Chapter 9

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Dharam and Nivi finished their aarti.
Then he waves at veer to come upstairs to the temple..
Veer and raksha both go to dharam and nivi.
Dharam:Humaari pooja to ho gayi ab tum aarti kar lo
Veer:Main aarti kar loonga par dharam kya tumne rajkumru ji ko yahan ki dukaanon mein ghumaaya...
Dharam:Hum..vo...
Nivi:Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai rajkumar veer... hum khud hi dukaan ghoom aayenge..
Veer:Arey nahi nahi..dharam tum kuch kehte kyun nahi
Dharam:Haan veer theek keh raha hai..chaliye aapko hum yahan ki dukaane dikhate hain...
Veer:Aur tab tak main aur raksha pooja kar ke pahunchte hain.
dharam and nivi leave.
Raksha:Achcha hua tumne in dono ko bhaga diya..chalo ab pujari ji se baat kar lein..
Dharam and nivi were visiting each shop in the noisy street of the temple mela..
Nivi:Aaj tak hum kabhi kisi dukaan mein nahi aaye..
Dharam:Achcha kyun
Nivi:Hume jo chahiye hota pitaji humaare liye mangva dete...par pata hai dharam....(suddenly a stray dog began barking at nivi..she was scared out of her wits and hugged dharam..out of fear)
Dharam though shocked at nivi's action,understood the reason behind it..he took a pebble and threw it at the dog..the dog ran away...
Dharam:Nivedita daro mat sab theek hai..vo kutta chala gaya
Nivi(almost in tears):Humme..humme kutton se bahut dar..
Dharam(Brought a glass of cold water):Lo pani piyo...aur chalo aage ki dukaane dekhein..aur daro mat humare rehte tumhe kuch nahi hoga
It was evening now..the sun had already set..
Raksha:Nivi tumne dukaan se kya khareeda?
Nivi:Kuch khaas nahi..bas yuhin...
A whistle is heard..
Nivi:Ye awaaz kaisi..
Raksha:Kaun si awaaz maine to kuch nahi suna...
Nivi:Nahi raksha humne koi to awaaz suni hai..
Raksha:Nivi tum yahan andar baithe baithe thak gayi ho..chalo main tuhe ek khubsoorat jagah dikhati hoon..
Both the girls leave..after walking for a while..they come to a place which was not very far away from the main temple area but was very peaceful...there was a stream flowing under a beautiful wooden bridge..the moonlight reflected on the stream made the whole scenery look like a fairy land.
Nivi:Kitni sundar jagah hai ye...
Raksha:Haan so to hai..achcha tum us pul par jayo main bas abhi aaye...
Nivi goes to the bridge..
All of a sudden she hears a voice
Dharam:Rajkumari nivedita aap..
Nivi(shocked):Haan..par aap yahan kaise?
Dharam:Vo hum bas aise hi bahar ghoomna chahte the..
Dharam and nivi were busy with their convo.Veer and raksha were hidden behind a bush which allowed them to look at their friends

Raksha:Achichi seeti baja lete ho kahan se seekhi
Veer:Gurukul se..chahiye to tumhe bhi sikha doon.. Raksha:Nahi koi zaroorat nahi hai.. Akdoo...vo pandit aa to jayega na..
Veer:Tum phikar mat karo..mere hote koi gadbad nahi ho sakti
Raksha:Veer tumhare aur musibaton ka koi bahut purana rishta hai.jahan jahan tum jaate ho wahin wahin musibat bhi aati hai.
Veer:Mujhe bas itna pata hai ki jahan jahan main jaata hoon wahin wahin tum aati ho..gussail.
Before raksha could give a reply the temple pandit's sevak arrives at the bridge..
Dharam and nivi stop their convo.
Nivi:Pranam
Sevak:Haan..haan pranam..bhagwaan kare...kya tha..bhool gaya...haan bhagwaan kare
nivi and dharam were staring at each other with surprised looks..
Sevak(stammering out of fear):Yaad aaya..bhagwaan kare tum dono bhai-behen ki jodi salaamat rahe..
Veer slaps his forehead
Raksha:ye to sab bhool gaya..main abhi ise(she almost came out of the bushes but veer pulled her back such that she fell in his arms)
he made raksha sit very close to him still holding her tight..
Veer:Abhi aage gaye to saari yojana par paani..
Raksha was unable to grasp what veer was saying..for the first time she liked being touched by a male...
she was unable to stop herself thinking about veer's charm...his bright smile..and being so close to him made her feel pleasant..what was happening to her...
Veer(Shaking her):Dekho ab shayad sab theek ho jaaye
she looked back at dharam and nivi on the bridge..
Dharam:Dekhiye hum dono bhai behen nahi hain.
Sevak(sweating):Kya..bhai behen nahi ho..phir...mujhe pata tha mujhse galti hogi...haan yaad aa gaya..bhagwaan kare tum dono pati patni ki jodi salaamat rahe..
Nivi:Hum dono pati patni bhi nahi hain..
Sevak:(scared and irritated)Arrey phir kya rishta hai tumhare beech...jo bhi ho..bhagwaan kare tum dono ka rishta salaamat rahe..
and then the sevak rushed away
Dharam:Suniye to..suniye to..ajeeb aadmi tha..
Nivi had tears in her eyes..
Dharam:Rajkumari ji aapke aankh mein aason....hmm..dekhiye us aadmi ne jo kaha uska aap bura mat maniyega.
Nivi:Nahin dharam..us aadmi ne anjaane mein hi sahi humaare saamne ek sawaal khada kar diya hai..
Dharam:Kaisa sawaal?
Nivi:Yahi ki hum dono ke beech kaisa rishta hai..
Dharam holding nivi by her shoulders:Nivi hum dono ke beech shayad wahi rishta hai jo radha kishan ke beech tha..maaf karna par humaara dil to yahi kehta hai..hum aapke baare mein nahi jaante..
Nivi:Kaash ye rishta waisa hota jaisa ki ram sita ka par..
Dharam:Par kya..
Nivi(sobbing):Dharam hum chahkar bhi ek nahi ho sakte..humaari shaadi kisi aur se tay ho gayi hai
HEARING THIS
Raksha:Gayi bhains paani mein
Veer:Nahi bhains to mere saath baithi hai
Raksha:Yahan..sab galat ho raha hai aur tumhe mazaak soojh raha hai
Veer:Tum bahut bolti ho dekhna sab theek ho jaayega
On the bridge again..
Dharam(heart broken):Bhagawaan kare aapki shaadi shuda zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaaye.
Nivi(thoughts):Aapke bina hume koi khushi nahi mil paayegi dharam
Dharam:Theek hai hum chalte hain..Rajkumari nivedita
Nivi:Shubhratri rajkumar dharam..
both of them leave to their resp.tents..heart broken and full of grief.
Raksha:Dekho rula diya na dono ko..bade aaye inko millane wale..
Veer:In dono ne apne pyaar ka izhaar to kiya..aage chalkar dono ki shaadi bhi zaroor hogi.
Raksha:Ek kaam karo kal na tum rajkumar dharam ko koi narangi kapda pehnana..nivi bhi waise hi rang ka kapda pehnegi..
Veer(suddenly remembring sthng):To us din mehel mein pooja ke waqt tumhare kehne par rajkumari nivedita ne neele rang ke kapde pehne the..
Raksha:Haan..
Veer:Tum to bahadur ke saath saath samjhdaar bhi nikli
Raksha(blushing unkowingly):Shubhratri veer...mera matlab akdoo.
Raksha leaves...
Veer(Mutters to himself):Shubhratri meri gussail raksha..
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Comments (6)

it was very nice pls do cont

16 years ago

i reaally liked it dear do cont it was gr8 and fab.

16 years ago

hey thanks...call me nadini please

16 years ago

hiii mughda its was nice part i liked it ...........kep writing

16 years ago

how sweet yaar..but a bit sad but atleast dharam-nivi know about their love i liked most raksha and veer making plans together

16 years ago

please send me ur comments and i m very sorry for the lengthy update but u see time is less and i've got to end this story properly

16 years ago

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