Chapter 11
Heyy guys, there comes a time when we all have to say goodbye and move one. wow am i being sentii...okay jokes apart. I really loved writing this ff for you guys and i was really happy that u supported me in this ff.
A big shout to allllllllll my friendzz for all being there and supporting to me write this ff. at one point i had forgotten abt it but then one of my friends reminded me(mahi).....so it came back.I have gained many new frndz through this ff.....................
Its beingg a grtt journey ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so ALVIDA guyssssssssssss
we will meet in my other ffz, if you read them
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Last Part
Mayank and Nupur are thinking about each other and she wonders " main mayank ke bare kyun itna sochne lag gayi hoon? kya main india samrat ko khone aur mayank ko pane ke liye ayi hoon?Par hamari soch kitni milti jhulti hai? Kya main aur mayank ek dosre ke liye bane hain...jaise mama aur papa ek dusre ke liye bane hain? She comes out of her room and finds mayank outside. They both stare at each, suddenly nupur realizes what she was doing so turns around, but he holds her hand and says" i want to show you something!" nupur looks at him, and he brings out his diary and says " nupur my words don't have the strength to touch your heart, maybe my writing can prove my love for you. Please do read it" Nupur looks down, " i already read it!" Mayank is shocked and looks at her, "I thought you're making up for your brother's mistake" Mayank is disappointed to hear that but she continues, " that WAS my thought, not anymore".Mayank doesn't understand her and she says " pagal not everything has an explanation, you should understand somethings yourself". She goes away saying this and mayank hits himself on the head with his diary with a big grin on his face.
Jatin with mayank and nupur he says, " mayank take nupur shopping for tonights function (gunjans bidaai). Nupur looks at mayank and says, " NO" to which mayank says, " nupur you know you should always listen to your elders". jatin and manya laugh at their little bikering, " beta chali jaona" manya says to nupur, Nupur looks at mayank who is nodding his head up and down with a cute face, " okay i'll go!" They both leave. Right then, Shefali calls Ajay and says " mubarak ho aaj gunjan ki ruksati hai, aur hamari badi beti ki shaadi paki hogayi hai aur hamari choti beti ke sasural wale arman aur uski sagaai ki liye bekarrar hain" Ajay smiles and congratulates her too.He thnaks god for setting everything right.
Nupur and Mayank are eating ice cream and he asks " nupur kya tume aur shopping karni hai" She nodds no , " mayank can you drop me at sanaya aunties house because i want to come from my sisters side" Mayank smiles and holds her hand, " noway you're the older daughter-in-law so you will be from samrat's side" Nupur blushes and places her hand on top of mayank. "fine, I'll tell dad that you said no" Mayank smiles and leans in to kiss her on the cheek which makes her blush.
mayank drops off Nupur at Gunjan's house. Both the sisters are talking while drinking tea. Gunjan asks, " toh batoa kaisa lag raha ek aur bahn paa ke?", Nupur smiles, " tum batoa tume toh do behne milgayi hain!" Gunjan sips her tea and says, " i feel really good" to which nupur agress with her. Gunjan looks here and there and then ask, ".nupur do you still feel good knowing that i'm samrats wife?" nupur doesn't say anything so gunjan decides to change the topic, " accha yeh batoa is mayank keeping you happy?". Nupur blushes and looks down as she remebers the kiss on the cheek, " mayank bahut accha and i'm gald he came into my life. Nupurs cell rings when samrat comes there. He asks " nupur can you please forgive me because i know i have hurt you so much"..he folds his hands in front of her. She says" samrat i have no complaints against you and i guess this is what god wanted. we were not meant for each other" He still feels guilty and Nupur asks" sam do you remember the slap?" to which he touches his cheek and says" ofcourse, how can I forget" Nupur smiles and says,, " that was your punishment now forget all that and smile gunjan won't like it if you come infront of her with a sad face" He thanks her and tells her, " you know your really nice" She says "I know."..then she pushes him to leave and not to see anyone because it's his wedding day!
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Nupur comes down dressed in a black in red sari, looking like an angel. When mayank sees her and his mouth hangs open. Samrat looks at what he is looking at and sees Nupur and laughs, " bhaiya mooh toh band karo" he whipers into mayanks ear. Mayank realises what he was doing so he composes herself.Nupur comes to them and stands beside mayank. Mayank looks at her winks making nupur blush deeply, he moves his hand and interlocks it with her hand. Nupur is shocked and she looks at him while he just smiles and greets guests.
Then the bidaai takes places and gunjan comes to samrats house
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Next Day
Dubai
Nupur is back in Dubai. Her and Riddhima are in the lawn and nupur says " ridzy yaar I missed our room more than you" to which riddhima giggles and hits her, " diiiiiiiiiiii" Nupur smiles and hugs her, riddhima says, " dii armans both parents are home so he's very happy....after your shaadi, is my engagement" Nupur smiles as she thinks about mayank, while riddhima thinks about arman and the moments she spent with him.
Ajay and shefali about wedding arrangements for Nupur and Ajay says " shefali after nupurs shaadi we'll get Arsila engaged too" to which she nodds.
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1 Month later
It's the wedding night! Nupur is sitting in her room looking at her self in the mirror when riddhima comes behind her, " diii you look so pretty, ek dum pari lag rahi ho" nupur blushes and looks down , " kya ridzy tu bhi na!" Riddhima stakes a seat beside her, " di aaj ke baad aap is ghar se chali jaougi, mein akeli reh jaungi" which makes nupur sad as she looks at riddhima, " accha toh phir arman kis kaam ke liye hai?" riddhima smiles, " dii arman is a guy, woh hamre jaisa nahi na main aapko kuch bhi bata sakti hoon par woh toh shopping ke 20 minute mein rone lag jata hai!" Nupur laughs and kisses riddhimas forehead, " pagali mein kaha door ja rahi hoon, hamesha tere paar hoongi, bas ankhein karke mere sochna aur main ajaungi!" Riddhima smiles and hugs nupur.
Riddhima and Gunjan bring down Nupur to where mayank is sitting.The pandit goes through all the rituals and they are married. They take the elders blessing and then they are taken to the stage to sit. Mayank looks at nupur and says, "
Ho ijazat agar aapki to ik baat pochoo.
Ji suno to aaj dil ki ik baat kahoo.
Jabse aapse mile, tabse fool mehakane lage.
Jabse aapko dekha, yeh raste gulshan hone lage.
Jaane kyun har pal hum aapke khayalo mein khone lage.
Mujhe kehna nahi aata kaise kahoo,
Mujhe jatana nahi aata kaise bataoo,
Bas jaan lo tum itna,
Hui hai dil mein ik dastak,
Ke kahin wo tum hi to nahi.
agar tumhe nahi aitraaz to hamein apna maan lo.
Nupur blushes and says, " aapko mana kya hum toh kab se apna mann chuke hain" mayank smiles and holds her hand as the crowd looks on.
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Riddhima ,nupur are with their parents talking about riddhima's engagement in the evening when nupur gets a call and she says" WHAT?"
Riddhima and Nupur arrve at a hospital...Riddhdima has red roses in her hand and she's thinking of the times spent with arman as tears run down her cheeks. The doctors are taking someone on a stretcher and it's Arman with bandages all around his head and face Riddhima slowly gets up from her wheelchair , she drops all her flowers except a rose in her hand...She remembers when arman made her promise to come to him with a red rose when she gets out of her wheelchair. She holds takes the rose and puts it on arman. Riddhima when she was in the hospital and arman prayed.............
"I was praying to name my life to you"
"I was praying to name my life to you"
"I was praying to name my life to you"
Riddhima cries on the body, " tumne aisa kyun kiya arman, meri zindagi tumhare begaar kuch nahi,ammy please wapis ajao tumhari basket tumahare bina jee nahi sake pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee muhje tumhari zindagi nahi chahiye" she goes to nupur and takes her to the stretcher," dii ise kaho na uthe...diii kaho naa!! di arman muhje chor ke nahi ja sakta.diii" while nupur is frozen and doesn't know what to say to her. while she herself is not able to believe this could happen. she just hugs riddhima who is crying uncontrollably.
Riddhima is in her lawn thinking of arman. She starts playing her violin thinking of them both playing it together. while the rest are taking away his body, and she notices and running to it. she stops them. Everyone is shocked at this, while nupur comes to her and stops her, " nahi ridzy chor de" riddhima maintains herself and looks at nupur, " nahi di, arman is ghar se mera banke jayega" everyone is shocked as they listen to what she is saying, but she get slapped by nupur when she takes out a sindoor ki dibbi, " riddhima tu pagal hai kya?? hosh mein aa" she shakes her,but riddhima doesn't budge, " di yan toh mein arman ki suhagan banugi yan phir arman ke saath aap meri bhi arti is ghar se leke jayienge". Shefali is shocked she trys to make her understand but, she is not willing to listen to anyone.Ajay and shefali after discussing reculantly allow her to do that. she takes armans hand and dips in the dibbi and smears it on her forehead as tears escape her eyes.
Dil Ki Dhadkan Ko Dhadka Gaya Koi
Mere Khwabon Ko Mehka Gaya Koi
Hum To Anjane Raston Pe Chal Rahe The
Achanak Hi Pyaar Ka Matlab Sikha Gaya Koi
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At night riddhima is packing to go to armans house when ajay comes there. She puts her head on his shoulder and cries. riddhima looks up and says, " papa arman prayed for my life in return for his".Ajay consoles her, "meri jaan even if you hadn't gotten well, whatever god had written in arman's destiny had to happen". He tells her " beta ajj muhje ehsaas hogaya hai ke meri beti kitni baari hogayi hai!, i'm proud of you". riddhima smiles through her tears and hugs ajay, " papa mein janti hoon aap hurt huye hain, par arman hi meri dharkan mein rehta hai wohi hi dharkan ko dharkata hai, uske bina mein kuch bhi nahi" to which ajay nodds and kisses her forehead, " beta mein bas chahta hoon tum khush raho", they hug.
Riddhima is sitting on the rocks by beach dressed in a sari with sindoor in her maang, thinking of arman. Mayank and nupur come and sit next to her. Nupur says." i want the old ridzy back joh muhje kuch bolne ka mohka hi nahi deti thi, woh joh mera mazak urathi hthi, woh joh meri jaan hai!, riddhima zindagi kahein rukawatein ati hai, par iska matlab hum jeena chor dein nahi" riddhima listens on, while mayank adds, " haan riddhima agar arman yahan hota toh tumse ase dehk ke kahbi khush nahi hota, riddhima tum arman se bahut pyar karti ho toh uske pyar ki insult mat karo, yeh zindagi joh tumahre andar hai woh use pyari thi, aur tum ise zehr ki tarah guzar rahi. riddhima zindagi ko jeena seekho arman ki yaadon ke saath.riddhima has tears in her eyes and mayank hugs her, " aur isme main aur nupur hamesha tumahre saath deinge. All three of them hold hands and walk away. Riddhima stops and looks back...she sees Arman smiling at her. Nupur comes back to her, and says, " meri jaan peeche mat dehko, zindagi mein gae baro". Riddhima looks back to see arman guesturing her to go ahead and she leaves with nupur and mayank while arman watches her.
Behte ashkon ki zuban nahi hoti,
Lafzon mein mohabbat bayaan nahi hoti,
Mile jo pyar to kadar karna,
Kismat har kisi par maherban nahi hoti.
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Bye guys i'm realli gonna miss this ff!!!!, but i hope we stay friends forever!
but again remeber every end is a start of something new
Please do comment even though its the last part
they mean alott to me
-sanam-
Comments (62)
heyyy dear, awesome FF do writte more FF love Riddss
14 years ago
hey .... sorry for bieng late i knw....i didnt replied for ur last few parts but i was act on a vacation i couldnt sit online anywyaz i read all the parts n they wer simply outstnding love u sanam habs
14 years ago
hizz hru sry for the late comment the part was awesume i love it
14 years ago
really awesome ending dear ........................... loved it ............. it was really well written .................. sorry for late comment dear
14 years ago
wonderfully written hun.ending was really sad.but i loved mayur bonding.keep making more.
14 years ago
hey sanam i cant believe its ended im really gonna miss it!! the end was very sweet and romantic.. happy 4 all couples yaa a lill sad 4 ridzi... bcauz at the end she lost armaan but the massage was very important and that thing i liked a lot!! emotional end abt AR loved this ff a lottt!! u did a great job...no sorry an amazing work seee yaaa love yaaaaa
14 years ago
wow......that was such a great part! very sweet and romantic ending....loved it..... i'm sad this ended..... do keep writing! and thanks for the pm
14 years ago
woww hunny.i loved the part.its really amazing.continue soon.
14 years ago
Hey Sanam thx 4 the pm. Thum ne dheer hi sahi-pm tho kari-that too after the ff is over---but thx yaar-read everythng in one go. Pehle tho i was getting restless waiting 4 mayank to enter---uska roll chota tha magar accha tha. Enjoyed the sisterly love of nupur and rhiddi. Aarman died------shock yaar-totally unexpected. And some of the parts were a little confusing or shall i say incomplete---like how the problem solved and stuff like that-but vo sab important nahi hai so i get your take on it. And how did nupur n mayank meet and how did they become good friends and their interaction. What is written in Mayanks diary-when did he start liking her and all that. Was sad for rhiddi but you set the spot light on good points. 1-True love is unconditional and can do wonders. (rhiddi n arman hospital surgery scene-she comes back to life) 2-Life is full of surprises and betrayal is one of it--unexpected things happen and we must be sensible n strong (Ajay-sanaya-gunjan, nupur n samrat relationship, RV and his crazyness) 3-When you love you need the courage and strength to take care of it and carry it happily (Samrat n his mess)-so avoide the crap by taking the right steps. Pyaar kiya tho darna kya. Face the world boldly rather than hiding n doing stuff caue that will only lead to chaos n pain. 4-Jab sapne toot jathe hai tho tum toot math jao---balki open your eyes and look at reality n find better things (nupurs breakup w/samrat n makeup w/mayank) 5-zindagi jab nainsafi karthi hai tho thum rooot math joa-don't stop living caue that will take you nowhere-gives you only emptyness and pain to everyone around also. So learn to move on and face the future with a smile. Aage baado-jo hona tha vo ho gaya aab jo hona hai vo jeeevo. Love is not life it is part of life. And even if u consider love as life-well that is true love could be life so feel the love even if it absent and lead your life. (Rhiddima and aarman story) So ya these are the points i recogni
14 years ago
oh gosh sanam... buckets of tears.... luvd d ending.. luv mayur... thnx a lot...
14 years ago