Chapter 11

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Veer had just finished his statement when a loud noise was heard from behind followed by many screams.
Both Veer and raksha turned back and were shocked to see the dakus attacking and killing the innocent devotees..
They shouted"Rajkumari nivedita kahan hai"..."Batao verna.."
raksha:ye log to nivi ko dhoondh rahe hain..par kyun...veer(she turns to her right but veer was not there)
Then she looked back at the dakus to find veer fghting heroically with them.
Raksha also rushed to him and started slewing the men...
Meanwhile dharam who was almost to his tent heard all this noise and came back to his friend...he was horrified to see the chaotic scene.
Then he spotted veer and raksha and joined them.
But the dakus outnumbered the three brave fighters and though they gave a tough fight,the dakus had an upper hand...
Suddenly something happened that no one had thought of...
One by one all the dakus were falling on the ground..they were being hit by arrows...
Dharam veer and raksha just stood there astonished at the way the events had turned within a few moments...
All the men were killed...then someone jumped from the large banyan tree..he looked so brave,had a determined look and carried a bow,he was like a rincarnated arjun of mahabharat
He came close to DV and raksha
Guy:Aap log theek to hain na?
Veer:Ji par aap kaun?
Guy:Ji hum..
Dharam:Aap ka bahut bahut shukriya..agar aap na hote
Guy:Dekhiye aap humme shukriya mat kahiye..
Raksha:Dekh ke to aap kahin ke rajkumar lagte hain...yahan kaise..
Guy:Hum rajkumar hi hain..aur hummara naam hai
Nivi:Rajkumar Harsh
All of them turned to find nivi standing behind them
Raksha:Nivi tum kab uthi?
Nivi(tensed):Shor sunne par neend khul gayi aur bas abhi abhi hum yahan aa gaye
Dharam was staring at rajkumar harsh,with a disheartned look..veer understood his brother's feelings
Veer:Rajkumar harsh...aap yahan kaise?
Harsh:Hum yahan apni hone wali patni-nivedita se milne aaye hain.
Nivi(still tensed):Rajkumari nivedita..aap rajkumari kehna bhool gaye the..
Raksha:Ab to mil liye..theek hai to namaste..aap..aap ab wapas jaa rahein honge?hai na??
Harsh(smiles):Hum wapas jaayenge par aaj nahi kal..aur vo bhi rajkumari nivedita ko sang le kar..
Nivi gave a questioning look
Harsh:Darasal jab hum awadhi pahunche to maharni aur maharaj ne kaha ki aap karunya mandir aayin hain aur unke kehne par hum aapko lene aaye hain.
Nivi looked around and found dharam missing,the sad prince had enterd his tent
Veer also went to his friend.
In the tent
Veer:Dharam...dharam so gaye kya?
Dharam(lying in his bed):Humme pareshaan mat karo veer...
Veer:Tum kaho to abhi bhabhi ki shaadi rukwa doon.
Dharam:Nahi...nivi ko rajkumar harsh khush rakhenge...tum shaadi tudwaane ki baat bhi mat karo
Veer:Dharam..kabhi to dil se socho..tumhe kya lagta hai ki rajkumari nivi is shaadi se khush rehengi?
Dharam:Haan..
Veer:Jhoot..dharam tum kitne khushnaseeb ho ki tumhe sachcha pyar mila...apni kavitaaon mein to pyar ki badi badi baatein karte the ab kya hua?
Dharam:Tum kya jaano pyar kya hota hai...tumto in sab baaton par vishwaas bhi nahi karte.
Veer(thoughts):Shayad main bhi pyar ko samajhne laga hoon...
He was picturising who else but the chirpy raksha.
All the four(dv and r-nivi)had a sleepless night..the jagraata was off due to the dakus attack
It was morning and the pilgrims were now returning to their homes
Dharam:Hum talaab se maa ke liye pavitra jal lene jaa rahein hain...
Veer(still in his bed):Dharam...paani subah mein lena abhi so jao
Dharam was in no mood to correct or wake his sleepy bro and went out
In the girl's tent
Nivi and raksha were awake
Nivi:Raksha hum mandir jaa rahein hain.tum dasiyon se kehkar rajkumar harsh ko jaga dena.
Raksha:Theek hai.
After nivi left raksha immediately rushed to dv's tent
Inside the tent she found the charming prince sleeping on the bed
Raksha(thoughts):Subah ho gayi aur ye mahaan ab bhi so raha hai..abhi maza chakhati hoon..
she went close to veer and was only an inch away from his cheeks...for a second she forgot why she had come there and just stared at this very handsome guy..
Veer(in his sleep):Nahin maa mujhe karele bilkul pasand nahin hain..dharam ko khane dijiye..
Raksha was frightened but then realised that veer was still sleeping...
the relieved girl shouted in veer's ears"KARELA"
veer woke uo alarmed and shouting:Maa bachao bachao...
Coming back to his senses he found raksha laughing at him
Veer:Tum mere tamboo mein kya kar rahi ho?
Raksha:Tumhe karela khilana chahti thi..akdoo?(laughed)
Veer:Dekho gussail tum abhi jaayo yahan se varna..
Raksha:Verna..verna kya..kya karoge tum ?
Veer he took a jug of water at his bedside and pour the whole water on raksha
Raksha(all wet):Main tumhe zinda nai chodoongi...tum...
she attacked veer with a flower pot,
Veer got up from the bed and was running all over the tent and raksha was chasing him..
All of a sudden raksha slipped on the wet carpet but veer rushed to her and she was in his arms..
Veer:Ab batao kya kehna tha tumhe?
Raksha:Main..main...(unable to understand y she was in his tent,she still answered)..haan main ye kehne aayi thi ki kal tumne dharam aur nivi ko lekar kya kaha tha?
Veer:Kya?mujhe to yaad nahi aa raha?
Raksha:Tumne kaha tha ki ve dono pati-patni ki tarah nok-jhok karte hain
Veer:Haan to?
Raksha:To ye ki nok-jhok to humare beech bhi hoti hai par hum dono ke beech koi rishta nahi hai
Veer(annoyed):Maine apne baare mein to kuch bhi nahi kaha tha.
Raksha:Vo jo bhi ho ..yaad rakho tumme kuch aisa khaas nahi hai ki main tumse pyaar karoon.samjhe..
Veer(looking at the wet girl in his arms):Par tum khaas ho...kyunki kisike kehne par nahi balki humari soch humme khaas banati hai
Raksha had not expected veer to give such an answer..she was out of words and just staring at him,when dharam appeared
Dharam(astonished):Wah veer ye hui na baat ...humesha ladki ko apni baahon mein lo..unki baahon mein mat giro..
V and raksha were surprised to find dharam standing there ...raksha stood up and rushed out of the tent..veer embarassed went back to his bed..dharam smiled at his younger bros action
Harsh,nivi and raksha were about to leave,nivi was looking back at dv's tent
Raksha(whispers):Dharam aate hi honge.
Nivi was surprised at how raksha knew always what nivi wanted.
Harsh:Chaliye nivedita,ab humme
Nivi(anger in her tone):Rajkumari nivedita kahiye...
Harsh(embarassed):Ji..ab chalein...
Reluctantly nivi starts moving when suddenly
Dharam(shouted):Nivi
The princess turned back to find her love waving her a good bye...unable to stop herself she ran back to him and gave him a warm loving hug..
Dharam also reciprocated
Nivi(in tears):Dharam kaash aap humme pehle mile hote.
Dharam:Aaj hum aapko sirf itna kahenge ki hum aapse pyar karte hain par shayad humaara pyar judaai mein hi hai
Raksha also went to veer who was standing next to dharam
Raksha:Kya mujhe yaad karoge?
Veer:Meri smriti(memory)bahut kamzor hai
Rakha(taken aback):To bhool jaana akdoo!waise bhi main tumhe to bhool hi jaaongi.
"AB CHALEIN RAJKUMARI" rajkumar harsh spoke in an authoritative voice,dharam and nivi separated and bid ad dieu....
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Comments (8)

hey thanx,will update on 14th hope to end this ff before i leave...

16 years ago

nice update, i am completely hooked to this story now, pls cont fast, i am eager to know what happens next

16 years ago

are yaar lovely update... veer and raksha's sceme are superb ... Me feeling really bad for dharam and nivi

16 years ago

that was fab\ hiri

16 years ago

the next part will be posted either on 12th or 14th

16 years ago

when will the nxt part come??? you keep m glued, especially vr scenes

16 years ago

its just sooooooooooooo amazinggggggggg keep up the cool work dear

16 years ago

mwahh... kya baat haii... it is wonderfulllll.... waiting for the next partt..

16 years ago

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