Chapter 1

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Chaahat Part 1

The kingdom of aryanagar was lit up with many diyas.It seemed that the stars have decended on earth to give this beautiful glow in the night of amavasya.The magnficent palace of Maharaj Aryavardhan was decorated with swarna(golden)and rajat(silver)diyas,colourful flowers,and candles.Everyone was excited and happy,after all it was the festive occasion of deepavali  and the king had announced some tax-reliefs to the people as a present ,on this occasion.

The lakshmi pooja was about to begin  in the palace.The situation was chaotic .Maharani swati was busy welcoming their guest the maharaj and maharani of awadhi.Maharaj aryawardhan of aryanagar seemed very tensed even during the welcoming of their guests.after giving some instructions to the sevaks and showing the guests their marvellous rooms,Maharani swati noticed the tensed king,though she knew the reason ,she still asked him,

Swati:Maharaj kya hua?aap itne pareshan kyun lag rahen hain?

AV:Rani aap sub kuch jaan kar bhi anjaan kyun ban rahin hain?

Swati:Aap chinta na karen ve dono ab bade ho gayen hain,apni zimmedari samajhte hain,pooja se pehle ve a jayenge.

AV:Unke liye yahi achcha hoga verna aaj hum unko koi bohat badi saja de denge.

On the rare side of the palace two boys rush to the palace walls,hold the rope which was tied to its window and slowly climb up.

Dharam:Veer aaj to hum dono hi marange.Pata nahi pitaji kitne naaraj honge hum par.ye sab tumhare kaaran

Veer:Mere kaaran?mana ki bahar jaane ki zidd maine ki thi par ek bade bhai hone ke nate tumhe mujhe rokna tha na!

Dharam:Roka to tha par tum maane kahaan?

Veer:Theek hai,theek hai,pitaji ke samne main apni galti maan loonga.

Dharam:nahi galti humari bhi hai hum dono ko saja milni chahiye.

Veer:Kisi tarah maa ko mana le to shayad jaan bach jate.

Dharam:Ab galti ki hai to saja to bhugatni hi hogi naa.

Veer:Hey bhagawaan!Kaisa satyavaadi hai mersa bhai!!!(mutters and then speaks)Aap jaisa kahenge vaisa hi hoga Dharam bhaiyaaaaaa......

Dharam:Bhaiya nahi sirf dharam kaho.(he hated when v called him bhaiya,it made him feel more guilty in such situations and veer knew that.)

At last they jumped through the window and enterd the room.

Dharam:Bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukra hai ki hum sahi smaya tak pahunch gaye.varna aaj to hume....Veer was staring at something and not at all paying attention to dharam's word.

Dharam:Veer kya hua?

Veer:sh..sh...

and pointed his finger to the direction of his glare ..

hope u like it,plz give ur suggestions,comments(gud or bad)and sum gud names for the lead heroines.Smile

pretty_mugdha2008-08-02 00:32:12

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Comments (11)

hey i loved ure trt is realli good rite the next prt soon loved the names u chose relli nice ones

16 years ago

that was fab do conti nuw i think the name of dharam's opp would be raajkumari kiran and for veer's raajumari aditi means (moother or gods) or akuti means (princess) or anahita means (graceful) ok chose bye

16 years ago

nyyce...ereaali nyce luved it.~~ welll.weel.. i muss say ew have put a good pinch of humour.. plzz continuee... film aabhi baaki he!!

16 years ago

gud starting sorry cant choose names, all are gud actually me also making a ff, will post it next week

16 years ago

gd start plz continue soon!

16 years ago

I LOVED part 1 pretty mughda... I liked the way u described the decoration of the palace n DV arguing EAGERLY waiting for part 2.. When will u post ?

16 years ago

its very nice !!!!!!!keeep going dharam bhaiyaa wa stooo cute!!!!!!!

16 years ago

nice begning, good job continue plz

16 years ago

wow!!great start seems interesting ... pls do continue...i will try to give u some good name for lead heroines

16 years ago

ohh.. its good. continue it please

16 years ago

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