki baaton se…
Romila: hum baat thodi ker rahe the…hum toh pyaar karahe the…( hugs Kamal)
Sujal: ( smiles fakely) agar aap donon ka pyaarr khatam hogaya hoo toh chalein andarrrrr…
Kamal: haan bahee..chalo chalo… ( finally three of them enter inside )

Teenon andar aajatey hain. . . and find a lot of ppl over there… some of the women were sitting and choosing there sarees and jewellery…while couple of girls were preparing for the dance… and some girls were putting on henna..
Sujal andar aa ker thoda sa nervous feel kerne lagta hai..
Kamal: daroo mat… sab theek hojayega…(pats on him)
Kamal ek larki ko guzarte dekhta hai…and she was anjali…holding a tray of flowers..
Kamal: beta…(calls her ..while Anjali looks at him)
Anjali: jii uncle…namaste…!
Kamal: namaste beta…
Anjali: kahiye kya kersakti hoon main aap k liye…?
Kamal: asal mein… mera naam Kamal hai… Kamal Garewal… main Reshab ka friend hoon…London se aya hoon…
Anjali: ohh..
Kamal: mujhe maloom para k Reshab ki tabiyat…
Anjali: jii… lekin ab bade papa ek dum theek hain… ghabraney ki koi baat nahi hai…
Kamal: acha… beta agar main unse mil leta toh…
Anjali: haan…kyun nahi…wohh raha unka bedroom… (points somewhr) wohh waheen per hain..aap jaiye…unse mil lijiye…
Kamal: thank you beta…( Anjali wlks off ..while Kamal looks at Sujal…and then at Romila )
They all enter into Bajaj's room…
Bajaj was having a cup of tea with Mahesh, Prerna , Bauji and Dida…
Bajaj glances at Kamal: arrey Kamal tum…!!!??
Kamal: haan…Main….
Kamal Bajaj se milta hai and they both hug… while Prerna, dida and bauji share a smile…
Romila meets everyone…and they all sit…
Bajaj: maa.. yeh Kamal hai…jinke paas humaree Kashish rehne k liye gayee thii…
Dida: acha…
Bauji: bohat changa kita puttar… k tu yahan agaya… waise bhi ghar mein khushiyon ka mauka hai…
Kamal: jii…mujhe pata chala k Kashish ki shaadi honey waali hai… Kashish ne hee bataya tha…
Bajaj looks at Sujal: yeh kaun hai? ( Sujal felt uneasy )
Kamal: ohh.. yeh… yeh… mera beta hai…( he says it abruptly)
Prerna: lekin Bhaisaab …aap ka tohh koi…(she stops…while Romila and Kamal bcum emotional )
Kamal: actually… yeh.. meri behan ka beta hai… mere saath London mein hee rehta hai…bachpan mein hee maine isse adopt ker liya tha… meri behan aur uske husband ka 20 saal pehle ek plane crash mein dehaaant hogaya…
Prerna: ohhh… acha…
Sujal ko ghussa ajaata hai….lekin control ker leta hai… Romila chup hojaati hai..cuz usse bhi plan mein shaamil ker liya hota hai..lolz..
Prerna: ( to Sujal ) tumhara naam kya hai beta?
Sujal: jii… Sujal..
Dida: bohat pyaara naam hai…
Sujal smiles weakly..
Kamal: Ab tumharee tabiyat kaisee hai Bajaj?
Bajaj: ab toh main theek hoon… beti ki shaadi hai..issi khushi ne mujhe jaldii theek kerdiya…. Acha mujhe yeh batao k tum kahan there huye ho?
Kamal: waise tohh Mumbai mein bade bhaaii ka ghar hai…waheen tehroonga.. main seedhe London se Delhi sirf tumse milne aya hoon… bas aaj yak al chala jaoonga..
Bajaj: bilkul nahi… arrey ghar mein shaadi hai… aur tum jaaney ki baat karahey ho? Tumhara bhi toh hak banta hai na Kashish per… itne din tumharey ghar per rahii hai wohh…
Kamal: hmm…
Bajaj: isi liye tum kahin nahi jaogey… bal k yaheen rahogey… agar jaana hua toh shaadi khatam honey k baad hee jaogey…
Kamal: lekin….
Prerna: lekin wekin kuch nahi bhai saab… aap yaheen raheinge…
Bauji: Prerna puttar… jaa inka samaan guest house mein rakhwa de…
Prerna: jii Bauji…
Bauji: aur Mahesh…
Mahesh: ji bauji..
Bauji: inka khaas khayaal rakhiin.. yeh humarey bohat hee khaas mehmaan hain…
Mahesh: (smiles) jii baujii…
Kamal: arrey Reshab…itna takaluf kyun?
Bajaj: takulaf nahi… yeh sab dosti ki khatir hai…
Kamal: acha agar main tumhara dost na hota toh mujhe ghar k bahar sona partha?? ( starts laughing…while Bajaj laughs too )
Sujal kab se …ishaaron mein Kamal ko batana chahraha tha k Kashish k baarey mein poochoo… but Kamal apni baaton mein hee bz tha…
Sujal: ( to himself) yeh toh apni baatein le ker beth gaye… mera kaam kya kareinge…
Prerna: beta…
Sujal: ( looked at her n stood up) jii…
Prerna: tum yahan bore kyun ho rahe ho? Jao bahar ja ker larkon k beech betho..
Sujal: jii Main…
Prerna: aao main tumhein le ker chalti hoon… ( they both come outside)
Tusshar aur Kavya baatein ker rahe hotey hain . . .
Prerna: Kavya…
Kavya: yes Mom…( he glances at Sujal)
Prerna: yeh Sujal hai.. Kamal bhaisaab ka beta.. aaj hee aya hai London se..
Kavya: oh..
Tusshar: hey Sujal…
Sujal: (smiles fakely) hii…
Tusshar: kaise ho tum?
Prerna: tum isse jaantey ho? ( while Kavya looks at him)
Tusshar: jii Badi maa.. hum log London mein hee mile the..
Prerna: ohh acha…tum log baatein keroo.. main abhi aati hoon ( she wlks off)
Kavya: Hi Sujal…nice meeting you…
Sujal: me too… ( they both shook hands )
Tusshar: Sujal…… jab hum waapis India arahey the… toh tum hum se mile hee nahi… kahan reh gaye the tum?
Sujal: wohh… mujhe kuch kaam tha… isi liye… Main nahi asaka…
Tusshar: koi baat hai… tumhein to pata hee hai.. k meri aur Kashish ki shaadi hai… is liye main chahta hoon k tum yeh shaadi bharpuur enjoy kero…
Sujal felt jealous….but he managed to smile.
Sujal: sure…why not…
Well….inki convo chalti rehti hai. . . now lets move onto Kashish.. . .

Kashish apne room mein hoti hai…udaas …pareshaaaan…
Anjali aati hai..
Anjali: Kashish…. Tujhe pata hai neeche kaun aya hai?
Kashish: kaun…? ( didn't care )
Anjali: tumharey London waale Kamal uncle …..aur unki family.
Kashish : Kya??? ( wohh bohat khush hojaati hai…and thinks to herself: Iska matlab…Sujal bhi aya hai…)
Kashish: tum sach kehrahee ho naa??
Anjali: stupid yaqeen nahi araha toh khud jaa ker dekh loo….
Kashish neeche jaatii hai… and enters Bajaj's room..
Wahan per she meets Kamal and Romila… and was relly pleased to meet them…
Kashish: kaise hain aap log?
Kamal: hum theek hain Kashish…
Romila: tujhe bara miss kerte hain puttar …
Kashish: (smiles) main bhi aap logon ko bohat miss kertii hoon… ( yeh keh ker…she luked here and there…jaise kisi ki talaash hoo )
Kamal: (mutters ) hmm…waise Sujall bhi aaya hai…
Kashish : jii…?? (surprised)
Romila: haan… he's the outside…(giggles)
Kashish k chehrey per muskaan aajati hai…and she rushes outside…


Ok.. now... JODI fans.. heres a scene of RA...LOLZ..

Kashish bahar aati hai… and Sujal ko dhoondne lagti hai. . .
Lekin wohh usse kahin dikhayee nahi detaaa…
She glances at Tusshar and Kavya…. Both of them were talking… and Sujal unke saath bhi nahi thaa…
Kashish went outside… she went into her garden area… and over there she found a guy standing all alone..with his arms crossed… Kashish knew tht it was him…it was Sujal… cuz she cud easily recognize him from his back… she walked upto him…being happy…
Kashish stepped near him…. She was facing his back… … Before she cud spk…


Sujal: Aagayee Kashish?
Kashish heraan hojaati hai k isse kaise pata chal gaya …
Kashish: main…
Sujal: ab kyun ayeee ho? Ab kyun ayeee ho Kashish? ( kashish was still facing his back,…sujal didn't turn back )
Kashish: (looked at him)
Sujal: mujhse mile bina hee tum.. yahan chali ayee.. mujhse milna bhi zaroori nahi samjha tumney… aakhir kyun ?
Kashish: tumhein kaise pata chala k main… ( before she cud complete… Sujal turned around to face her…and Kashish usse dekhte hee chup hojaati hai )
Sujal: pyaar ko agar pyaar ki khabar nahi hogi… toh phir kis ki khabar hogi Kashish??
Kashish looked down…
Sujal: tum mujhse duur hojaana chahti thi na… aur ab dekho… tum khud mere paas chal ker ayee ho…
Kashish: (glanced at him)
Sujal: aakhir mera pyaar tumhein yahan tak kheench hee laya naa…
Kashish: Nahi…(tried to convince him) Aisi koi baat nahi hai… Main toh bas tumse milne aye…
Sujal: ( came closer to her) Kis haq se? haan? Kis haq se Kashish? Humarey beech joh dosti ka rishta tha… tumne wohh bhi tor diya… toh phir tum kis haq se mujhse yahan milne ayeee hoo?
Kashish: Tum kis haq se mere ghar per aye ho Sujal??
Sujal: (smirks) haq…. Main yahan kyun aya hoon… is ki waja tum jaanti hoo… Main tumharii tarah apni dil ki baatein chupa ker nahi rakhta… mere dil mein joh hota hai..wahee meri zubaan per hota hai..aur wohhee meri aankhon mein nazar aata hai… Main yahan aya hoon toh sirf tumharey liye… tumharee is shaadi ko rokne..
Kashish was shocked: Kyaa?????????
Sujal: haan… Main yahan aya hoon tumhein apna bananey k liye… wohh bhi humesha humesha k liye …
Kashish: (looks away) yeh nahi hosakta…
Sujal: yehii hoga Kashish… bas tum dekhti jao…
Kashish: Sujal tum…( Sujal Kashish k mun per haath rakh deta hai )
Sujal: tum mujhse vaada kero Kashish… k agar yeh sab sach hogaya… agar maine tumharee shaadi rukwa di… toh kya tum mujhse… mujhse…
Kashish: ( puts his hand down) tumse kya?
Sujal: (takes a breath) toh kya tum mujhse …shaadi kerogii?
Kashish chup hojaati hai…
Sujal: jawaab do Kashish?
Kashish turns around…: Pata nahi…
Sujal: jab koi larki pata nahi kehti hai toh uska matlab haan hee hota hai…
Kashish remains quite.. ( and the background musik starts… wohhee wala Sujal Kashish ka romantic one…in kth.. the slow version)
Sujal: (smirks…and starts walking slowly ) Jaanti ho Kashish… Maine soch liya tha… k main tumhein apne dil se…aur apni yaadon se nikaal doonga.. Lekin phir maine socha.. k agar mujhe aise hee kerna tha… toh phir kyun maine tumse pyaar…(he stops…while Kashish looks at him)
Sujal: Kyun main itne dinon tak tumharey saath London mein raha… kyun?
Kashish luks away…
Sujal: in sab saawalon k jawaab dhoondne k baad hee main yahan tak pohancha.. k nahi…mujhe aisa nahi kerna chahiye.. Main kamzor nahi hoon… aur naa hee main haara hoon… Maine kabhi haarna nahi seekha Kashish… toh phir main kyun haar maan jaata?
Kashish looked at him..
Sujal: tumharey bina apni zindagi ka tasawur bhi kerna mushkil hai mere liye. . .
Kashish looked at him affectionately…
Sujal: agar tum meri zindagi mein nahi… toh meri zindagi meri nahi…
Kashish ki aankh se ansoo girta hai…
Sujal: meri dharkan bhi meri nahi aur… yeh saansein bhi meri nahin…
Kashish: ( wipped off her tear )
Sujal: ( stepped towards her..and looked into her eyes…while Kashish luked down)
Sujal: jaise khushbo bina phool hai , saaansein bina zindagi hai , dharkan bina dil hai … Waise hee… Kashish bina Sujal hai. . .           ;           ; 
Kashish luked into his eyes…
Sujal: Kashish hai toh Sujal hai… Kashish nahi… toh… Sujal bhi nahi…
Kashish was moved with his words…
With this, Sujal walked off.. and Kashish shed into tears…



To be continued. . . Smile

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Comments (12)

hmmm..yash raj jee ka filmoo kay saath app ka drama bhi hit hai hmmmmm fantastic..

18 years ago

sara please continue soon kyunke me very damn eager to know ki sujal ab kashish ke aankhon ke saamne rehkar kya kartha hain...mazaa aayega...

18 years ago

sorry abt dat saara......ya u r rite....mi confusion has been cleared now....n hopefully i won't 4get dat now.....n if i do....samajh lena ke skewl wapis jaane ki waja se ho raha hai.....n ya...no need 4 thx ..... its all mi pleasure....

18 years ago

no words to complement yaar... gr8 gng... dear plz cont soon.... cant wait for next part.... wat S wll do to stop her shaddi....

18 years ago

Wah kya baat hai! Wonderful! The dialogues were just great!!! so emotional yaar Kashish ab to maan jao Will be waiting for the next -Areej

18 years ago

I am in LOve wid ur story...continue!!! Romantic scene karwao...heheh

18 years ago

Thanks alot......... Jyothi... and Angeleyes_786!! Group_1223.... arrey yaar.. Main Saara DOn nahi hoon..lolzz... u r mistaken... Saara Don is Saara1... and im another Sara.. hope yur confusion is cleared now... anyways.. thanks for such lovely comments... Golu jii.. thnx 2 you too... And ... Surya... Thanks Yaar... Thanks for liking it... Sab kuch acha hee hogaa... I too loved the convo between S and K... Mujhe khud bohat pasand hai wohh scene.. hehe.. And Meghla... yaar dont worry.... Kashish ki shaadi per.. charu.. mehak..a and tht bubbly.. sab log ayeinge..lolz.. but.. Sujal bhi hogaa.. Kulbin.. thanks yaaar.. im glad tht u liked it..

18 years ago

hey sara gr8 part amazing scene of S-K no words to complement yaar... superb dialouges i njoyed reading every bit of that scene.... gr8 gng... dear plz cont soon.... cant wait for next part.... wat S wll do to stop her shaddi....

18 years ago

For lovely parts Waise Kashish kay shaddi mein Charu,Mehek Aur woh moti I mean Bubli nahi aaaye yeh bhi koi baat hai But I m sure kay woh log sujal aur kashish kay shaadi mein zarur ayenge aur aab to shadi honge bhi nahi Kyunki sujal agaya I am so happy

18 years ago


sara dear a total fantabulous part..very damn rocking.. great...tooo
gooddd...just super cool... wow.. superb..mindblowing...i don't even
have words to express the extent to which i liked the part.. it was
toooooooooo gooddddddddddd dear seriously a very damn well
wonderfully written part....i enjoyed it to the
maximum extent...
the conversation between sujal & kashish was tooo zabardast...sujal
ke har ek lafz ne mere dil ko choo liya...hy..hye..sujal is such a
sweet heart...
me even like kashish's expressions i mean she is
expressing everything without uttering a word.. too good...
u know i loved the way sujal asked kashish that agar yeh shaddi rukh
gayi tho kya tum mujhse shaddi karogi..i liked kashish telling patah
nahi & then sujal telling patah nahi ka matlab haan hotha
hain....all were just toooo damn coollll.... you keep up the good
work..me fida over your writing.

please agli part jaldi se post karna..me will be waiting eagerly for it.. sun_42338968.0616550926

18 years ago

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