Chapter 16

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Aysha

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Part 16

Recap-Ranbir and Kanya have their Hen and Stag night. Things get heated up. Kanya gets mad at Ranbir for joining in and having too much fun with the women and decides to get her own back as she didn't get too involved with her Hen night. Ranbir witnesses Kanya strip dance with the male Chippendales in front of his family members and goes towards Kanya.

Ranbir infuriated by what Kanya was doing drags her out of the Hens party and lays into her with verbal abuse while Kanya is pleased by his response and hurt at the same time. She thought it was a good idea best way not to get married again and perfect way to split up without her parents getting dragged in this mess. Only problem was Ranbir didn't catch on to her plan but she felt this way it would be more realistic. She hadn't expected Ranbir to get all out mental.

R-Kya kar rahi ho Kanya? How can U degrade Urself like that. Adi nangi. Look at U woh bhi mera pariwar ke saamne. So cheap. Koi sharam hai kya?

K-What the h**l. Bloody saand tum bhi topless ho. maine tumhe dekhi hain un ladkiyo ke saath kaise  maza le rahe te. Sharam mujhe kyun hogi. Maine suni tumne kya kaha tha mere bare main. Ji chahta hain tumhe. (Shows strangling motion with her hands) Maine suni kya keh rehe t eke main ek corner main betke kitni uncomfortable ho jaungi. Kya samajte ho apne apko?

R-Tumhari hone wala pati. Do U know how it feels all guys gawping at U like a bunch of crazed teenagers? I feel mad.

K-I can see that but in case U haven't realized we don't love each other and this is a temporary thing. Na jane kiski gale par gayi thi. Double standards. I hate hypocrites. Tum aggar aise sabke samne Akash ke saath gair ladkiyo ki kapre uthar sakhte ho aur usse aise choo sakhte ho to main kyun nahin? What makes U so special? This is a free country. Jo main karna chahti hoon kar sakhti hoon got that. (Points her fingers at Ranbir)

R-Kanya tum paagal hogayi ho. this isn't U. (grabs her hand tightly) Mere saath aise baath kar rahe ho. Cover Urself woman.

K-Let go of me. U'r hurting me Ranbir. As for covering myself forget it. I still have my Hot pants and top i can take off.

R-Kanya tumhe kaise batao? Mujhe kya ho raha hain. I never feel so possessive about any woman before. I don't know why mujhe itna gussa kyun agaya par amain sirf itna jaanta hoon i never want to see anyone touch U. Please don't take anything else off everones seen enough. Kitne giroge.

K-Hey Mr. Romeo. Have U forgotten tum kitna bara playboy ho. Kisi ladki ko khabie respect nahin kiya. Unhe hamesha unke jism ke liye pyar kiya. Istamal kiya aur phir unhe eject kardi jab tum unhe use karliya. Main tumhare miti bato main ane wali nahin hoon. This is where we go our separate ways.

R-Kanya tum mujhe chod ke nahin ja sakhte.

K-R U drunk? This is the best opportunity. Tum apne Mamma ko kehdena main giri huwi ladki hoon. A cheap bachlan ladki jo tumhe dokha dedi. Koi maa yeh nahi chahegi uski beta ki saath bewafaai kare. Rishta toot gayi. Witnesses ki kami bhi nahin. Yaha sab mojood hain. Everyones seen me act inappropriately. Besides it would be a little uncomfortable as all your nephews and brothers have seen me like this.

R-Aur tum jake sab ko tumhari ghar main keh do g eke maine tumhe pyar nahin kartha aur kisi ladki ke saath mere chakkar hain. Yeh tumhari plan thi.

Akash was listening in on the conversation and knew straight away along with Gwen that Ranbir had a thing for Kanya. Gwen had an inkling Kanya might have feelings for Ranbir and was hiding it well as Kanya couldn't look Ranbir in the eye. Pooja went past Gwen wanting to know what all this drama was about. Aditya and Sidharth were curious as what was kicking off and only got to view the last 5 minutes of the action.

R-We can work this out Kanya. Find another way. Its so messy.

K-Its better before we get in too deep Ranbir. I can never be with a player like U. Not unless U mend your ways and i doubt ke tum khabie aise kar sakhte ho.

R-I'm sorry Kanya. I wish i could say something to make U stay

K-I'm sorry 2 Ranbir. These 2 weeks were fun and a nightmare at the same time. This marriage was never meant to be. It was a mistake but at least i've learnt from it. I will miss. U.

R-Kanya at least mujhe tum ek last hug de sakhte ho.

Kanya starts crying not understanding her feelings one bit. Why was she in turmoil. This fool proof plan was a master stroke. Nobody would be suspicious of their actions but she couldn't stop her tears. She gave Ranbir a hug which turned into a kiss in no time. Both put all their passion into that one kiss. Ranbir could taste the salty tears and they broke it off with Kanya running off. Pooja was in shock and went after her sister along with Adita. Ranbir just stood there looking lost and confused. Aditya and Sidharth were there for him as was Akash. Ranbir wasn't in the mood to celebrate. He was suppose to be over the moon he was a single man again. No shackles to weigh him down but he couldn't understand what just happened. Kanya crying like that was weird. She was always so fiery but this was a first.

P-Kanya yeh sab kya? U can't break up with Ranbir. He's your fianc. U love him and just for that.

K-Di tumhe mallom nahin. He's so arrogant amd woman crazy. Woh mujhe khabie pyar nahin kar sakta. I was getting too attached and losing sight of my goal. Usse shaadi karke sabke zindagi barbad hojati. Khaas tor pe Mamma aur Pappa ki. They have no idea ke Ranbir sach much acha nahin hain. Ladkiyon ki line laga rehti hain aur main uski kuch nahin lagthi. He will never be faithful. The more i get to know him the more good qualities i see but the one thing thats bad is he is a womanizer. Mujhme kya hain? Maine khabie kisi ko chaha nahin par usse kyun. Woh bhi do hafto main. Ridiculous.

P-Kanya lekin baby woh badal tho saktha haina tere liye.

K-Leopards don't change their spots just like that Ranbir can never change.

AN-Kanya main tumse bari hoon and i can see Ranbir is crazy for U.

K-Then U need glasses. He is all wrong trust me.

AN-Time will tell.

K-He will never change. We better get home.

Over with the guys they decide to leave Ranbir in peace as they didn't know how to bring  up the topic on Kanya as Ranbir looked uncomfortable with his own state of mind. They thought it was best to bring it up after everyone calmed down and less fuelled with alcohol.

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Comments (15)

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue relis soon

otherwise ur an awesome writter

sweet cherry2008-07-28 06:19:17

16 years ago

the update was awsome but i think somehow kanya forgot she was a goody pants GIRL and she was comparing herself to a BOY ranbir!!!!anywaz it was reli good plz plz continue soon!!!

16 years ago

great update
plzz continue soon!

16 years ago

Thanx guys for liking it. I wanted to show that absence does make the heart fonder. Sometimes we push people away to stop them getting closer.

Keep an eye out for my next update on my other FF coming today.

16 years ago

hey
gr8 part..
cont.soon

16 years ago

lovely update .Waitin for the next one.

16 years ago

you showed the turmoil going thru the couple beautifully .thanx.

16 years ago

thsnks for the pm, this update was intense! I hope they can make up somehow!

16 years ago

Lovely Update!!!!!!
PLZ Continue soon!!!!!!

16 years ago

gr8 update
thnx for the PM
plz dont split thm
continue soon

16 years ago

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