Chapter 49

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[scene now shifts to sanjay who brings neha in a mandir]

N:- sanjay tum mujhe yahan mandir mein kyun laaye, koi khaas baat hai, S:- neha.. aisa yahaan mana jaata hai ki iss mandir ke saamne jo ye per hai issmein agar sacche man se koi couple dhaaga baandhe to unki muraad puri hoti hai, pata nahi yaahan par kitne door door se log aate hai, apne jeevansaathi ke saath, yahan apni muraad puri karne, N(smiles) [thn they ties the knot on the tree] N:- hum hameshaa hi saath rahenge, sanjay agar tum mujhse puchoge ki main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon, to mere pass iss baat ka koi jawab nahi hoga, lekin main itnaa jaanti hoon ki meri duaaon mein tum hamesha shaamil rahoge, S:- itnaa pyaar karti ho mujhse, N:- haan (n she smiles) lekin ye jo meri kundali mein ek dosh hai ki shaadi ke baad yaa pehele koi bohot bura maut ka saaya aa sakta hai, bhagwaan kare ki agar aisa ho, to sabse pehele maut mujhe aaye… (then sanjay stops her, by putting his hand gently on her lips to stop her from saying this n then sanjay says)…nahi neha…agar maut aaye to dono ko saath mein aaye…kyunki tumhare binaa iss zindagi ka koi matlab nahi, (then both look in2 each other's eyes)…

[next day scene shifts….nehaa was walking towards the organization center, suddenly a jeep passes n drops of muddy water falls on neha n her white kurta gets spoils, even some drops falls on her cheeks]

N:- YOU IDIOT!!! CAN'T U DRIVE CAREFULLY….[this time rahul do not listens to it but as he was near he see neha in the mirror, then he stops there 4 a while n smiles at her n he see tht she was staring at the jeep in anger, then he takes a back gear…n comes near nehaa, she gets shocked].. N:- YOU!!...R:- (smiles) kyaa main koi sapna dekh rahaa hoon, yaa aap vaakeye mein mere saamne khadi hai…N:- do chaante maarungi naa, sapne se haqeeqat mein aajaoge… (rahul laughs) ohh really… (then he comes out of the car, n goes close to neha, n she moves back) dekhiye thaapar chahe maar milijiye, par dil todne ki gustakhi mat kijiye ka, bohot kamzor hai.. N:- TUM SAMJHTE KYAA HO APNE AAP KO…. R:- SAMAJH…(he laughs) meri samjh to aapko dekhte hi kahin kho jaati hai, LEKIN YE KYAA HUA… ohh ho lagta hai iss chaand se chehre par daag laga diya maine..(then he takes out his hankercheif n gives it to neha) N;- ye tum apne paas h rakho, bohot jaldi, tumhare aasunn pochne ke kaam aayenge…(then she goes from the place n rahul keeps on looking at her)

part ends here.......

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thanks every1 for commenting i thought tht maybe no one is reading my fanfic, but i am really happy to see tht so many people commented on it. 1nce again thanks ever1

17 years ago

Gr888888888888 jobs ...keep it going, be famous like that ..create ur own show/serial ...y not try it ...we r with u ...thnks for the pm

17 years ago

Thanks. Ur imgaination is very good. U all should be the creative heads of some soap opera, it will do quite well...........

17 years ago

awww...that rahul guy kinda reminds me of ansh...obsessed with women ..great parts...continue soon -Nisha nisha92139205.947037037

17 years ago

good job.. it is getting so interesting.. i dont like rahul's character.. i kinda hope to see sanjay and pari end up togehter.. but lets see what you have in mind for the story.. keep them coming.. enjoying...

17 years ago

awesome update .. and thanks for the PM [: .. it's getting better and better (:

17 years ago

hey frnds keep on commenting

17 years ago

whoa...ur ff is awesome!! luv it! plz cont soon!

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