Chapter 31

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Part 30-LAST PART!
Recap:prerna informed kashish that they were left for just 1 day in shimla...kashish n sujal start their plan n manage to reunite Prerna Kumkum Tulsi and veena.....n they all bless SK for bringin them bak together....

Both the bhabhi's n Sujal kashish sit ina coffeee shop n think of what to do next...n hw to bring Sumit n Anurag together...
Sujal:hum sab log toh saath hai par ab sabse mushkil hai anu bhaiya aur sumeet bhaiya ko milana...woh kabhi nahi maanenge...
Kashish:haan un dono ke andar ek dusre ke liye bahut nafrat hai...woh toh shayada humari baat sunenge bhi nahi
Prerna:nahi kashish....main jaanti hoon anu ko...woh aaj bhi sumeet ko...utna hi pyaar karte hai jitna pehle karte the....eoh kabhi batayenge nahi...par woh sumeet ki dosti ki utni hi izzat karte hai...bhale woh khud sumeet ko jo kahe par agar koi aur sumeet ko kuch kehde toh unse bardaasht nahi hota
Kumkum:aur sumeet...woh toh anurag ko aaj bhi galat nahi maante...jab bhi papa anurag ya mihir uncle ke baare mein kuch kehte hai...toh sumeet ya toh wahan se chala jaata hai ya phir woh baat badal deta hai...sumeet kabhi yeh manne ko tayaar nahi tha ki galti anurag ki hai....usse humesha se aisa hi laga ki yeh ek galat fehmi
Kashish:toh bhabhi agar yeh dono ko ek dusre par itna vishwas hai toh in dono ne lalit dad ko kuch kaha kyun nahi?
Kumkum:sumeet ne kitni baar koshish ki par papa ka gussa...papa kabhi bhi unki bata nah sunte the
Prerna:aur anu papa ki maut ke baad...phir se koi problem nahi khadi karna chahta isliye usne bhi shant rehna hi sahi samjha
Sujal:toh iska matlab....yahan koi prob hi nahi hai...humein bas...in dono ko ek saath lana hoga...perena aur kumkum bhabhi ap in dono ko phone karke abhi yahan bula lo


Prerna n Kumkum call up Anurag n sumeet n both of come there...wondering wat had happened....they reach there to fnd prerna n kumkum sitting together...they both see each other n then look away n wak towrds prerna n kumkum
Anurag:tum yahan??...aur mujhe yahan kyun bulaya prerna...
Kumkum:anurag bhaiya...apko maine yahan bulaya hai...
Sumeet:kumkum tumne
Prerna:haan aur maine apko bulaya hai sumeet bhaiya...kyaa aaj hum dono ke liye ap dono apni duiryon ko mita nahi sakte...
Kumkum:humari khatir...humare pariwaron ki khatir...apne pyaar ko jo apne dono ne apne andar itne saal chupa ke rakha hai usse zahir nahi kar sakte...
Prerna:ap dono ne kabhi ek dusre ko humari paiwar ki ladayi ke liye...zimmedar nahi samjha...toh kyun yeh dorriyan...
Anurag:prerna tum jaanti ho yeh mumkin nahi hai...agar humne aisa kuch bhi kiya jiski wajah se maa ko dukh ho...toh humein woh nahi karna chahiye
Sumeet:anurag sahi keh rahe hai...hum maante hai...ki humare dil mein ek dusre ke liye koi galat fehmi nahi hai...par hum apne pariwaron ko dukhi nahi karna chahti
Kumkum:lekin agar ismein humari pariwaron ki mazri ho toh
Sumeet:kya...main samjha nahi

Kashish:matlab yeh bhaiya..ki tulsi maa aur veena maa ne bhi ab apni saari galat fehmi mita di hai

And SK enter frm behind
Anurag smiles:kya sach mein...
Prerna:haan anu...aur mumma bhi yehi chahti hai ki yeh pariwar phir ek hojaye
Kumkum:haan sumeet...
Sumeet:yeh toh bahut achhi baat hai...
Anurag:haan sach mein...[he walks to sumeet] sumeet mujhe maaf karna
Sumeet:nahi aunrag tum maafi kyun maang rahe ho galti toh papa ki ha...galatfehmi toh unhe hui thi...maafi toh mujhe maangn chahiye
Anurag:nahi sumeet galti tumhari bhi nahi hai...shayad yeh humari kismat mein tha...par main aaj bahut khush hoon ki yeh saari galatfehmi door hogayi hai...
n both of them share a brotherly hug...

In garewal house....
Lalit enters home in the evening after meeting some of his frnds....to find no1 in the house...he keeps shoutin for veena n kumkum but no replies...n then ramu kaka comes n tells him that no1 was at home...Lalit is too confused as to whr did evry1 go suddenly ...but ignorin all his confusions he goes to his room to rest...n there he finds...his entire room covered with pics of mihir n his frndshp says...n then their families together n then in the cntre there wasa pic of mihir'r with a garland on it...Lalit looked around the entire room surprised...n then each pic seemed to be talkin to him of their old days..he could hear voices of mihir n him talking n then his eyes finally fall on the centre pic.... the pic which showed him that everythin was over...n tears filled his eyes...remembering all those memories ...memories of those days when they were best frnds...mihir laughin face suddenly comes in front of him...n then he sees mihir smiling at him...walking towrads him n telling him..."Lalit agar mujhe kabhi bhi kuch hogaya toh ....mujhe pooora yakeen hai tum mere pariwaar ka bahut khayal rakhoge....aur unki aankhon mein kabhi aanson nahi aane doge...mujhe tumhe poora vishwas hai mere dost"
Lalit suddenly feels a feeling of guilt enter him....n he breaks dwn completely crying....he falls down crying n asks mihir for forgiveness"mujhe maaf kardena mihir...maine tumhari iccha poori nahi ki...maine tumhare pariwaar ko bahut dukh diya...main tumhara guehgaar hoon meredost...maaf kardena mujhe"

meanwhile...sujal sumeet n anurag come running to him seeing him breakdwn lke that....they try to console lalit while he just keeps saying"main mihir ka gunehgaar hoon" again n again n again...sujal gives him some water n tries to console him syaing"nahi papa ..." but lalit feels very guilty...they make him sit on the sofa...n try to relax him when anurag comes to him n says..."nahi uncle...apki koi galti nahi...galti toh us samay aur un halat ki thi...par ab sab theek hai uncle....apki koi galti nahi"
Lalit:mujhe maaf kardena beta maine tumhare pariwaar ko bahut dukh diye hai...sab meri galti hai
Anurag hugs lalit n keeps telling"nahi uncle apki koi galti nahi...bas ab humein apna lijiye aur in do pariwaron ko phirse ek kar dijiye..."
Lalit:lekin woh kaise beta..kya bhabhi mujhe maaf karegi

Tulsi:maafi kis baat ki bhaisahab..galti toh hum sabki hai..jo humne ek doosrre par vishwas nah kya
tulsi enters frm the door with veena prerna kumkum and kashish...
Lalit goes n joins hands in front of tulsi:mujhe maar karna bhabhi
Tulsi:nahi bhaisaab ap mujhe sahrminda mat kijiye.....bas ab meri ek baat maan lijiye
Lalit:haan bhabhi boliye na..
Tulsi:ek rishta jo humare parivaron ke jhagde ki wajah se adhura reh gaya tha..usse phir se jod dijiye
n she looks at sujal kashish...
Lalit:haan bbhabhi ap bilkul theek keh rahi hai...humne in do pyaar karne waalon ko alag karke...bahut badi bhool gayi..par aur nahi..ab humein inhe milana hai

n he goes to sujal kashsh n tells them.."mujhe maaf karna bachon maine tumhare pyaar ko samajhne mein bahut der kardi par ab aur nahi...tum dono ki shaadi ishi hafte hogi...
Tulsi:lekin itni jal;di tayariyan
Veena:offo tulsi hum sab hai na...hum sab milke tayariyan kardenge....tum toh bas ab apni beti ko bida karne ki tayari karo
sujal winks at her...kashish blushes...sujal points to kashish to meet him on the tearrace...kashish acts as if she dint understand him...n then sujal leaves away furiously n kashish follows...

Sujal sits on the swing on the terrace talkin to himself angrily:kitna attitude deti hai ladkiyan...kal raat ko mujhe phoen karke kkehti hai ki sujal mujhe apne saath le jao aur aaj...terrace pe ane ko bhav khaati hai...goshhh....bhagwan tumne in ladkiyon ko itna confusing kyun banaya

Kahish comes n hears all that sujal says n starts giggling...sujal hears someone giggling n turns around to see her standing there...n giggling
Sujal:aagayi tum..kyun kashish....tumhe aane ki kya zaroorat thi
Kashish:sujallll...[ n she walks towards him n sits beisde him takes his hand in hers n go] mujhse gussa ho?
Sujal:nahi toh...main kyun gussa honga
Kashish:sujalll...main toh bas tumhe tang kar rahi thi...acha chalo ab gussa chodo aur meri baat suno...[n she interlocks her fingers with his...n rests her head on his shoulders]sujal aaj kitna acha lag raha hai...sab kich theek hogaya...sab ek hogaye...ab hum kabhi alag nahi honge...humesha ek saath rahenge...kaash papa bhi yahan hote[ n a silent tear drops rm her eye]
Sujal[wipes that tear frm her face n goes] kisne kaha papa yahan nahi hai kashish..mihir papa humesha humare saath hi the...aur humesha rahenge...humare har lamhe mein woh humein dekh sakte hai...aur woh aaj jahan bhi hai bahut khush hai...kyunki aaj yeh do pariwar phir ek hogaye....aur phir kabh alag nahi hoyenge
Kashish:haan sujal...papa humesha humare saath hai...
Sujal:aur woh bhi apni beti ko kabhi rote hue nahi dekhna chahte...hum bas unke saath bitaaye ache lamhon ko yaad rakhenge aur apne jeevan mein sirf achi yaadein rakhenge...vada karo kashish
Kahish:yeh mera vaada hai sujal...ki main aaj ke baad apni zindagi ke har lamhe mein sirf aur sirf khushiyan hi bunoongi...aur yeh sab tumhari wajah se..i love u sujal...
Sujal: love u too kashish

And the moment was treasured forver n ever n ever....

the end...[well i couldve made the end more elaborate but i wanted it to be a very simple scene sumthin wich we can relate to...n hence this scene]

hope u guys liked my story....thanks to all the writers who read n apprecaiated my story...thanku soo much....

love ya loads,
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Comments (10)

cute_samrah wrote: mindblowing story....................awesome thanks a ton sweety...for readin my story

16 years ago

Iqbal Neha1 wrote:
great ending i liked the way u got all the members back together and finally all their misunderstandings are cleared the last scene was beautifully written thanks a ton sweety..glad u lked it....

16 years ago

monikaseth wrote:
awesome ending but why soooo sooon thoda aur pyar dekhna tha . i love it . naye jaldi likhooooo
thanks sweety...4 readin n likin my story so far

16 years ago

mindblowing story....................awesome

16 years ago

great ending i liked the way u got all the members back together and finally all their misunderstandings are cleared the last scene was beautifully written

16 years ago

awesome ending but why soooo sooon thoda aur pyar dekhna tha . i love it . naye jaldi likhooooo

16 years ago

goodkahish wrote:
hey what a beautiful ending. ........just perfact a big happy family ...........i am so glad that sujal and kashish are one now........but i am so disappointed that you didnt invite us for the wedding ...........but anyways.........a very beautiful story.. ........we wish to read some more greatful love stories from you about Sujal and Kashish because you now how much i love them ......you are a very good writer with lots of feelings in your story ........one thing i love about this story is how much importance they gave to their family and love at same time........this story gives a really beautiful message to all readers that you have to have love and family in your life to become happier everyday.........i just love it ......congreats for completing this story ..........ple ple ple come up with a new sk story...it is special request from me........bcoz we dont want them to disapper.....so we all need to work on it........thanks....bye......take care love kashish
aww that was arela big n sweet sweet comment...thanks a ton sweety....glad u liked it....well i cant assure u abt another story at present...but lets see wat happens in future

16 years ago

hey what a beautiful ending. ........just perfact a big happy family ...........i am so glad that sujal and kashish are one now........but i am so disappointed that you didnt invite us for the wedding ...........but anyways.........a very beautiful story.. ........we wish to read some more greatful love stories from you about Sujal and Kashish because you now how much i love them ......you are a very good writer with lots of feelings in your story ........one thing i love about this story is how much importance they gave to their family and love at same time........this story gives a really beautiful message to all readers that you have to have love and family in your life to become happier everyday.........i just love it ......congreats for completing this story ..........ple ple ple come up with a new sk story...it is special request from me........bcoz we dont want them to disapper.....so we all need to work on it........thanks....bye......take care love kashish goodkashish39614.4478356481

16 years ago

janu_2006 wrote: hey kimmy lovely ending.... thanks a ton janu...

16 years ago

hey kimmy lovely ending....

16 years ago

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