Chapter 52

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We see a woman coming out of the washroom wearing a bathrobe, water dripping from her hair she looks at the man sleeping peacefully on the bed not wanting to be disturbed but she thought different what could be better than disturbing him so she went to him and shouted in his ear- SUJAL!!!!

 

She expected him to get up with a jerk but instead she was pulled by him and pinned on the bed with him on top of hers

 

Sujal- So Mrs. Kashish Sujal Garewaal what do u think u were doing he said burying his face in her neck

 

Kashish keeps her arms around his neck- waking up my dear hubby

 

Sujal- Kashish come on ki aur tareeqa nahin hai tumhaare paas

 

Kashish- Nahin

 

Sujal became serious- Tumhein pata hai na keh kya hua hai  

 

Kashish her smile vanished as she recalled the memory of that dreadful day which had taken an innocent's life.

 

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GUNSHOT

 

SUJAL, Kashish and specially Piyush shocked none of them was hurt they then look in the direction of the doorway and saw Sanjana standing holding her stomach and blood oozing out of it the bullet had hit her [Sanjana had followed Piyush b/c she knew of Piyush's intentions and wanted to stop him] her eyes were wide with shock and she fell on the floor, Piyush rushed to her but after a few minutes she was dead.

 

After wards the police came and Piyush was arrested he wasn't able to bear that he had killed his sister he went mad and was sent to the mental asylum. Now after 7 years of repentance Piyush Raheja had committed suicide leaving a note that he could not bear the pressure of life anymore and he was sorry for what he had done to Sujal and Kashish and it was time for him to join Sanjana.

 

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Kashish closed her eyes trying to forget it; Sujal knew what she was going through so to lighten the atmosphere he kissed her passionately on her forehead which made her smile a little.

 

Kashish- Sujal ab hato aur mujhe jaane do

 

Sujal- aisay kaisay jaane doon huh aisay maukay baar baar nahin aate

 

Kashish- koi aa jaye ga

 

Sujal- darwaaza lock hai

 

Kashish- my dear se sweet se hubby humaare kamre mein do darwaaze hain aur main dusre darwaaze ki baat kar rahi hoon aur wahan se koi bhi kabhi bhi aa sakta hai aur agar koi aa gaya to

 

Sujal did not let her finish b/c he sealed his lips with hers and she eventually gave in now they were side by side Sujal was not on to of hers Sujal was massaging her back and she was pulling his hair.

 

As Kashish predicted the 2nd door of the room opened and some1 entered the room and Sujal's back was towards her and she saw Kashish pulling his hair she shouted-PAPA!!!

 

SK quickly separated their 2 year old daughter, Naina had seen them…..well….just seen them

 

She jumped on the bed- mujhe bhi papa keh baal kheenchne hain

 

Sujal's eyes were wide and he shouted- KYA!! NO

 

Naina- Yes!! BHAIYYA

 

And then their five year old son and their eldest and first child, the symbol of their love, Hiten came in

 

Hiten- kya hua?

 

Naina- bhaiyya aao papa keh baal kheenche

 

Hiten- Ok and he jumped on Sujal

 

Sujal- owe Kashish mujhe bachao warna tum humaari anniversary keh din widwa ho jao gee [yup it was their 7th anniversary]

 

Kashish- um….. dekho kids aisa mat karo papa ko dard hoga

 

Naina- lekin mama bhi to kheench rahi theen

 

HitenShocked- Kya!! Mama bhi kheench rahi theen phir to hum zaroor khenchein ge

 

Sujal- beta please mujhe baksh do

 

Kashish- haan beta plz

 

Hiten- theeq hai lekin first u have to tell me why u were pulling Dad's hair

 

Kashish was like keh zameen phate aur wo uske andar gir jayeOuch

 

Sujal smiles mischievouslyWink- haan Kashish batao na kyun kheench rahi thi mere baal

 

She gives an angry glare to Sujal which clearly said Angry- I will kill you

 

KashishWink- bachon maine kab mana kiya papa keh baal kheenchne hain na shauq se kheencho

 

Sujal was shockedShocked- nahin nahin dekho bachon main tumhein ice-cream khilane le jaun ga ok now go and get ready

 

Hiten and NainaBig smile- yay ice cream and they both run off to get ready

 

SujalWink- so wo log mere baal kheench sakte hai [he said this while moving closer and closer]

 

Kashish tries to run away but Sujal holds her by the waist and brings his face closer and closer and closer and closer their lips were about to touch when they heard a baby cry, Kashish immediately pushed Sujal and went to the little cot in their room to attend their newly born son, Rahul.

 

 

SujalConfused- yaar Kashish yeh bache mere hee hain na har waqt apne baap ko sat ate rehte hain


Kashish laughs at his cuteness

Just then Naina and Hiten enter- v r ready

Sujal hugs Kashish from behind and they both look at each other and smile and then look at their children and what a happy family they are and no sorrow or difficulty.

-------This is not the end but a new beginning in their lives--------

Hope u all enjoyed reading my FF as much as I enjoyed writing it and writing the last few lines of this part I was smiling thinking about the family. Guys please all comment even silent readers b/c it has been finished. And I would like to thank all my readers especially who commented b/c they were my encouragement.

    

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Comments (11)

jus read now...u ended so soon...bt gr8 end... ..gud job dear...

17 years ago

that was a a really good ff loved reading it

17 years ago


awesome saba simply mind blowing i loved the part you posted with all my heart..bohat hii achche tarike se you have ended the fanfic... it is completely amazing... i loved it from the bottom depths of my heart.. piyush ke saath joh hua he deserved every bit of it... warna uski itni himmat kii woh humare pyaare se jodi sujal , kahish ko alag karna chahhe... lekin me feeling bad for sanjana...apne bhai ke karmo kii sazaa usko mili...bechari.. well now coming to our jodi sujal , kashish ke scenes bade hii pyaare the... sujal , kashish aur unke woh theen bachche..kitte sweet the.. bohat hii shone... aur phir sujal , kashish ke beech ke woh meete , meete scenes unka woh romance...hyee..hye..kya baat hai main marr gayii..main vaari jawaan.. the funny scenes between their kids & sujal , kashish of that baal kheench na.. yeh padkar tho main gir girke has rahii thi... saba very damn well written yaar.. it has all the flavours to it seriousness , fun element & romance..all were present in a perfect mixture... lovely , wonderful, excellent , par excellence,marvelous,fantastic, superb,cool,dhassu,bindaas,jhakass,raapchik..bole tho fulltoo dhamaal.... your writing & your story rocks.... yaar ab me sad kii this fanfic of your's has ended... but as you say all good things have to come to an end at a certain point...this fanfic was really awesome yaar... sun_42339328.4890509259

17 years ago

fantastic ff

last part was tooooo..pooor suajllllllllllllllllllll..........wo balloon wala part toooooo....luv his sweetnessssssssme2kool39327.9598148148

17 years ago

it was so sweet part.........love the ending very much......specially their kids...........thanks a lot for this wonderful ff...........we really appriciate your hard work............thanks...........take care......... love kashish

17 years ago

Nikki they have 3 kids not four

17 years ago

no i m not ending Zindagani

17 years ago

hey aishwarya this fanfic was really nice and adorable .from starting to the end everything was fantastic and very well written .tumne saar emotions bohot achi tarah se describe kiye.pyaar,dard,khushi sab kuch . it was really amazing and the last part was wowwwwwwwwwww excellent .it didn't seemed like an ending at all .it was surely a starting of their new lives .ohhh godddd!!!they have four kids now . pata nahi aur kitne plan karr rahe hai .but it was really looked a perfect family at the end .thanks for writing such a wonderful fanfic .your 'zindagani' one is rocking too .great part and great fanfic .will be reading your other fanfic'zindagani'always so continue that one also soon pplzzzz.....can'tw ait any longer for it.it's damn intersting .well done with this one and congrats for completing it succesfully .bye.takecare.

17 years ago

Wow ! very nice n complete FF sach mein i just lved it n congratulations 2 u dear on a HAPPY ending

17 years ago

awwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooo cute!!!!!! a very happy ending!!!!! im gonna start reading ur other FF, Zindagani!!!!! r u ending that one as well??? plz don't!!!

17 years ago

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