Chapter 1

Rinki

@~Rinki~

A girl is shown standing in front of a window.....she is wearing a blue sari with designs. The wind comes in and plays with her long tresses and swirls around her coming back to play with her hair once again. The room that she is in is dark.....only the light from the moon keeps the room from being completely dark. The moonlight hits the girl, lighting up her features. Her eyes are shown.....two dark blue eyes filled with pain and grief.....they showed experience and made her look older than she actually was. Her pink lips are shown.....parted to say something but no sound comes from her. Her forehead filled with sindoor.....her neck adorned by a beautiful maglasutra. Her whole face is shown.....tear marks running down her cheeks.....more drops leave her pained eyes and hit the floor. Just then the sound of the door opening is heard.....she hurries and wipes her tears.....still looking out the window, she didn't have to turn around to know who just entered the room. The light is turned on.....sound of footsteps is heard and than a soft sound of something landing. She turns and sees a guy laying on his stomach on the bed. His face is hidden.....his hair black and messy....his shoulders broad and muscular.....as seen through his light green shirt. He still has his watch and shoes on. The girl sighs quietly and walks to him, never once making a sound. She leans on her knees.....and takes off his shoes. She then takes his watch off.....and turns him around. His eyes are shown, closed.....his lips red and parted as he breathed silently. His whole face is shown.....he has a goatee and piercings on his right ear.....two at top and one at bottom. His face reflects tiredness. She pulls the blanket over him and turns the light off, letting the whole room be darkened once again. She then walks to the matteress lays down. She closes her eyes, as finally sleep overcomes her.....for he was home safe and sound.

Should i continue? Critisism is welcomed as this is my first fanfic so please tell me what you thought of it. Hope you all like it, thanks a lot for taking your time and reading this!

ps- who do u think were the people?? Hint- the girl is mi own creation but the guy is not :[ His name starts with Z i think you know who im talking about!! :]:]

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